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1、08考研英语强化写作核心要点之评分标准及样卷Directions: Amongalltheankind,loveisprobablythenoblest,buteveryonehashis/herobolicmeaningofthepicturebelople,and 3)giveyoursuggestionastothebestplymeananattractiontoapersonoftheoppositesex,eaningoflove,bystressingthefactthatloveisemotionalstrength,atterhoanydifferentc
2、ultureshaveregardedloveasthenoblestofhumanemotions. Asanexampleofthepoemberhosofnaturaldisasterseveryyear.Althoughtheirinesarestilllooneyorgoods--tohelptheirneedyfelloselves. Inmyopinion,thebestoreunfortunatethanatterilymembersorpletestrangers.Inthisaketheorebrightlythelampofloveshines. 样
3、卷的评分和评语 Sample1,Sample2 给分：(17—20分) 评语：内容切题，包括题中所列三方面的全部内容；文章通顺，语言流畅，句式变化多样；用词面较宽；虽有个别不妥之处，但该生基本功较好；表达能力较强；长度符合要求。 Sample3,Sample4 给分：(13—16分) 评语：内容切题，包括题中所列三方面的全部内容；表达基本清楚，文字连贯；句式变化较多；结构与用词有少量一般性错误；长度符合要求。 Sample5,Sample6 给分：(9—12分) 评语：内容切题，包括题中所列三方面的全部内容；表达基本清楚；但结构与用词错误较多，有少数是严重错误
4、；长度符合要求。 Sample7,Sample8 给分：(5—8分) 评语：内容切题，包括题中所列要点；语句尚可理解，但结构与用词错误多；有些是严重错误；长度基本符合要求。 Sample9,Sample10 给分：(1—4分) 评语：与题意勉强有关，但条理不清，不成篇章；语句错误多且严重；词不达意。 (注：文章长度低于180个词扣1分，低于170个词扣2分，依次类推。) 1、Amongalltheankind,loveisprobablythenoblest.Itisoftheutmostimportancetothehumanbeings,Everybodyn
5、otonlyneedslove,butalsoshouldgivelove. Asisdescribedinthepicture,"loveisalamporelightthanordinarypeople.Mayeevenadimlightcangivethemmuchhopeforabetterlifeandprogress.Maybejus123456下一页［教育资源网］edu..，。tathreadoflighteoneisstarvingtodeath,justalittlefoodandyoumaysavehislife.Orallsumofmoneyfromyo
6、umaysupporthertofinishherschoolingandchangeherlife,youhavegivenlovepinadarkplaceostneeded. Sotosumup,othersandeoneindifficultyorindistressandinneedofhelp,don'thesitatetogiveyourlovetohim.Ibelievethentherelationshipbetoniousandoursocietyosttalkedabout.ThisistruenotonlyinChinabutalsoinotherco
7、untries.yhelppinadarkplace. Ithinkpinadarkplace,shoakethisoniousandpeacefulalllampinthepictureandaflameonthelamp,iling.Thelampsays,"Loveisalamp,itinneed,thentheple,inthecountryside.Therearemillionsofpupils,eofthemneverattendschool.Theyareunfortuna
