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1、使文章富有表现力的手段:1、使用有难度的词汇;2、使用形容词修饰名词,用副词修饰动词或整个句子;3、使用被动语态;4、使用倒装句;(notonly...butalso...;only...)5、尽可能地使用名词,而不是习惯中的动词和形容词。绿化我们的城市第一段:近年来,随着工商业的迅猛发展,许多大城市中树木的数量大幅度降低。人们作出各种努力防止树木被砍伐,但是,认识到绿化城市也同样重要。普通版Recently,withthedevelopmentofbusinessesandindustries,moreandmoretr
2、eeshavedisappearedinbigcities.Wehavetriedourbesttopreventpeoplefromcuttingtrees.But,itisimportanttorealizetomakeourcitiesgreen.润色版Incontemporarysociety,whileourindustriesandbusinesseshaveexperienceda(n)rapid/fast/amazing/marked/fantasticdevelopment,thenumberoftree
3、sinmanylargecitieshasdeclined/decreased/reducedsharply/dramatically.Althoughremarkableeffortshavebeenexertedtopreventmoretreesfrombeingcut,therealizationofmakingcitiesgreenerisstillofgreatimportance.注:区分industry和industrial绿化我们的城市(续)第二段:绿化城市会带来很多好处。其一,绿化城市能够净化空气。科学
4、研究已经证明树木通过吸收作用可以降低大气中碳化合物的含量。其二,它能够美化城市。到处是花草树木,我们会欣然地感到自己置身于美丽的花园中。最后,绿化城市能够带来大量木材,这是解决自然资源短缺的有效办法。普通版Therearemanyadvantagesinmakingcitiesgreener.First,itmakesourairclean.Scientificresearchhasprovedthattreescanreduceagreatamountofcarbondioxideintheatmospherethrou
5、ghabsorption.Second,itaddstothebeautyofourcities.Withtreesandflowerseverywhere,thereisapleasantfeelingthatweliveinabeautifulgardenandareclosertonature.Finally,itwillbringusalotoftimber.Andthisisaneffectivewaytosolvetheproblemoflackofnaturalresources.润色版Whatbenefit
6、scantheprogramofmakingcitiesgreenerbringtous?First,theairwillbecleaner.Scientificexperimentshavealreadyprovedthattreescanreduceairpollutionbyproducingalotofoxygen.Thiswillimprovethequalityoftheurbanenvironment.Second,ourcitieswilllookmorebeautiful.Justimaginetheci
7、tywhichisfulloftreesandflowers.Whatanattractivegardenitis!What’smore,bymakingcitiesgreener,wecanprovideourindustrywithtimberthepreciousnaturalresources.绿化我们的城市(续)第三段:绿化城市需要全国人民共同努力,人们不仅要广泛认识到城市绿化对城市环境的贡献,还应该同心协力栽植更多的树木并保护它们不受商业使用的侵犯。普通版Makingcitiesgreenerrequiresp
8、eople’seffortsalloverthecountry.Andpeopleshouldnotonlyrealizethatitisimportanttomakecitiesgreenerforitscontributiontourbanenvironment,butalsoplanttreesa
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