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1、MyMostUnforgettableExperienceYourwritingOpeningparagraphBodyparagraphEndingparagraphSelf-check□Iwroteaboutonlyoneevent.□Ifollowedlogicalorder□IusedallKeyWords,KeyExpressionsandvocabularycorrectly.□Idouble-checkedspelling,grammarandpunctuation.Peer-reviewcheck□Isthepaperinteres
2、ting?Ifnot,howcoulditbeinteresting,forexample,givemoredetails?□Doesitmakesense?Ifnot,whatcouldthewriterdotomakeitbetter,forexample,betterfollowamorelogicalorder?□Doesitansweryourquestionsaboutthestudent’smostunforgettableevent?Ifnot,whatelsewouldyouliketoknow?□Didthestudentuse
3、KeyWords,KeyExpressionsandvocabularycorrectly?Ifnot,circleanymistakes.□Isthespelling,grammarandpunctuationcorrect?Circlewherethestudenthadproblems.□Doyouhaveanyothersuggestions?LiRan’swriting:MyMostUnforgettableExperienceIhadthemostunforgettableexperiencewhenIwas12yearsold.One
4、dayintheafternoon,Iwasridingbikewithfathernearmyhome.Iwasexcited.Afterawhile,Isawabigstone.ButIcouldn’ttakeawayfromthestone.SoIfellofffrommybike.Myrightarmwasbroken.Andmyfathertookmetothehospitalasquicklyashecould.Inthehospital,thedoctortoldmethatIneededtostayathomeforamonth.T
5、henmydadtookmetohome.Mygrandparentswasveryworriedaboutme.TheyaskedwhetherIwashurt.ButIcouldn’tanswerthem.Fromthenonmydadlookedaftermeeveryday.IfeltIwasthemosthappypeopleallovertheworld.Hehelpedmewithmystudy,andhelpedmewashedclothes.Heoftenmadelotsofdeliciousfoodforme.Ilearnedh
6、owmuchmyfatherlovesmeandcaredaboutme.andIknowmyfatherwasproudofme.Ithoughtheisthebestfatherintheworld.ItoldhimIwouldauniversitystudenttomakehimhappyinthefuture.Yoursuggestions:PolishyourwritingOpeningparagraph[BodyparagraphEndingparagraph
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