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2023年高考真题变式题分类汇编专题18书面表达真题变式题（乙卷）【2023年真题】适用地区：河南、江西、甘肃、青海、内蒙古、宁夏、新疆、陕西介绍一项假期所学到的新技能。具体内容：1.学的新技能是什么；2.分享心得感悟。注意：1.词数100左右；2.题目和首句已为你写好。                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           【参考范文】Duringmyrecentvacation,Ilearnedanewskillandgainedsomevaluableinsights.Idecidedtotakeanonlinecourseincoding,anditwasachallengingbutrewardingexperience.Ilearnedhowtowritebasiccodeandcreatesimpleprograms,whichwasacompletelynewskillforme.Inadditiontothetechnicalskills,Ialsogainedsomeimportantinsightsaboutmyself.IrealizedthatIamcapableoflearningnewthingsandpushingmyselfoutofmycomfortzone.Ialsolearnedtheimportanceofpersistenceandpatiencewhenitcomestolearningnewskills.Overall,thisexperiencehasgivenmeanewfoundconfidenceinmyabilitiesandadesiretocontinuelearningandgrowing.Iamexcitedtoseewherethisnewskillwilltakemeinthefuture,andIamgratefulforthepersonalgrowththatcamealongwithit.【真题变式题1】学科网（北京）股份有限公司 假设你是李华，学校就“MyFavouriteSport”开展征文活动。请你根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文投稿。1.介绍你喜欢的运动项目；2.喜欢这一运动项目的理由；3.做运动时要注意的事项。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。MyFavouriteSport____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyFavouriteSportThoughtherearedifferentkindsofsports,swimmingismyfavourite.ItwasaveryexcitingexperiencetolearnswimmingwithmyparentswhenIwasfiveyearsold.Swimmingisareallygoodsport.Itmakesmefeelrelaxed.Thissportcanmakemestayhealthyandstrong,becauseIexercisealmosteverypartofmybodyeverytimeIgoswimming.Beforegoingtoswim,youshouldpayattentiontothreepoints.Thefirstistomakeyourbodyinabetterstate.Thesecondisthatdonoteattoomuch.Lastbutnotleast,youhadbetterswimwithsomefriends.Thesecanhelpyoustaysafeandenjoyyourself.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于学校就“MyFavouriteSport”开展征文活动这一情况，根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累保持健康：stayhealthy→keepfit注意：payattentionto→focuson锻炼：exercise→workout令人兴奋的：exciting→thrilling学科网（北京）股份有限公司 2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Swimmingisareallygoodsport.Itmakesmefeelrelaxed.拓展句：Swimmingisareallygoodsport,whichcanmakemefeelrelaxed.【点睛】【高分句型1】Thoughtherearedifferentkindsofsports,swimmingismyfavourite.(运用了Though引导的让步状语从句)【高分句型2】Thissportcanmakemestayhealthyandstrong,becauseIexercisealmosteverypartofmybodyeverytimeIgoswimming.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)【真题变式题2】请以“AmealIcookedformyfamily”为题写一篇英语短文，内容包括:1.做了什么饭；2.如何做的饭；3.你有何感受。注意：1.词数：100左右2.短文题目已为你写好，不计入总词数AmealIcookedformyfamily_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AmealIcookedformyfamilyRecently,I’velearnedhowtocookfriedriceontheInternet.LastSunday.Icookedamealformyfamily.Iputsomericeandwaterintothepotandsteamedthericefor20minutes.Whenthericewasready,Ileftittocool.Icutsomecarrotsandsausagesintosmallpieces,andthenIfriedthepiecestogetherwiththecooledriceandeggs.Tenminuteslater,whenthefriedricewasonthetable,myparentssmiledahugesmile.学科网（北京）股份有限公司 Forme,cookingisreallyagoodwaytoshowmyloveformyfamily.【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇开放性作文，要求考生请以“AmealIcookedformyfamily”为题写一篇英语短文，内容包括：1.做了什么饭；2.如何做的饭；3.你有何感受。【详解】1.词汇积累准备好的：ready→prepared学习：learn→study和……一起：togetherwith→alongwith展示：show→demonstrate2.句式拓展并列句变复合句原句：Icutsomecarrotsandsausagesintosmallpieces,andthenIfriedthepiecestogetherwiththecooledriceandeggs.拓展句：Icutsomecarrotsandsausagesintosmallpieces,afterwhich,Ifriedthepiecestogetherwiththecooledriceandeggs.【点睛】[高分句型1]Recently,I’velearnedhowtocookfriedriceontheInternet.（运用了“特殊疑问词+动词不定式”结构作宾语）[高分句型2]Tenminuteslater,whenthefriedricewasonthetable,myparentssmiledahugesmile.（运用了when引导时间状语从句）【真题变式题3】上周末，你在家为父母做了一顿饭，请你写一篇英语周记，记述整个过程。内容包括：1.做饭缘由；2.做饭过程；3.个人感受。注意：词数100左右。学科网（北京）股份有限公司 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】LastSundaymorning,myparentswenttovisittheirfriendinthehospital.AfterIfinishedmyhomework,Igotanidea:Whynotcooknoodleswithtomatoeggsauceforthem?HardlyhadIpreparedeverythingneededwhenIstartedthedetailedcookingstepscarefullyasinstructedonlinevideo.Ittookmeroughly30minutestomakeit.Atthismoment,myparentscamebackandwerequitesurprisedtoseethedeliciousfoodonthetable.MymothergavemeahugandIcouldsensesatisfactionintheireyes.Challengeasitwasforme,Ineverfeltsohappy.【导语】本文是开放作文。上周末，你在家为父母做了一顿饭，请你写一篇英语周记，记述整个过程。内容包括：做饭缘由；做饭过程；个人感受。【详解】1.词汇积累完成：finished→completed大概：roughly→approximately回来：cameback→returned高兴的：happy→pleased2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Atthismoment,myparentscamebackandwerequitesurprisedtoseethedeliciousfoodonthetable.拓展句：Atthismoment,myparentscameback,whowerequitesurprisedtoseethedeliciousfoodonthetable.【点睛】[高分句型1]HardlyhadIpreparedeverythingneededwhenIstartedthedetailedcookingstepscarefullyasinstructedonlinevideo.(运用了倒装句)[高分句型2]Challengeasitwasforme,Ineverfeltsohappy.(运用了倒装句)【真题变式题4】你校最近组织了一次采摘茶叶活动。请向学校校刊英语专栏写一篇报道，介绍这次活动，内容包括：学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.活动目的；2.活动过程；3.活动感受。注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；采摘茶叶picktealeaves_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】    OrganizedbytheStudents’Union,wewenttoateagardentopicktealeaveslastweekend.Thepurposeofthisactivitywastoenrichstudents’after-schoolculturallifeandletstudentsunderstandsomeoftheteaculture.Wearrivedattheteagardenat9am,wherethestaffshowedusaroundtheteagarden.Thenthestafftaughtustopicktea.Wepickedsometealeavesbyourselves.Finallywewatchedtheprocessoffryingtea,whichwasaneye-openerforthestudents.Throughthisactivity,weunderstoodtheteacultureandgotintouchwithnature,whichbenefitedusalot.【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道，要求考生向学校校刊英语专栏写一篇报道，介绍学校最近组织的一次采摘茶叶活动。【详解】1.词汇积累目的：purpose→aim最后：finally→atlast到达：arriveat→getto某人自己：byoneself→onone’sown2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：OrganizedbytheStudents’Union,wewenttoateagardentopicktealeaveslastweekend.拓展句：Wewenttoateagardentopicktealeaveslastweekend,whichwasorganizedbytheStudents’Union.【点睛】[高分句型1]Wearrivedattheteagardenat9am,wherethestaffshowedusaroundtheteagarden.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)学科网（北京）股份有限公司 [高分句型2]Throughthisactivity,weunderstoodtheteacultureandgotintouchwithnature,whichbenefitedusalot.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【真题变式题5】你校将以“我做过的一份兼职”为题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1.简述这份兼职；2.你的收获。注意：1.词数100左右；2.短文的题目已为你写好。Apart-timejobIhavedone________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Apart-timejobIhavedoneThissummer,IworkedasaChinesetutorforanAmericanboyintheseventhgrade.It’sachallengingjob.ThefirstproblemIhadtosolvewashowtoimprovehislearningenthusiasm.Iusedpictures,storiesandprizestostimulatehisinterest,whichturnedouttowork.Thesecondchallengewastoimprovehispoorlistening.IfoundsomeinterestingChinesecartoonsandwatchedthemwithhimfor30minuteseveryday.Afteramonth.hewasabletounderstandmostofthespeechinthecartoons.It’sajoytoseemyowneffortsfruitful.I’vealsolearntthatbeingagoodteacherrequiresasenseofhumorandteachingskillsbesidesknowledge.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你校将以“我做过的一份兼职”为题，举办英语征文比赛，写一篇短文投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累解决：solve→dealwith提高，增强：improve→enhance学科网（北京）股份有限公司 能够做某事：beabletodosth.→becapableofdoingsth.开心：joy→pleasure2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：IfoundsomeinterestingChinesecartoonsandwatchedthemwithhimfor30minuteseveryday.拓展句：BecauseIfoundsomeinterestingChinesecartoons,Iwatchedthemwithhimfor30minuteseveryday.【点睛】【高分句型1】Iusedpictures,storiesandprizestostimulatehisinterest,whichturnedouttowork.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】I’vealsolearntthatbeingagoodteacherrequiresasenseofhumorandteachingskillsbesidesknowledge.(运用了that引导的宾语从句以及动名词作主语)【真题变式题6】你校英文报新开设了专栏ABC’sofSafety，面向全体学生征稿。请你写一篇短文投稿，讲述上周你对同学李华实施烫伤急救的经历，并简单谈谈你的感受。注意：1.词数100字左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.合理增加细节，使行文连贯。Accidentsalwayshappen.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】    Accidentsalwayshappen.Theotherday,LiHuahadhisglassknockedover,thusspillingthehotwateronhisrightleg.Onhearinghiscry,Iimmediatelyarosefrommyseatandrantohimatonce.Concernedabouthisinjury,someclassmatesweregatheringaroundhim,notknowingwhattodo.ItseemedthatLiwassufferingextremepainandheletoutayellofpain.Icheckedhisinjurywithoutdelayandfoundhisrightfoothadbecomeredandswollen,followedbysomeblisters.Withthehelpofhisdeskmate,weinstantly学科网（北京）股份有限公司 carriedhimtotherestroomandplacedtheburnsundercoolrunningwater,whichlastedabouttenminutes.Toourrelief,thesharppainseemedtobegreatlyeased.Afterdryingtheburntareagentlywithacleancloth,Icovereditwithaloosebandagefromourfirst-aidkit.OnlythenwasIawareofwhatadifferenceabasicknowledgeoffirstaidcouldmake,especiallyinsuchacase.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向校英文报新开设的专栏ABC’sofSafety写一篇短文投稿，讲述上周自己对同学李华实施烫伤急救的经历，并简单谈谈自己的感受。【详解】1.词汇积累发现：find→spot立即：immediately→innotime检查：check→examine在……的帮助下：withthehelpof→withtheaidwith2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Theotherday,LiHuahadhisglassknockedover,thusspillingthehotwateronhisrightleg.拓展句：Theotherday,LiHuahadhisglassknockedover,whichspiltthehotwateronhisrightleg.【点睛】【高分句型1】Theotherday,LiHuahadhisglassknockedover,thusspillingthehotwateronhisrightleg.（运用了现在分词作结果状语）【高分句型2】OnlythenwasIawareofwhatadifferenceabasicknowledgeoffirstaidcouldmake,especiallyinsuchacase.（运用了部分倒装，what引导的宾语从句）【真题变式题7】假设你是李华，你们学校的英语网站正面向全校学生征集有关急救常识的英文稿件。请你给该网站投稿，介绍交通事故方面的急救常识。内容包括：1.首先保持镇静；2.检查伤者呼吸情况，呼吸困难要实施人工呼吸；3.如伤者有出血情况要先止血，然后等候救护车及警察的帮助。学科网（北京）股份有限公司 注意：1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数80左右；3.已提供开头语，但不计入总词数。Ifwehappentowitnessanaccident,whatshouldwedotosaveotherpeople’slives?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】FirstaidforaccidentsIfwehappentowitnessanaccident,whatshouldwedotosaveotherpeople’slives?Knowinghowtorespondproperlycanmakeabigdifference.Herearesomerulesthatwecanfollow.First,weshouldstaycalm.Next,wecanasksimplequestionssuchas“AreyouOK?”tomaketheperson’sconditionclear.Then,weneedtochecktheperson’sbreathing.Ifitisdifficultforhimtobreathe,weshouldtrytostarthisbreathingrightawaywiththemouth-to-mouthmethod.Also,ifapersonisbleeding,weneedstopthebleedingbypressingonthewoundwithacleancloth.Alltheabovedone,wecanstaywiththepersonuntilthepoliceandambulancearrive.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学校的英语网站投稿，介绍交通事故方面的急救常识。【详解】1.词汇积累保持：stay→keep困难的：difficult→hard立即：rightaway→atonce此外：also→besides2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Next,wecanasksimplequestionssuchas“AreyouOK?”tomaketheperson’sconditionclear.拓展句：Next,wecanasksimplequestionssuchas“AreyouOK?”sothatwecanmaketheperson’s学科网（北京）股份有限公司 conditionclear.【点睛】【高分句型1】Ifwehappentowitnessanaccident,whatshouldwedotosaveotherpeople’slives?（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）【高分句型2】Herearesomerulesthatwecanfollow.（运用了that引导的定语从句）【高分句型3】Alltheabovedone,wecanstaywiththepersonuntilthepoliceandambulancearrive.（运用了独立主格结构）学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司