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1、一：网络故事书（web－storybookservice）reading网络故事书的好处1.可以教小朋友读书2.经济实惠，家长不需要为孩子买书了3.可以代替父母陪伴孩子，为家长节省时间lecture反驳1.使用时不能和小朋友互动（askquestionandgetfeedback）2.网络上的故事都是过时的，要想读新故事还是要买书（不足）3.父母与孩子一起读书可以增进感情例文：Thespeakerrebutsthereading'sargumentbypointingouttheinadequacyoftheweb-storybookservices'interactionwith

2、children,theincompletenessofthedatapool,andbyunderminingtheassumptionthatsavingparents'readingtimeisabenefit.Thespeakerbeginsbystatingthatmerelypronouncingthewordsandstoryforthechildrenwillnotprovideadequatelearningexperiences.Despitethetimesavedandpronunciationutilitieslaidoutinthereading,the

3、webservicescanonlyrespondwith"correct"or"notcorrect".Thelackoffeedbacktochildren'squestionswillnotcreateaneffectivelearningprocess.Thenthespeakergoesontoarguethatthecurrentweb-storybookserviceshaveaverylimitedcollectionofbooks,thusnotbeingabletosaveparentsthecostofnewbooksasthereadingstates,be

4、causetheparentsstillhavetobuymanybooksthatthewebservicesdonotprovide.Lastly,thespeakerchallengesthevalidityoftheassumptionofsavingparents'timetoreadstoriestochildren.Thereadingarguesthatsavingthetimeisabenefitfortheparents,butthespeakermaintainsthatthewholepointofreadingstoriesisfarbeyondreadi

5、ngstoriesalone.Incontrast,itisanessentialwayofcommunicatingandbuildingrelationshipbetweenparentsandchildren.6二：药品广告（drugadvertisement）提出命题：药品广告所提供的信息都是客观全面的，且病人对药物了解得越多越好1.病人可以更多了解处方药的相关信息（information）2.医生开药时，病人可以与广告上进行比较，有利于选药3.通过广告，病人可以了解到新药的发展，提醒医生挑战命题：病人不需要对药物了解太多，因为有时候了解得太多会对非专业的病人产生困扰，而且

6、广告所提供的信息也不完整全面1.广告通常只有宣传好处，对副作用（sideeffects）一笔带过，病人很难判断2.病人对药物的准确用法用量不了解，可能会用错3.广告只宣传新药，对旧药没有宣传，但是针对不同的病情，也许旧药更为合适Thespeakerraisesseriouscounterargumentsagainstthereadingparagraphsbyprovidingdrasticallydifferentevidencesregardingtheeffectsoftheadvertisement,theimpactofself-selectingmedication,

7、andtheimpactoftrendsinthepharmaceuticalindustry.Firstly,knowingmoreinformationfromtheadswillnotnecessarilyhelpthepatientsmakebetter-informeddecisions,asthereadingargues.Onthecontrary,patients,withoutprofessionaltrainingandknowledge,will