BEC 商务报告模板

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1、例题1（文字题）Thestaffatyourcompanywererecentlyaskedwhattheythoughtaboutworkingconditions.Yourlinemanagerhasaskedyoutowriteareportsummarizingtheiropinionsandsuggestingpossibleimprovements.Lookattheinformationbelow,onwhichyouhavealreadymadesomehandwrittennotes.Then,usingallyourhandwrittennotes,writeyourrep

2、ort.Write120-140words.betterproductivityIknowyourhadameetingwithstaffrecently.Canyourwriteareporttellingmewhatstaffthoughtaboutworkingconditions,whatchangescanbemade,andhowthecompanywillbenefitfromimprovingconditions?MeetingwithemployeesaboutworkingconditionsgiveanexampleStaffhadsomegoodthingstosayb

3、uttheyalsomentionedtheseproblems:explainwhyneededltheneedformoreflexibleworkinghourslpoorconditionofsomeofficeareassaywhatbiggestproblemisltoolittlepaidholidaysuggestasolutionSample1Reporton:StaffopinionaboutworkingconditionsThisreportaimstosummarizetheresultsofthelaststaffmeeting.FindingsFirst,most

4、oftheemployeesarereallysatisfiedwiththenewsmokingpolicy.Buttherearealsosomeproblems.Duetothefactthatmanyemployeeshavetocareforchildrentheywouldratherpreferflexibleworkinghours.Furthermoresomeofficeareasareinapoorcondition,mostimportantisthatafewofthemdonothavesunlightattheirworkplace.Thereisalsoapro

5、blemwiththepaymentwhengoingonholiday,whichistoolessforourworkers.ConclusionInconclusiontheopinionsaboutthistopicaremuchbettercomparedwithlastyear,butthereisstillalottodo.Recommendation:Itissuggestedtocreateabonussystemforincreasingholidaypaymentandnotofleasttoincreaseproductivity.Band3Allthecontentp

6、ointsarecoveredanddespiteanumberorlanguageerrors,themessageisclearlyconveyed.Thereporthasbeenorganisedintosections,althoughattimesparagraphingisinneedofattention.Sample2Reportonsatisfaction-levelofstaffmembersIntroductionThisreportaimstoshowweatherourstaffmembersaresatisfiedwiththeirworkingcondition

7、sornot.FindingsTherecentmeetingshowsclearlythatourstaffisquitesatisfiedwiththeworkingconditions.Especially,alotofthemhavepraisedourpensionschemeandourchildcarevouchers.Nevertheless,somecomplainedabout