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1、这篇作文是针对TPO第四套的综合写作(关于恐龙是否是恒温动物)写的,虽然有一些小错误,但ETS评分为满分。 SampleResponse Theprofessoractuallycontradictsthestatementsmadeinthepassage.Sheisoftheviewthatdinosaursarenotendothermsi.e.theywerenotabletokeeptheirbodytemperatureataconstantrate. Theprofessorcontradictstheissueofdinosaursbeing
2、endothersbasedontheavailabilityoffossilsbeingavailableinthwepolarregions,shesaythatthepolarregionsinthosedayswerenotascoldastheyaretodayi.eatleastwarmenoughfordinosaurstolive.Durinharshwintersshesaysthatthereisapossibilityofthedinosaursactuallymigratingtowarmerregions. Theissueoflegpo
3、sitionandmovementbeingusedasareasontoclasifythedinosaursasendothermsdoesnotpleasetheprofessoreither.Shesaysthatdinosaurshadlegsundertheirbodiestosupporttheirhugebodiesi.ethelegsunderthebodyofthedinosaurwereactuallytosupportthehugeweightofthedinosaurandnottoprovideitwithabodystructurelikee
4、ndotherms(whichisactuallysuitedforrunning). Theprofessoracknowledgesthepresenceofhaversiancanalsbutalsopointsoutthatthatthefossilsshowthepresenceofgrowthrings.Theseringsoccurduetothethickeningofthebone.Thethickeningindicatesthatthedinosaurswere'ntactuallygrowingcontinuouslybutwereexperi
5、encingperiodsofrapidgrowthandperiodsofnogrowthinsuccesion.Thispattern.shesaysischaracteristicofnonendothermicaanimals. Thusitcanbeinferredthattheprofessorchallengesthepassagebygivingreasonsastowhyshethinksthatthedinosaurisnotanendotherm. DescriptionofResponse: Despiteinitialappearan
6、ces,thisresponselargelysucceedsinclearlyandaccuratelypresentinghowthelecturepointstakeissuewiththepointsinthereadingpassagethatdinosaurswereendotherms.Thefirstpointregardingdinosaursinpolarregionscouldbeabitclearer.Otherwise,theresponsemainlysuffersfromtypographicalerrors,butthesearenotre
7、gardedasmajorproblems;itisobviousthatthewriterhasgoodcontrolofstructureandvocabularyandtheabilitytousethesetoconveyinanorganizedandlogicalmannerwhathasbeenunderstoodandasked. 我们并不主张考生死记范文,考试时如果遇到类似题目照搬上去,这并不能考察考生的写作能力。新托福考试写作多背一些范文,可以积累一些素材,像好的短语、词、句等,灵活运用。 3.No
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