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1、智课网GM料AT备考资范文赏析GMAT满分作文揭秘-智课教育范文赏析GMAT满分作文揭秘Thefollowingappearedaspartofanarticleinadaily newspaper:"Mostcompanieswouldagreethatastheriskofphysical injuryoccurringonthejobincreases,thewagespaidto employeesshouldalsoincrease.Henceitmakesfinancialsense foremployerstomaket
2、heworkplacesafer:theycouldthus reducetheirpayrollexpensesandsavemoney."Discusshowwellreasonedyoufindthisargument.Inyour discussionbesuretoanalyzethelineofreasoningandtheuseof evidenceintheargument.Forexample,youmayneedto considerwhatquestionableassumptionsunderliethethi
3、nking andwhatalternativeexplanationsorcounterexamplesmight weakentheconclusion.Youcanalsodiscusswhatsortof evidencewouldstrengthenorrefutetheargument,what changesintheargumentwouldmakeitmorelogicallysound, andwhat,ifanything,wouldhelpyoubetterevaluateits conclusion.首段Th
4、isargumentstatesthatitmakesfinancialsensefor employerstomaketheworkplacesaferbecausebymakingthe workplacesaferthenlowerwagescouldbepaidtoemployees. Thisconclusionisbasedonthepremisethatasthelistof physicalinjuryincreases,thewagespaidtoemployeesshould alsoincrease.Howeve
5、r,thereareseveralassumptionsthatmay notnecessarilyapplytothisargument.Forexample,thecosts associatedwithmakingtheworkplacesafemustoutweighthe increasedpayrollexpensesduetohazardousconditions.Also, onemustlookattheplausabilityofimprovingthework environment.Andfinally,bec
6、ausemostcompaniesagreethatastheriskofinjuryincreasessowillwagesdoesn'tnecessarilymean thattheallcompanieswhichhavehazardousworkenvironments agree.中间段1Thefirstissuetobeaddressediswhetherincreasedlabor costsjustifylargecapitalexpenditurestoimprovethework environment.Clear
7、lyonecouldarguethatifmakingthe workplacesafewouldcostanexorbitantamountofmoneyin comparisontoleavingtheworkplaceasisandpayingslightly increasedwagesthanitwouldnotmakesensetoimprovethe workenvironment.Forexample,ifmakingtheworkplacesafe wouldcost$100millionversusaddition
8、alpayrollexpensesof only$5,000peryear,itwouldmakefinancialsensetosimplypay theincreasedwages.Nobusinessorbusin
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