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第二节 方法运用于命题专题五书面表达
1栏目索引一、提纲类作文二、图画类作文三、图表类作文四、(半)开放式作文
2(2017•天津)假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师MrsGreen一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。(1)简要介绍自己的学习和生活；(2)告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等)；(3)希望她有机会重访天津。注意：(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：第十三届全运会the13thNationalGames一、提纲类作文典例
3法宝1“五审”定调子(1)体裁：告知类应用文，注意告知类邮件的格式；(2)人称：以第一人称为主；(3)时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；(4)要点：介绍学习和生活；成为志愿者；邀请重访天津；(5)层次：分为四段：第一、二段问候并介绍自己的学习和生活以及成为在津举办的全运会的志愿者；第三段邀请外籍教师重访天津；第四段为结束语。法宝2“韵色”得高分该文除简单句外，还可使用并列句、省略句及复合句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句)，做到句式多样。
4法宝3黄金“三步曲”1.遣词hearfromsb./tellsb.sth.about.../indetail/tobeginwith/bearoundthecorner/bebusydoingsth./preparefor/volunteer/beheldat.../inorderto/spend/inthelibrary/nodoubt/enhance/invite/appreciate
52.造句(1)I’msogladtohearfromyou.(2)Iamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyselfindetail.(3)ThefinalexamofthistermisaroundthecornersoIambusypreparingforit.(4)Ihavealreadybeenavolunteerforthe13thNationalGames.(5)ItwillbeheldattheendofAugustinTianjin.(6)InordertoexpandmyknowledgeofTianjin，IspendeverysparemomentIhaveinthelibrary.(7)ThereisnodoubtthatIwillenhanceitsreputationthroughmyefforts.(8)I’llappreciateitifyoucouldreplyatyourearliestconvenience.
63.成篇DearMrsGreen，I’msogladtohearfromyou.Iamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyselfindetail.Tobeginwith，thefinalexamofthistermisaroundthecornersoIambusypreparingforit.WhatIwanttostressisthatIhavealreadybeenavolunteerforthe13thNationalGameswhichwillbeheldattheendofAugustinTianjin.InordertoexpandmyknowledgeofTianjin，suchasitshistory，traditionandfood，IspendeverysparemomentIhaveinthelibrary.
7ThereisnodoubtthatIwillenhanceitsreputationthroughmyefforts.Isincerelyinviteyoutocomehereagain.I’llappreciateitifyoucouldreplyatyourearliestconvenience.Yours，LiJin
8假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。1.回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面)；2.谈谈收获或感想；3.表达祝愿与期望。跟踪训练(2016·天津)
9注意：1.词数不少于100；2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dearfriends，Howtimeflies！Thankyou.参考范文
10参考范文Dearfriends，Howtimeflies！Twoweekswentby，andourexchangeactivitiesended.Onbehalfofmyschool，Iwouldliketoexpressmyfeelings.Asscheduled，weparticipatedinseveralinstructiveactivities.WelearntmanyChinesecharactersandtookplentyofexercisetogether.WewenttotherestauranttotastetheChinesetraditionalfood.Thefoodwasverydelicious.Whilevisitingtheartexhibition，wediscussedthegreatartists’works.
11Inmyopinion，everyonehereisamemberofourbigfamilyandwelearnalotfromeachother.AndatlastIsincerelywishyouapleasanttripbacktoyourcountry.Ihopewe’llgettogetheragainnextyear.Thankyou.
12(2017·北京)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。二、图画类作文典例注意：词数不少于60。提示词：视频video
13法宝1“五审”定调子(1)体裁：本文属于图画类作文；(2)人称：以第一人称为主；(3)时态：以一般过去时为主；(4)要点：制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程；(5)层次：分为两段：第一段描写毕业临近，决定制作毕业纪念视频；第二段写制作毕业纪念视频的过程及最后达到的结果。法宝2“韵色”得高分该文除简单句外，还可使用非谓语动词、并列句、复合句(宾语从句、状语从句)，做到句式多样丰富。
14法宝3黄金“三步曲”1.遣词graduationcome/aheateddiscussion/agreeon/makeavideo/materialcollecting/interviewteachers/takepictures/everyaspectofschoollife/tough/debateover/compromise/unavoidable/turnoutperfect/thegraduationceremony/bewellreceived/agreatsenseofachievement
152.造句(1)Graduationfinallycame.(2)MyclassmatesandIdecidedtodosomething.(3)Weagreedonmakingavideotorecordourexperiencesatschool.(4)Materialcollectingtookusawholeweek.(5)Duringthistimeweinterviewedourteachersandtookpicturesofeveryaspectofschoollife.(6)Theeditingpartafterthatwastough.(7)Wedebatedoverwhattoputintothevideo.(8)Somecompromiseswereunavoidable.
16(9)Thevideoturnedoutperfect.(10)Severaldayslater，whenthevideowasplayedonthegraduationceremony，itwaswellreceived.(11)Thestudentsandteacherssharedagreattime.(12)Thatsurelygaveusagreatsenseofachievement.
173.成篇Graduationfinallycame.MyclassmatesandIdecidedtodosomething.Afteraheateddiscussion，weagreedonmakingavideotorecordourexperiencesatschool.Materialcollectingtookusawholeweek，duringwhichweinterviewedourteachersandtookpicturesofeveryaspectofschoollife.Theeditingpartafterthatwastough.Wedebatedoverwhattoputintothevideo.Somecompromiseswereunavoidable，butthevideoturnedoutperfect.Severaldayslater，whenthevideowasplayedonthegraduationceremony，itwaswellreceived.Thestudentsandteacherssharedagreattime.Thatsurelygaveusagreatsenseofachievement.
18(2017•河西区三模)假设你是红星中学高三学生李津，你校周六上午举办了高三学生成人仪式。在会上你和一位女生代表同学们发言，你父亲作为家长代表讲话。请你按照以下四幅图的顺序，写一篇英语日记。描述图画内容，并谈谈自己的感想。跟踪训练参考范文注意：词数不少于100。
19参考范文Todayourschoolheldamemorableadulthoodceremonythemed“growth，gratitudeandresponsibility”.Iwashonouredtobethehostofceremony，togetherwithagirl.Inthebeginning，onbehalfofallthestudents，weexpressedourgratitudetoourparentsandteachers.Thenmyfather，asaparents’representativemadeaspeech，expressingthebestwishesandexpectationstous，whichmadeusfeeltheloveandcarefromourteachersandparents.Afterwards，wetookanoathfacingthenationalflag，showingourdeterminationtobeaqualifiedcitizenandworkhardforourcountry.Finally，handbyhand，wewentthroughaso-called“AdulthoodGate”，whichsymbolizedthatweareallgrown-ups!
20Aftertheceremony，Iknowmoreaboutthemeaningoftheword“adult”，whichattachesaresponsibilitytomyself，tomyfamilyandtothesociety.
21(2017·江苏)请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(box-officeincome)的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。三、图表类作文典例
22SaturdayAfternoon.InaShoppingCentre.LiJiang：Hi，SuHua.Whichmovieshallwesee?SuHua：Whatever.We’vegotsomanychoices，KungFuYoga，JourneytotheWest...Eachsoundsgreat!LiJiang：Yeah！Andsomemoviestarsarefantastic.SuHua：Andthehigh-tech！...LiJiang：Perfect！Let’sgetsomefoodfirst.Weonlyhave20minutesleft.SuHua：Nohurry.Thecinemaisonthesamefloor.
23OneDayin2016.AtHome.Son：Mum，shallwegoandseeafilmtonight?Mother：Whybother？Wecanstayathomeandwatchfilmsonline.It’sconvenientwithournewandfasternetwork.Son：Butitfeelsgoodinacinema.Mother：Andtheprice...Wehavetopay50yuanaticket.Son：Only10yuanmorethanlastyear.Mother：Butstillwecannotgetthemoney’sworth.Somefilmsarejustboring...
24写作内容1.用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；2.我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点)；3.谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。...
25法宝1“五审”定调子(1)体裁：图表类作文；(2)人称：以第三人称为主；(3)时态：以一般过去时为主；(4)要点：概述短文内容；分析票房收入变化的原因并给出自己的看法；(5)层次：分为三段：第一段总结归纳柱状图所含信息；第二段分析票房收入变化的原因；第三段提出自己的看法并给出理由。法宝2“韵色”得高分该文可多种句式并用，如并列句、复合句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句)，做到句式丰富多样。
26法宝3黄金“三步曲”1.遣词box-officeincome/witness/aconstantincrease/slowdown/various/economicdevelopment/powerfulengine/application/appeal/accountfor/consequently/turnawayfrom/leadto/atamediumspeed/movieindustry/enjoyaslightincrease
272.造句(1)Thebox-officeincomeofChinesemovieswitnessedaconstantincreasefromabout17billionyuanin2012toover40billionin2015.(2)Thatincreasesloweddownin2016.(3)Thereasonsbehindthisarevarious.(4)Thefasteconomicdevelopmentbefore2016wasprobablythemostpowerfulenginedrivingtheconstantgrowthinthebox-officeincome.(5)Theapplicationofnewtechnologiesandthewideappealofmoviestarscouldalsoaccountfortheincrease.(6)Chinasawadeclineinitseconomicgrowthratelastyear.
28(7)TheInternetincreasedoptionsformovielovers.(8)Someviewersbegantoturnawayfromcinemas，leadingtoaslowergrowth.(9)China’seconomyisexpectedtogrowatamediumspeedinthecomingyears.(10)Anincreaseispossibleintheinvestmentinthemovieindustryandthenumberofqualitymovies.(11)Itsbox-officeincomewillprobablyenjoyaslightincrease.
293.成篇Asisindicatedinthegraph，thebox-officeincomeofChinesemovieswitnessedaconstantincreasefromabout17billionyuanin2012toover40billionin2015.However，thatincreasesloweddownin2016.Thereasonsbehindthisarevarious.Thefasteconomicdevelopmentbefore2016wasprobablythemostpowerfulenginedrivingtheconstantgrowthinthebox-officeincome.Theapplicationofnewtechnologiesandthewideappealofmoviestarscouldalsoaccountfortheincrease.However，Chinasawadeclineinitseconomicgrowthratelastyear.AndtheInternetincreasedoptionsformovielovers.Consequently，someviewersbegantoturnawayfromcinemas，leadingtoaslowergrowth.
30China’seconomyisexpectedtogrowatamediumspeedinthecomingyears，soanincreaseispossibleintheinvestmentinthemovieindustryandthenumberofqualitymovies.Therefore，itsbox-officeincomewillprobablyenjoyaslightincrease.
31(2017•陕西咸阳二模)仔细观察下图，根据要求，以“HealthChangesinDevelopingCountries”为题，用英语写一篇不少于100词的短文。1.以下图为依据描述发展中国家的预期寿命(lifeexpectancy)和婴儿死亡率(infantmortalityrate)的变化情况；2.说明引起变化的各种原因，如生活条件的改善、医学的进步、环境保护的认识等。跟踪训练参考范文
32参考范文HealthChangesinDevelopingCountriesAsisdescribedinthechart，indevelopingcountriesgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinlifeexpectancyandinfantmortalityratebetween1960and2011.Thelifeexpectancyin1960wasabout40yearsold，whileitincreasedtoabout60yearsoldin2011.Atthesametime，theinfantmortalityratedroppedfrom200per1,000birthsin1960to100per1,000birthsin2011.
33Therearemanyreasonsforthechanges，Ithink.First，people’slivingconditionshaveimproved，soitisnaturalthattheylivelongerthanbefore.Second，thankstothedevelopmentinscienceandmedicine，peoplearereceivingbettermedicalcarethantheyusedto.Third，developingcountriesarenowbetterawareofenvironmentalprotectionandtheytakemoremeasurestosolvetheproblem，whichalsodoesgood.Inshort，people’shealthconditionindevelopingcountriesisbecomingbetterandbetter.
34(2017·全国Ⅲ)假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：1.球队活动；2.报名方式及截止日期。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。四、(半)开放式作文典例
35法宝1“五审”定调子(1)体裁：书信类应用文，应注意书信格式；(2)人称：以第一人称为主；(3)时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；(4)要点：写信目的；球队活动；报名方式和截止日期；(5)层次：分为四段：第一段自我介绍并交待写信目的——邀请Eric加入球队；第二段介绍打乒乓球的好处及球队活动；第三段告知Eric报名方式及截止日期；第四段结束语。法宝2“韵色”得高分除了使用简单句外，该文还可使用非谓语动词作状语、并列句及复合句(宾语从句、定语从句、状语从句)，做到句式多样。
36法宝3黄金“三步曲”1.遣词invite/join/tabletennisteam/itisknownthat/benefitfrom/prevent...from.../keepsb.physicallyhealthy/asto/experiencedplayer/givetrainingto/atthesametime/divide...into.../beinterested/signup/lookforwardto
372.造句(1)Iamwritingtoinviteyoutojointhetabletennisteaminourschool.(2)Wecanbenefitalotfromplayingtabletennis.(3)Itcanpreventusfromgettingshortsighted.(4)Itcankeepusphysicallyhealthy.(5)WeplantoinviteexperiencedplayerstogivetrainingtouseveryFridayafternoon.(6)Wewilldividethemembersintoseveralgroupstopracticeat5：00pmafterschool.(7)Ifyouareinterested，signuponourschoolwebsitebeforeAugust10.(8)I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.
383.成篇DearEric，IamLiHua.Iamwritingtoinviteyoutojointhetabletennisteaminourschool.Itisknownthatwecanbenefitalotfromplayingtabletennis.Itcanpreventusfromgettingshortsightedanditcankeepusphysicallyhealthy.Astotheactivities，weplantoinviteexperiencedplayerstogivetrainingtouseveryFridayafternoon.Atthesametime，wewilldividethemembersintoseveralgroupstopracticeat5：00pmafterschool.
39Ifyouareinterested，signuponourschoolwebsitebeforeAugust10.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiHua
40[2016•河北区总复习质量检测(三)]人们越来越离不开手机。你在暑期社会实践活动中，对手机的使用进行了调查，发现很多人在开车、过马路时……都在使用手机。针对这一现象，请你按下列要点用英语写一篇不少于100词的短文，呼吁人们文明使用手机。主要内容包括：1.描述这一社会现象；2.你的观点和合理建议。跟踪训练参考范文
41参考范文Mobilephonesbringusalotofconvenience.However，asisshowninasurveyofsocialpracticeinsummervacation，anincreasingnumberofpeopleusemobilephonesinimpropersituations，suchasdrivingcars，crossingtheroadsorattendingconferences.Suchinappropriatebehaviorislikelytobringbadconsequences.Ononehand，usingmobilephonesinthiswaymaycauseterribleaccidents，whichisreallydangerous.Ontheotherhand，talkingloudlyonthephoneinpublicplacesisfarfrombeingpolite.
42Personally，Ithinkweshouldn’tusemobilephoneswhereattentionorsilenceisneeded，forinstance，inlibraries，hospitals，orinaplane.Besides，relevantlawsaresupposedtobepassedinordertoguidepeople’suseofcellphonessothattheywillacquiregoodhabitsinpublic.Onlywheneverybodyhastheawarenessofthenegativeimpactsofimproperuseofphonescanwecreateamorecivilizedsociety.
43本课结束
