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专题06应用文写作(开学考试专辑)解析版2023年新课标I卷II卷新考向：一、应用文写作书信体和非书信体需要兼顾；二、应用文写作开放性更强，思辨性要求更高；三、应用文写作选材侧重体现德智体美劳“五育并举”；四、应用文写作重视高级词汇复杂句式及个人情感表达。【广东省河源市开学联考2023-2024学年高三上学期开学联考】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Margaux写信向你询问如何平衡学习和摄影爱好之间的关系。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：1.告知收到来信，得知情况；2.给出合理建议。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearMargaux,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMargaux,Iheardthatyoulovephotographybuthavebeenstrugglingtobalanceyourstudywithpursuingyourinterests.I’mgladtooffermyadvice!Firstofall,you’dbetterprioritizeyourtime.Makealistofallthethingsthatyouneedtodo,assigneachtaskinorderofimportance.Additionally,scheduleblocksoftimeforstudyandphotography.Lastly,takeagoodrest.Withthesetips,youcanfindabalancewhichwillallowyoutimeforyourclasses,hobbiesandrest.
IwishmysuggestionswouldbeofsomehelptoyouYours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本文是应用文。假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Margaux写信向你询问如何平衡学习和摄影爱好之间的关系。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：1.告知收到来信，得知情况；2.给出合理建议。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：glad→happy建议：advice→suggestion/tip此外：Additionally→Inaddition有帮助的：ofsomehelp→helpful2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Lastly,takeagoodrest.拓展句：Lastly,takeagoodrest,whichcanmakeyouenergetic.【点睛】【高分句型1】Iheardthatyoulovephotographybuthavebeenstrugglingtobalanceyourstudywithpursuingyourinterests.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)【高分句型2】Makealistofallthethingsthatyouneedtodo,assigneachtaskinorderofimportance.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)【高分句型3】Withthesetips,youcanfindabalancewhichwillallowyoutimeforyourclasses,hobbiesandrest.(运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)【广东省湛江市一中2023-2024学年高三上学期开学考试】假定你是学生会主席李华，学生会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动(WorkCreatesaBetterLife)得到了外教Patrick的大力支持。活动已经圆满结束，请你给他写一封感谢信。内容包括：1.表示感谢；2.外教的帮助；3.活动的反响。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
DearPatrick,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearPatrick,IamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourkindhelpintheWorkCreatesaBetterLife,whichhasturnedouttobeanamazingsuccess.Itissoniceofyoutohaveofferedusavarietyofpresentationskillsandcreativesuggestionsonourshow.Itwasunderyourprofessionalguidancethattheparticipantsshowedtheirskillsofcooking,gardening,etc.Theirimpressiveperformancesdefinitelyfueledtheirpassionfordailylifeskills.Mostimportantly,thisactivityhelpedstudentsreceivewideadmirationandgaintheirtremendousconfidence.Manythanksforyourtimeandsupport.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封感谢信，感谢外教Patrick对学生会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动的大力支持。【详解】1.词汇积累衷心的：sincere→heartfelt感激：gratitude→appreciation惊人的：amazing→fascinating提供：offer→provide2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Theirimpressiveperformancesdefinitelyfueledtheirpassionfordailylifeskills.拓展句：Theirperformanceswhichimpressedpropledefinitelyfueledtheirpassionfordailylifeskills.
【点睛】[高分句型1]IamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourkindhelpintheWorkCreatesaBetterLife,whichhasturnedouttobeanamazingsuccess.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Itwasunderyourprofessionalguidancethattheparticipantsshowedtheirskillsofcookinggardening,etc.(itis...that强调句型)【浙江省名校协作体2023-2024学年高三上学期开学考试】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter看了你在社交平台上发布的“全国爱眼日”班级活动图片后，向你了解相关情况。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1.介绍全国爱眼日；2.活动安排；3.活动感受。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearPeter,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YourssincerelyLiHua【答案】DearPeter,Awareofyourenthusiasmfortheclasseventthemed“Healthyeyeshealthylife”,I’mwritingtoinformyouofsomerelevantinformation.Inabidtopromotegoodeyecarehabits,weChinesecelebrateNationalEyeDayonJune6.At2p.m.,oureventkickedoffwithavideo,featuringtheinconveniencepeoplewithmyopiamaysuffer.Thenaneyespecialistsharedvaluabletipsonmaintaininggoodeyehygiene,afterwhichseveralnurseshelpedtocheckupoureyesonthespotuntil4p.m..Theconstructiveeventremindedusthatwecouldn’temphasizetheeyeprotectiontoomuch.
Ihopetheinformationishelpfultoyou.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给想了解“全国爱眼日”班级活动情况的英国朋友Peter写一封邮件，内容包括全国爱眼日的介绍，活动安排，以及自己的活动感受。【详解】1.词汇积累为了：inabidtodo→inordertodo庆祝：celebrate→observe建议：tip→suggestion有益的，宝贵的：valuable→precious2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：At2p.m.,oureventkickedoffwithavideo,featuringtheinconveniencepeoplewithmyopiamaysuffer.拓展句：Oureventstartedat2p.m.withavideoshowcasingthedifficultiesthatindividualswithmyopiamayexperience.【点睛】【高分句型1】Thenaneyespecialistsharedvaluabletipsonmaintaininggoodeyehygiene,afterwhichseveralnurseshelpedtocheckupoureyesonthespotuntil4p.m..(运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Ihopetheinformationishelpfultoyou.(运用了省略that宾语从句)【湖北省武汉市2023-2024学年高三上学期起点质检】假如你是李华，你刚刚参观了你市博物馆举办的一次“遇见艺术家”的展览，请为你校英文报写一则评论，内容包括：1.展览概况；2.观展感受；3.意见建议。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.为使行文连贯，可以适当增加细节。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】LastSaturday,Ijustvisitedanexhibitiontitled“MeetingArtists”heldbyourcity’smuseum.Theexhibitionattractedmanymastersandamateursathomeandabroad.ManyartworksincludingChinesehandwritingandlandscapepaintingsfromancientandmoderntimeswereonshow.Thehostexplainedeveryworkindetailsonthespot.Theexhibitionleftadeepimpressiononme.Inmyview,itnotonlypromotedtheinheritanceofChinesetraditionalculturebutstrengthenedournationalprideaswell.Ihopetherewillbemoreactivitieslikethisinthefuture.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一则关于刚刚参观的市博物馆举办的一次“遇见艺术家”展览的评论。【详解】1.词汇积累参观：visit→payavisitto举办：hold→throw展览：onshow→ondisplay详细地：indetails→detailedly2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：LastSaturday,Ijustvisitedanexhibitiontitled“MeetingArtists”heldbyourcity’smuseum.拓展句：LastSaturday,Ijustvisitedanexhibitionwhichwastitled“MeetingArtists”heldbyourcity’smuseum.【点睛】【高分句型1】Inmyview,itnotonlypromotedtheinheritanceofChinesetraditionalculturebutstrengthenedournationalprideaswell.（由notonly…but引导的并列句结构）【高分句型2】Ihopetherewillbemoreactivitieslikethisinthefuture.（由省略连词that引导的宾语从句）【广东省广州市执信中学2023-2024学年高三上学期开学考试】你校的体育节刚刚结束。请给学校英语报写一篇报道，报道体育节的主要活动、精彩瞬间及意义。注意
1.词数100词左右；2.可以通当增加细节，使文连贯；3.报道的开头已为你写好，不入词数。参考词汇:开幕式openingceremony项目item___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TheschoolsportscarnivalwhichtookplacelastFridayandSaturday,wasagreatsuccess.Thecrowdscheerontheirclassmateswhotookpartinmorethan10excitingevents.Thecarnivalstartedwithanopeningceremonywhichincludedastudentathletemarchanddanceperformancebyourschool’sstreetdanceclub.Thiswasfollowedbytheeventsthemselves.AmongthemanygreatperformanceswasLiHua’swininthe1500-metrerunningraceandQiQi’sdominantvictoryinthegirls100-metrerace.Perhapsthebiggestcheerofthemeetwasforthestudentswhentheydefeatedtheteachersinthetug-of-warcompetition.Afteritsconclusion,manystudentssaidtheylovethesportsmeetasitprovidedthemwithanopportunitytorelax,demonstratetheirsportsabilitiesandbuildfriendshipandschoolspiritamongthestudents.【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生用英语写一篇报道，报道体育节的主要活动、精彩瞬间及意义。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：提纲类作文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时。结构：总分法要求：报道体育节的主要活动、精彩瞬间及意义。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）takeplace；cheeron；takepartin；dominant；defeat；demonstrate第三步：连词成句1.Theschoolsportscarnival,whichtookplacelastFridayandSaturday,wasagreatsuccess.2.Thecrowdscheerontheirclassmateswhotookpartinmorethan10excitingevents.
3.Thecarnivalstartedwithanopeningceremonywhichincludedastudentathletemarchanddanceperformancebyourschool’sstreetdanceclub.4.Thiswasfollowedbytheeventsthemselves.5.AmongthemanygreatperformanceswasLiHua’swininthe1500-metrerunningraceandQiQi’sdominantvictoryinthegirls100-metrerace.6.Perhapsthebiggestcheerofthemeetwasforthestudentswhentheydefeatedtheteachersinthetug-of-warcompetition.7.Afteritsconclusion,manystudentssaidtheylovethesportsmeetasitprovidedthemwithanopportunitytorelax,demonstratetheirsportsabilitiesandbuildfriendshipandschoolspiritamongthestudents.第四步：连句成篇1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表转折对比关系：while,meanwhile,However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(从句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】文章结构合理，思路清晰，使用了恰当的连接词及词组使行文连贯，如“which，who，after”，也运用了一些高级词汇和表达，如“takeplace；cheeron；takepartin；dominant；defeat；demonstrate”以及定语从句、状语从句等，增加了文章的亮点，体现了学生较高的英语学科素养。【黑龙江省哈尔滨三中2023-2024学年上学期高三开学考试】假定你是李华，你校将组织师生进行一次远足活动，请用英语给外教Jason写一封邮件邀请他一起参加，内容包括：1.活动时间和地点；2.注意事项；3.表达期待。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJason,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHuaDearJason,
Thrilledtolearnthatagrouphikingtripisscheduledbyourschool,Iamwritingtoinviteyou,anaturelover,tojoinus.We’retogatherattheschoolgateat8a.m.thisSaturdayandleaveforourdestination-SouthMountainPark,anaturelover’sparadise.Therewewillhikethroughtoweringredwoods,marvelingatthenaturalwonders.Tomakethe3-hourhikedelightful,remembertopreparesomeessentials,suchassnacks,drinks,andsunscreen.Also,youaresupposedtowearcomfortableanddurableshoestoensureyoursafety.Lookingforwardtospendingtimewithyou.LiHua【广东省七校联合体2023-2024学年高三上学期第一次联考】假定你是学生会主席李华，下周学校要接待来自澳大利亚的交换生，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿，内容包括：1.表示欢迎；2.介绍活动安排；3.表达祝愿。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearAustralianfriends,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】[参考范文]DearAustralianfriends,Onbehalfofourschool,Ifeelgreatlyprivilegedtoconveywarmwelcometoyou.Wearedelightedtohaveyouwithus.
Tomakeyourstayherememorable,variousactivitieswillbearrangedtoenhanceourmutualunderstandingandexperiencedifferentculture.Asplanned,wewillholdatalentshowwhereeveryonecanshowtheiroutstandingperformances.ClassesontraditionalChineseculturearealsoscheduled,suchaspaper-cutting,Chineseopera,calligraphy,etc,followedbyagift-exchangingactivity.Additionally,you’reinvitedtopayavisittosurroundingtouristattractions.Finally,Isincerelyhopethatyoucanenjoyyourselfandwishyouapleasantjourney.Thankyou!Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇发言稿，作为学生代表为下周来自澳大利亚的交换生致欢迎辞。其内容包括表示欢迎、介绍活动安排和表达祝愿。【详解】1.词汇积累非常地：greatly→extremely不同的：different→various按安排：Asplanned→Asscheduled而且：Additionally→Inaddition2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：ClassesontraditionalChineseculturearealsoscheduled,suchaspaper-cutting,Chineseopera,calligraphy,etc,followedbyagift-exchangingactivity.拓展句：ClassesontraditionalChineseculturearealsoscheduled,suchaspaper-cutting,Chineseopera,calligraphy,etc,whicharefollowedbyagift-exchangingactivity.【点睛】【高分句型1】Asplanned,wewillholdatalentshowwhereeveryonecanshowtheiroutstandingperformances.（运用了where引导的定语从句）【高分句型2】Finally,Isincerelyhopethatyoucanenjoyyourselfandwishyouapleasantjourney.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【贵州省贵阳市2023-2024学年高三上学期开学】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack来信请你介绍学校组织的一次研学活动。内容包括：1.活动时间、地点；2.活动内容；
3.你的收获。注意：1.词数应为80词左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearJack,Iwouldliketotellyouaboutarecentstudytourorganizedbyourschool._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestregards!Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJack,Iwouldliketotellyouaboutarecentstudytourorganizedbyourschool.Theactivitytookplaceatalocalmuseumlastweek.Duringthestudytour,wehadtheopportunitytoexplorevariousexhibitsandlearnaboutdifferentaspectsofhistoryandculture.Wealsoparticipatedininteractiveworkshopsanddiscussionsledbyexpertsintheirrespectivefields.Thestudytourwasnotonlyeducationalbutalsoenjoyable.Wegainedadeeperunderstandingofthesubjectswestudiedinclassanddevelopedcriticalthinkingskills.Itwasagreatexperiencethatbroadenedourhorizonsandenhancedourlearning.Ihopethisgivesyouagoodideaofthestudytour.Bestregards!Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jack写信介绍学校组织的一次研学活动。【详解】1.词汇积累
组织：organize→conduct不同的：different→diverse愉快的：enjoyable→entertaining希望：hope→expect2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Duringthestudytour,wehadtheopportunitytoexplorevariousexhibitsandlearnaboutdifferentaspectsofhistoryandculture.拓展句：Duringthestudytour,wehadtheopportunitytoexplorevariousexhibitsandlearnaboutdifferentaspectsofhistoryandculture,whicharegreatlymeaningful.【点睛】【高分句型1】Wealsoparticipatedininteractiveworkshopsanddiscussionsledbyexpertsintheirrespectivefields.(运用了过去分词作定语)【高分句型2】Wegainedadeeperunderstandingofthesubjectswestudiedinclassanddevelopedcriticalthinkingskills.(运用了省略关系代词引导的限制性定语从句)【云南师大附中2024届高考适应性月考卷二】假定你是李华,你校国际部所有交换生将开展主题为“野生动物保护”的交流会,你将作为学生代表发言,请写一篇发言稿,内容包括：1.保护野生动物的重要性；2.保护措施；3.其他。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dearfellowstudents,Thankyouforyourattention!Dearfellowstudents，Nowadays，everyonehasbecomeawarethatwildlifeprotectionisofgreatimportance．Ifwecontinuekillingwildanimalswithoutmercy，soonerorlater，naturewillrebelagainstmankind.Therefore，strongmeasuresshouldbetakentosolvethisproblem.Firstly，thegovernmentshouldputwildlifeprotectionatthetopofitsprioritiesandmakepoliciestostopillegalhunting．Secondly，variousactivitiescanbeheldtoraisestudents’awarenessofwildlifeprotection．Thirdly，individualsshouldpromisethattheywon’tkill，buyoreatwildlife.
Inaword，it’surgentthatallofustakeactiontoprotectwildlife．Thankyouforyourattention!【重庆市巴南区2024届高三上学期高考诊断考试一】假定你是李华，一周前你在一家电脑专卖店买了—台电脑，仅用了三天就出现了各种问题。请你就此事给该店经理写封邮件投诉。内容包括：1.介绍购物的情况；2.反映存在的问题；3.提出解决的方案。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearSir/Madam,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】Dearmanager,Onemonthago,becauseoftherecommendationofyoursalesperson,Iboughtacomputerinyourshop.Itworkedwellforthefirstthreedays.Ilikeditverymuch.Butthreedayslater,itdidn’tworkverywell.I’mafraidIwillcomplainaboutitsbadquality.First,thepicturewasveryunclear.Andthen,itdidn’thavethevoicesometimes.Last,itcouldn’tloadanysoftware.So,notonlydoesthiscomputerbringmenohelpbutalsoitcreatesabigproblemforme.Iamafrequentcustomerofyourshopandlikeyourmessage“Customerfirst”.Now,Iwanttochangethecomputer.Orelse,Iwouldrathergetthemoneyback.Iamlookingforwardtoyoursatisfactoryreply!Yours,LiHua
【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给电脑专卖店的经理写邮件投诉新买的电脑仅用了三天就出现了各种问题。【详解】1.词汇积累首先：first→inthefirstplace不清楚的：unclear→indistinct有时：sometimes→attimes因为：becauseof→dueto2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Onemonthago,becauseoftherecommendationofyoursalesperson,Iboughtacomputerinyourshop.拓展句：Onemonthago,Iboughtacomputerwhichyoursalespersonrecommendedinyourshop.【点睛】[高分句型1]I’mafraidIwillcomplainaboutitsbadquality.(运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略了that)[高分句型2]So,notonlydoesthiscomputerbringmenohelpbutalsoitcreatesabigproblemforme.(运用了部分倒装句)【江苏省盐城市重点高中2024届高三上学期期初模拟测试】教育部发文要求每个中小学生都要参与志愿服务。寒假将至，假设你是校学生会主席李华，请你在校英语报上发表一封倡议信。内容包括：1.志愿者活动的益处；2.可以开展的志愿者活动；3.发出倡议。注意：1.写作词数应为80词左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearSchoolmates,Volunteeringisplayingacrucialroleinstudents’overalldevelopment.Withtheapproachofwintervacation,it’shightimethatwetookupvolunteering.Awillinghearttovolunteerprovidesuswithmassivebenefits.Volunteeringnotonlymakesusfeelconnectedwiththecommunitybutalsoisbeneficialtoourwell-being.Blessedwithasenseofpurposeinlife,weareofferedanamazingopportunitytolearnvaluableskills. Therearedifferentwaysofservingpeople,rangingfromvolunteeringatchildren’shomeorlibraries
tovirtualvolunteering,helpingpupilswithschoolworkonline,orpromotingintangibleheritageofWuCulture.Whynotthrowourselvesintovolunteering?Itmakesusabetterpersonandcreatesabetterworld.YoursSincerely,LiHua
