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1、例题1(文字题)Thestaffatyourcompanywererecentlyaskedwhattheythoughtaboutworkingconditions.Yourlinemanagerhasaskedyoutowriteareportsummarizingtheiropinionsandsuggestingpossibleimprovements.Lookattheinformationbelow,onwhichyouhavealreadymadesomehandwrittennotes.Then,usingallyourhandwrittennot
2、es,writeyourreport.Write120-140words.betterproductivityIknowyourhadameetingwithstaffrecently.Canyourwriteareporttellingmewhatstaffthoughtaboutworkingconditions,whatchangescanbemade,andhowthecompanywillbenefitfromimprovingconditions?Meetingwithemployeesaboutworkingconditionsgiveanexamp
3、leStaffhadsomegoodthingstosaybuttheyalsomentionedtheseproblems:explainwhyneededltheneedformoreflexibleworkinghourslpoorconditionofsomeofficeareassaywhatbiggestproblemisltoolittlepaidholidaysuggestasolutionSample1Reporton:StaffopinionaboutworkingconditionsThisreportaimstosummarizethere
4、sultsofthelaststaffmeeting.FindingsFirst,mostoftheemployeesarereallysatisfiedwiththenewsmokingpolicy.Buttherearealsosomeproblems.Duetothefactthatmanyemployeeshavetocareforchildrentheywouldratherpreferflexibleworkinghours.Furthermoresomeofficeareasareinapoorcondition,mostimportantistha
5、tafewofthemdonothavesunlightattheirworkplace.Thereisalsoaproblemwiththepaymentwhengoingonholiday,whichistoolessforourworkers.ConclusionInconclusiontheopinionsaboutthistopicaremuchbettercomparedwithlastyear,butthereisstillalottodo.Recommendation:Itissuggestedtocreateabonussystemforincr
6、easingholidaypaymentandnotofleasttoincreaseproductivity.Band3Allthecontentpointsarecoveredanddespiteanumberorlanguageerrors,themessageisclearlyconveyed.Thereporthasbeenorganisedintosections,althoughattimesparagraphingisinneedofattention.Sample2Reportonsatisfaction-levelofstaffmembersI
7、ntroductionThisreportaimstoshowweatherourstaffmembersaresatisfiedwiththeirworkingconditionsornot.FindingsTherecentmeetingshowsclearlythatourstaffisquitesatisfiedwiththeworkingconditions.Especially,alotofthemhavepraisedourpensionschemeandourchildcarevouchers.Nevertheless,somecomplained
8、about
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