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1、CollegeStudents’JobHunting大学生就业问题Inrecentyears,collegestudentsfinditincreasinglydifficulttogetajob.Itsoundsstrangesinceyoungcollegestudentsareusuallyintelligent,well-educatedphenomenon,aspirantandeagertobringtheirtalentintofullplay.Thenwhatunderliesthestrangephenomenon?Thereare
2、severalreasonsforthis.Tobeginwith,nowadayscollegestudentsaimtoohigh.Alltheywantare“good”jobswhichcouldoffergoodsalary,comfortableworkingconditions,highsocialstatusamongothers.Consequently,mostcollegestudentsareunwillingtoacceptvacantjobstheyconsidernot“good”enough.Anotherreason
3、isthatthereisabiggapbetweenthemajorssomestudentsstudyinschoolandthedemandsofvacantjobs.Socompaniesthinksomestudentsarenotfitforthejobs.表示列举的连词：first,second,third…;firstly,secondly,thirdly…;first,next,then…;inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace…;foronething,foranotherthing…;tobeginwi
4、th,what’smore,toconclude/Tosumup…表示原因的连词：because,since,as,nowthat…表示结果的连词：so,therefore,thus,hence,accordingly,consequently,asaresult表示对照的连词：onthecontrary,incontrast,bycontrast,incomparison,bycomparison,conversely表示让步和转折的连词：however,nevertheless,nonetheless,still,though,yet,inspi
5、teof,atanyrate,inanycase,whoever,whatever表示时间顺序的连词：when,while,as,after,before,since,until,assoonas,once表示目的的连词：sothat,inorderthat表示总结的连词：Inaword,Insum,Inconclusion…EducationPays（2012.12真题）Theabovebarchartclearlyshowsuseducationpaysin2010.Weseethatunemploymentrateofthosewithhigh
6、ereducationbackgroundismuchlowerthanthosewithlowereducationdegree.Forinstance,theunemploymentrateofcollegestudentswithnodegreeisashighas14.9%whilethatofthosewithdoctoraldegreeisonly1.9%.（图表作文第一段第一句先介绍图表主题，第二句说明数据所呈现的特点/趋势，第3，4句引用两个数据来说明这一特点，切勿将所用数据例出，且数据表达方法正确）Thefollowingreaso
7、n,inmyopinion,isthemostimportantonetoaccountforthisphenomenon.Comparedwiththosewithcomparativelylowereducationdegree,peoplewhohavereceivedhighereducationpossessconsiderablywiderknowledge,moreremarkablelearningandresearchability,greaterinnovationandmostofall,resourcefulsocialnet
8、work,allofwhichmakethemmorequalifiedandcompetentforthe
