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1、读写任务写作技巧训练LearntowritethetopicsentenceofeachparagraphPart1学生作文点评2011年茂名一模读写任务InChina,people,especiallyyoungsters,arebecomingmoreandmoreconsciousoftheirlooksandarewillingtogotogreatlengthstomakethemselveslookmoreattactive.Plasticsurgery(外科医生)isbecomingpopularwithyoungpeople.DingXiaobang,aplasticsurge

2、onatthePekingUnionMedicalCollegeHospital,saidthatinthepastdecade,hehadseenagrowingnumberofpatients,whowereyoungandnaturallygoodlookingbecausetheyseeplasticsurgeyasthekeytolove,wealthandsuccess.Butjustafewdaysago,ittookthelifeofapopsingerinChina.WangBei,24,aformersingeronSuperGirl,diedonNov.15duringp

3、lasticsurgeryinWuhan,Hubeiprovince.Theyoungsinger’sjawsuddenlystartedbleedingduringtheprocedure,blockingherthroatandcausinghertosuffocate(窒息而死).Wang’sdeathhasraisedconcernsaboutthedangersofplasticsurgeryinChina.TheMinistryofHealthsteppedinonNov27,callingonhealthauthoritiesalloverChinatoincreasesuper

4、visionofthecountry’smedicalplasticsurgeryindustry.ItalsotoldtheHubeihealthdepartmenttolookintoWang’sdeathand“tomaketheresultsoftheinvestigationpublicassoosaspossible”.[写作内容]1.以约30个词概括这段短文的内容。2.然后以120词就“Thepriceofbeauty”为题进行议论，内容包括：（1）分析中国整容手术的现状及青少年进行整容手术的原因。（2）分析整容手术带来的危害。（3）你认为怎样对待自己的外貌。5Part2主题句模

5、式常用词组：inmyview…模式1.______________________Model:假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应？（2009广东高考读写任务要点2）IfIwereananimalinthewildlifepark,Icouldfeelannoyedwhenpeoplekeepphotographingme.Ex.你理想中的大学生活是什么样的？模式2.________________________Model:你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。(2009年广东高考读写任务要点3)Ibelievethattakingphotoswithanimalsshouldbebanne

6、d.Discussion:表示支持或赞同的句型：Iapproveoftheideathat……表示反对或不赞同的句型：Idisapproveoftheideathat……Ex.你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法。(2010年广东高考读写任务要点1)模式3.________________________Model:在生活中谅解他人有何重要意义FromthestoryIlearnthatunderstandingandforgivingothersplaysanimportantroleinourlife.词组积累:…有何重要意义…有何影响…有何密切联系…有何危害…有何不同Ex.中学生活和大学生活的差

7、别(2008高考读写任务要点3)模式4._________________Model.你认为使我们生活发生变化有哪些原因？Therearethreereasonsforthechangesthathavetakenplaceinourlife.5Discussion:常用句型：Myviewsarebasedonthefollwingreasons.…Ex.你支持青少年的秘密应该与父母分享的理由是什