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1、第21讲书面表达二经典精讲(下)题一：下面四幅图片描述的是李明和爷爷从养鸟到放鸟的一段经历。请根据图片所提供的信息以第三人称用英语写一篇短文。注意：①短文必须包括所有图片的主要内容，短文的内容要连贯、完整；②短文单词数：100左右（开头已给出的单词不计入单词总数）。题二：假定你是许晨，请根据下面的图画内容，叙述你和林昊上星期日外出时遇到的一件事。注意：1.写作必须用第一人称；2.词数在100左右。题三：请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50。题四：请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。InyourEnglishclass,yourteac
2、hershowsyouthefollowingpicture.You’reaskedtodescribethepictureandexplainhowyouunderstandit.参考词汇：cactus仙人掌（可数名词）第21讲书面表达二经典精讲(下)主讲教师：林斌北京八十中学英语高级教师题一：OneMondaymorning,LiMingandhisgrandpawerefeedingthebirdinthecage.Thebirdwasunhappythoughithadenoughfeedandwater.LiMingdidnotknoww
3、hy.Thenextmorningonhiswaytoschool,LiMingsawsomebirdsflyinginthesky.Thenbethoughtofthelonelybirdinthecage,Hedecidedtopersuadehisgrandpatosetthebirdfree.Whenhegothome,hesaidtohisgrandpa,“Birdsalsoneedfriends!”Tohisdelight,hisgrandpaagreed.Thebirdwassetfree.Grandpaandthechildrenw
4、ereveryhappytoseethebirdflyingawayintothesky.点评：本文有如下的优点：叙述完整，包括了所有的要点；语言简明，过渡自然，结构紧凑，行文流畅。题二：LastSundaymyclassmate,LinHao,andIwenttothebookstore.Atacounterwenoticedthataforeignerwasaskingamanforhelp,butthemandidn’tknowawordofEnglish.Sowewentuptohimandofferedhelp.Afterknowingw
5、hathereallywanted,wetookhimtothecounterwheretapesanddisksofChinesefolkmusicaresoldandgavehimsomeadviceonwhichtochoose.Withourhelp,theforeignguestgotsomemusictapes.Hegavehisheartythankstousandleft.Thoughittookussometimetohelphim,wewerehappyanyway.点评：本文包括了图中所有的情节并且符合记叙文的写作要求；本文使
6、用了较多的语法结构，使得文章的表达手段丰富多彩。如：Atacounterwenoticedthataforeignerwasaskingamanforhelp,butthemandidn’tknowawordofEnglish.（but连接的并列句，一个并列分句中含有that引导的宾语从句）；Afterknowingwhathereallywanted,wetookhimtothecounterwheretapesanddisksofChinesefolkmusicaresoldandgavehimsomeadviceonwhichtochoose
7、.（含有what引导的宾语从句，含有的定语从句，含有疑问词which+不定式作宾语）；Thoughittookussometimetohelphim,wewerehappyanyway.（含有though引导的让步状语从句）题三：Asisshowninthepicture,aboyisshoutingathisdad,wholooksupsetanddoesn’tknowwhattodowithhisson.Theirrelationshipseemsdifficult.Thepictureremindsmeofoneoftheproblemsth
8、atmanyfamilieswithteenagersface.Althoughitseemsthatthekiddoes
