2013专四预测作文范文90

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1、2013专四写作预测终极版本1题目：WorkWhileStudy写作要求Insomecountries,teenagershavejobswhiletheyarestillstudents.Doyouthinkthisisagoodidea?Supportyouropinionbyusingspecificreasonsanddetails.审题思路本题是一道观点选择型A/B的题目，论述在校青少年打工是否适合，本题可以从以下两方面入手：思路1：青少年应该打工虽然打工会占用他们的时间，但也可以为他们带来好处：1……2……3

2、……思路2：青少年不应该打工虽然打工会有一定的益处，但是弊端更多：1……2……3……范文赏析WorkWhileStudyInmanycountriesitiscommonforteenagerstotakepart-timejobswhiletheyarestillinhighschool,whileinothersocietiesthisisvirtuallyunheardof.nmyopinion,studentsbenefitmorefromamorebalancedlifestyle,whichmayinclud

3、eworkingatapart-timejob.Therefore,Ibelievethatitisagoodideaforstudentstoworkwhilestudying.引言部分：作者先提出这个争议的话题，并开门见山地亮出自己的观点：青少年打工是有益的。Whileitistruethatastudent’smostimportantgoalmustbetolearnandtodowellathisstudies,itdoesnotneedtobetheonlygoal.Infact,alifewhichcon

4、sistsofonlystudyisnotbalancedandmaycausethestudenttomissoutonothervaluablelearningexperiences.Inadditiontobringingmorebalancetoastudent’slife,part-timeworkcanbroadenhisrangeofexperience.Hewillhavetheopportunitytomeetpeoplefromallwalksoflifeandwillbefacedwith8awi

5、dervarietyofproblemstosolve.Furthermore,workhelpsastudenttogood,noloosening.6.5.2DCSsidewiringtocompletetheenclosureandtheothersideafterthewiringiscompleted,DCSwithintheenclosurewhenthepowermoduleshouldbeloosenedorthepowergoesout.6.6lowvoltagecableterminalmaking

6、6.6.1first15developgreaterindependence,andearninghisownpocketmoneycanteachhimhowtohandlehisfinances.Finally,apart-timejobcanhelpastudenttodevelopagreatersenseofresponsibility,bothforhisownworkandforthatoftheteamheworkswith.主体部分：作者采取了欲扬先抑的做法：先肯定学生的主要任务是学习，然后驳斥那种把

7、学习当作学生惟一目标的观点，并列举了学生打工可以目标的观点，并列举了学生打工可以列举法的配合使用使作者的观点非常有说服力。Forallofthesereasons,Ifirmlybelievethatmoststudentswouldbenefitfromtakingapart-timejobwhiletheyareinhighschool.Ofcourse,theymustbecarefulnottoletittakeuptoomuchoftheirtimebecausestudyisstilltheirprimaryr

8、esponsibility.总结部分： 作者用forallofthesereasons做承上启下的连接，并再次重申自己的观点：只要不占用太多时间，打工是个益处多多的事情。亮点回放1. virtually:“几乎、实际上”；近义词有nearly，almost，practically，nearly和almost是常用词，virtual