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1、秋风清,秋月明,落叶聚还散,寒鸦栖复惊。一:药品广告(drugadvertisement)reading提出命题:药品广告所提供的信息都是客观全面的,且病人对药物了解得越多越好1.病人可以更多了解处方药的相关信息(information)2.医生开药时,病人可以与广告上进行比较,有利于选药3.通过广告,病人可以了解到新药的发展,提醒医生lecture挑战命题:病人不需要对药物了解太多,因为有时候了解得太多会对非专业的病人产生困扰,而且广告所提供的信息也不完整全面1.广告通常只有宣传好处,对副作用(sideeffects)一笔带过,病人很难判断2.病人对药物的准确用法用量不了解,可
2、能会用错3.广告只宣传新药,对旧药没有宣传,但是针对不同的病情,也许旧药更为合适(appropriate)例文:Thespeakerraisesseriouscounterargumentsagainstthereadingparagraphsbyprovidingdrasticallydifferentevidencesregardingtheeffectsoftheadvertisement,theimpactofself-selectingmedication,andtheimpactoftrendsinthepharmaceutical制药的industry.First,
3、knowingmoreinformationfromtheadswillnotnecessarilyhelpthepatientsmakebetter-informeddecisions,asthereadingargues.Onthecontrary,patients,withoutprofessionaltrainingandknowledge,willbemoresusceptible易受影响的tomisunderstandinginformation.Forexample,theywouldfocusonlyonthepositivesidesofacertainmedi
4、cinewhileignoringtheserioussideeffects.Inaddition,ifthepatientsbeartheresponsibilityofprescribing开药,吩咐用药theirownmedication,theyassumemoreresponsibilitytotheirownhealth.Thismakesdoctorslessliableforpotential潜在的risksandundesirableconsequences.Lastly,asforthenewtrends'benefitstothepatients,thesp
5、eakerdoesnotchallengethereadingdirectly.Instead,hearguesthatthenewmedicine,whichwillcountformostoftheadsmaynotnecessarilybethebestmedicine,eventhoughthepatientscaninformtheirdoctorsaboutthenewproducts.二:网络故事书(web-storybookservice)reading网络故事书的好处1.可以教小朋友读书2.经济实惠,家长不需要为孩子买书了3.可以代替父母陪伴孩子,为家长节省时间
6、lecture反驳1.使用时不能和小朋友互动(askquestionandgetfeedback)2.网络上的故事都是过时的,要想读新故事还是要买书(不足)3.父母与孩子一起读书可以增进感情例文:Thespeakerrebuts反驳thereading'sargumentbypointingouttheinadequacyoftheweb-storybookservices'interactionwithchildren,theincompletenessofthedatapool,andbyunderminingtheassumptionthatsavingparents're
7、adingtimeisabenefit.Thespeakerbeginsbystatingthatmerelypronouncingthewordsandstoryforthechildrenwillnotprovideadequatelearningexperiences.Despitethetimesavedandpronunciationutilitieslaidoutinthereading,thewebservicescanonlyrespondwith"correct