小学六年级同步英语作文

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1、小学六年级同步英语作文　　Myrabbits　　Ihavetwolovelyrabbits.Eachofthemhasgotaroundhead,roundeyes,longears,shortlegsandasmalltail.　　Oneiswhite,andtheotherisbrown.Theyliketoeatvegetables,andtheyliketoeatthefoodonmyhands.Wearegoodfriends.Ilovemyrabbits.　　六（3）代昂　　Mr.Guo点评：短短的几句描述，就把两只可爱活泼的小兔展现

2、在我们面前。希望代昂同学能再接再励，写出更好的文章来。　　Myfather　　Myfatherisforty-threeyearsold.Heisateacher.Heworksveryhard.Healwayswearsayellowcoatandapairofbluetrousers.Helikedoingsportsandhelikesbasketballbest.　　Myfatherlovesmeverymuch.Hecheeksmyhomeworkeveryday.Heoftenbuysdeliciousfoodforme.Onweek

3、endsweoftengototheparkwithmymother.Ilovemyfather.　　　　六（4）祖宣　　Mr.Guo点评：祖宣同学的这篇小作文熟练使用了一般现在时态中的第三人称单数用法，行文流畅，字里行间流露出对父亲的尊敬和喜爱。　　Ahappyday　　YesterdaywasSunday.Myfather,mymotherandIwentshopping.　　First,wewenttothesupermarketonfoot.Weboughtsomepineapplesandorangesthere.Mymotherbou

4、ghtaniceT-shirtforme.Itisyellowandwhite.Ilikeitverymuch.Thenwewenttotheweresomanykindsofbooks.IboughtthreeEnglishstorybooks.Afterthatwewenthomebybus.　　Whatahappyday!　　六（4）刘蔚　　Mycat　　Ilikeanimalsverymuch.ButIlikecatsbest.HernameisMimi.Sheisverylovely.Shehasasmallblacknoseandal

5、ongtail.Herlegsareshort.WhenIgethome,Shealwayswagshertailandwalksuptome.Whenshefeelshungry,shemeowsloudly.Nowshe`sveryfat.　　Ilovemylittlecatverymuch.　　六（1）郭佳蒙　　Mr.Guo点评：简洁流畅的语言向大家描述了一只讨人喜爱的小猫。　　Mr.Chocolate　　Hi,I`mMr.Chocolate.Doyoulikeme?Iusuallywearablackandwhitedress.Looka

6、tme,amIbeautiful?I`mverysweet,somanychildrenlikeme.Ihopewecanbecomegoodfrends!Oh,it`stimetogotomustgo.Goodbye!六（3）姜小蒙　　Mr.Guo点评：本篇文章字数不多，但作者用其丰富的想像力和拟人的修辞手法把一块巧克力描绘的生动形象，郭老师要给小蒙同学一个Excellent!要继续努力呦！　　Myfamily　　Ihaveahappyfamily.Inmyfamilytherearefourpeople.Theyaremyfather,mym

7、other,mybrotherandI.Myfatherisabusinessman.Mymotherisafarmer.MybrotherandIarestudents.I’mthirteenyearsold.I’minClassOne,GradeSix.MybrotherisinClassTwo,GradeFour.Wehelpeachother,weloveeachother.