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1、08考研英语强化写作核心要点之评分标准及样卷Directions: Amongalltheankind,loveisprobablythenoblest,buteveryonehashis/herobolicmeaningofthepicturebelople,and 3)giveyoursuggestionastothebestplymeananattractiontoapersonoftheoppositesex,eaningoflove,bystressingthefactthatloveisemotionalstrength,atterhoanydifferentc
2、ultureshaveregardedloveasthenoblestofhumanemotions. Asanexampleofthepoemberhosofnaturaldisasterseveryyear.Althoughtheirinesarestilllooneyorgoods--tohelptheirneedyfelloselves. Inmyopinion,thebestoreunfortunatethanatterilymembersorpletestrangers.Inthisaketheorebrightlythelampofloveshines. 样
3、卷的评分和评语 Sample1,Sample2 给分:(17—20分) 评语:内容切题,包括题中所列三方面的全部内容;文章通顺,语言流畅,句式变化多样;用词面较宽;虽有个别不妥之处,但该生基本功较好;表达能力较强;长度符合要求。 Sample3,Sample4 给分:(13—16分) 评语:内容切题,包括题中所列三方面的全部内容;表达基本清楚,文字连贯;句式变化较多;结构与用词有少量一般性错误;长度符合要求。 Sample5,Sample6 给分:(9—12分) 评语:内容切题,包括题中所列三方面的全部内容;表达基本清楚;但结构与用词错误较多,有少数是严重错误
4、;长度符合要求。 Sample7,Sample8 给分:(5—8分) 评语:内容切题,包括题中所列要点;语句尚可理解,但结构与用词错误多;有些是严重错误;长度基本符合要求。 Sample9,Sample10 给分:(1—4分) 评语:与题意勉强有关,但条理不清,不成篇章;语句错误多且严重;词不达意。 (注:文章长度低于180个词扣1分,低于170个词扣2分,依次类推。) 1、Amongalltheankind,loveisprobablythenoblest.Itisoftheutmostimportancetothehumanbeings,Everybodyn
5、otonlyneedslove,butalsoshouldgivelove. Asisdescribedinthepicture,"loveisalamporelightthanordinarypeople.Mayeevenadimlightcangivethemmuchhopeforabetterlifeandprogress.Maybejus123456下一页[教育资源网]edu..,。tathreadoflighteoneisstarvingtodeath,justalittlefoodandyoumaysavehislife.Orallsumofmoneyfromyo
6、umaysupporthertofinishherschoolingandchangeherlife,youhavegivenlovepinadarkplaceostneeded. Sotosumup,othersandeoneindifficultyorindistressandinneedofhelp,don'thesitatetogiveyourlovetohim.Ibelievethentherelationshipbetoniousandoursocietyosttalkedabout.ThisistruenotonlyinChinabutalsoinotherco
7、untries.yhelppinadarkplace. Ithinkpinadarkplace,shoakethisoniousandpeacefulalllampinthepictureandaflameonthelamp,iling.Thelampsays,"Loveisalamp,itinneed,thentheple,inthecountryside.Therearemillionsofpupils,eofthemneverattendschool.Theyareunfortuna