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1、关注儿童问题MoreConcernforChildrenIssue大学英语作文SupposeFudanistochoosethehottestneakersthroughpublicappraisalofthepastyear,tain.Stillbeingcontroversy,hoplifysometalentsaketheiroinaryacplishments.Thereisnoskepticismthatoursocietyisexperiencingaprofoundreformation.Asmostsociologist
2、sindicate,childrenareamoresensitiveandparticulargroupthatdeservesintensiveattention.Peoplereadilyenteextent,couldnotmaketheiroandadjusttothearrangement.paredtotheirpredecessors,presentfreedomandchoicesaremorereadilyavailabletochildren.Almosteverythingrangingfromeducation
3、tocareer,religiontomarriageisuptoone'sooreemphasisshouldbeattachedtocultivatingchildren'sabilitytomaketheiroakedecisions,thereemergesanotherproblemhoakethemefficiently.Creativityandtalentofchildrenarenotneorepronounced.Unfortunately,itfrequentlyhappensthatoneborntobemovi
4、estarayprobablyedayisexcludedinadramaclubinschool;aninnatebusinesseliteisdismissedonlyinthenameofviolatingtherulesbysellingChristmascardsoncampus;amoreuniversalstoryisthatthevastmajorityofchildrenaremerelyordinarypeopleposetheirvaluesofbeingsomeoneonachildeandgoingtomovi
5、esostinsomefield,healsopossessestherighttochoosehisorheroakingopportunities,butalsoinbeingoverlookedtheiressencechildren,meaningnaiveandcredulous.Itgrievesusthattherateofadolescentcrimeshasbeenspiralingcontinuously.Thenumberofteenagersinvolvedinillegalsex,violenthooligan
6、ismanddrugabuseisstillshockinglyspiraling.Somepeopleoftenboastthattheneareaisticanditishightimeesubstantialactionstocopeakers'job,buttheentiresociety'sresponsibility.Theongoingdebateconcerningchildrenainaneternaltopicandustcallonmoreconcernsto.Itisgenerallyacceptedthatth
7、echildrennoinefuturerivalsamongcountries.Consequently,itisandtoresolvethisproblem.简评本文开头比较新颖,不落俗套,从备受争议的少年作家韩寒为例子谈起,顺理成章地引出讨论的话题,显示了娴熟的写作技巧。的语言功底较好,词汇量比较丰富,在文中使用了许多大词,如elite,propensity,pacific等,给读者留下了深刻的印象。也大胆地尝试了较为复杂的句式和被动语态,使文体显得更为庄重严肃。当然,在大词和复杂句式的使用中难免存在少量这样那样的小毛病,如is
8、ticanditishightimeesubstantialactionstOcopewithit.这一句最好拆开成为独立的两句话,而不必为了延长句式而拼凑在一起。断句是中国英语学习者的一大常见问题。最常见
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