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1、CollegeStudents’JobHunting大学生就业问题Inrecentyears,collegestudentsfinditincreasinglydifficulttogetajob.Itsoundsstrangesinceyoungcollegestudentsareusuallyintelligent,well-educatedphenomenon,aspirantandeagertobringtheirtalentintofullplay.Thenwhatunderliesthestrangephenomenon?Therea
2、reseveralreasonsforthis.Tobeginwith,nowadayscollegestudentsaimtoohigh.Alltheywantare“good”jobswhichcouldoffergoodsalary,comfortableworkingconditions,highsocialstatusamongothers.Consequently,mostcollegestudentsareunwillingtoacceptvacantjobstheyconsidernot“good”enough.Anotherre
3、asonisthatthereisabiggapbetweenthemajorssomestudentsstudyinschoolandthedemandsofvacantjobs.Socompaniesthinksomestudentsarenotfitforthejobs.表示列举的连词:first,second,third…;firstly,secondly,thirdly…;first,next,then…;inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace…;foronething,foranotherthing…;tob
4、eginwith,what’smore,toconclude/Tosumup…表示原因的连词:because,since,as,nowthat…表示结果的连词:so,therefore,thus,hence,accordingly,consequently,asaresult表示对照的连词:onthecontrary,incontrast,bycontrast,incomparison,bycomparison,conversely表示让步和转折的连词:however,nevertheless,nonetheless,still,though,y
5、et,inspiteof,atanyrate,inanycase,whoever,whatever表示时间顺序的连词:when,while,as,after,before,since,until,assoonas,once表示目的的连词:sothat,inorderthat表示总结的连词:Inaword,Insum,Inconclusion…EducationPays(2012.12真题)Theabovebarchartclearlyshowsuseducationpaysin2010.Weseethatunemploymentrateoftho
6、sewithhighereducationbackgroundismuchlowerthanthosewithlowereducationdegree.Forinstance,theunemploymentrateofcollegestudentswithnodegreeisashighas14.9%whilethatofthosewithdoctoraldegreeisonly1.9%.(图表作文第一段第一句先介绍图表主题,第二句说明数据所呈现的特点/趋势,第3,4句引用两个数据来说明这一特点,切勿将所用数据例出,且数据表达方法正确)Thefo
7、llowingreason,inmyopinion,isthemostimportantonetoaccountforthisphenomenon.Comparedwiththosewithcomparativelylowereducationdegree,peoplewhohavereceivedhighereducationpossessconsiderablywiderknowledge,moreremarkablelearningandresearchability,greaterinnovationandmostofall,resour
8、cefulsocialnetwork,allofwhichmakethemmorequalifiedandcompetentforthe