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考试大纲要求考纲解读根据提示进行书面表达。考生应能:(1)准确使用语法和词汇;(2)使用一定的句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地表达自己的思想。要求考生根据所给情景,用英语写一篇150个单词左右的短文。情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等;提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。书面表达的评分标准:1.信息内容的完整性(Completeness);2.信息内容的连贯性(Coherence);3.句子结构的正确性(Correctness);4.句子结构的多样性(Variety)。
1江苏高考书面表达近五年考情分布年份题材体裁类型2018如何看待消费排名议论文读写2017电影票房收入变化的原因及对走向的看法议论文读写2016阐述你对网络投票的看法议论文读写2015交通法规的意识与理念议论文读写2014汉语词典该不该收录英语词汇议论文读写
2从上表可以看出,近五年来,江苏高考书面表达的题目设置场景越来越具有真实性,越来越与生活实际紧密联系,内容包括日常生活、学校生活、社会文化等方面。从2014年开始,江苏高考书面表达采用了一种新题型“读写任务型作文”,题型有创新,但对写作能力的要求和词数的要求等没有变化。材料既有读写式的文字介绍也有图表,信息量大,这对考生的材料分析、概括提炼能力要求很高,同时,具有一定的开放性,便于考生写出紧扣主题的个性化内容,又能防止考生出现简单翻译写作要求中的句子的做法。
3请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
4【写作内容】1.用约30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象;2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名,然后用2—3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。【写作要求】【评分标准】1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
5【写作思路】本篇书面表达要求考生根据两段文字材料写一篇文章,针对“消费排名”现象论述自己的看法和观点,并阐述理由。文章为任务型读写,属于议论文,主要使用第一和第三人称,一般现在时。写作时应注意紧扣两段材料表达的主题,不可偏题,还应注意合理使用高级词汇和较复杂句型。
6考生首先应当仔细阅读题干所提供的文字材料。通读两篇文字材料可知,第一段材料为一对母子看了网上的评论后买回旅行箱,结果买回来的旅行箱质量很好;第二段材料为一家人看了网评后去餐馆吃饭,结果饭菜很不好吃,从而凸显出网评的不可靠性。明确以上事实后,再在此基础上明确文章的主题和结构,对“消费排名”现象作相关阐述。本文可分为三段进行写作,第一段用30词左右概述材料的主要内容,提出文章主题;第二段论述对“消费排名”现象的观点并说明理由;第三段总结全文,再次点明主题。在遣词造句上,应当注意合理使用连接成分,以提高文章的逻辑性,如在说明看法时可以用tobeginwith,what’smore,lastbutnotleast等;此外应尽量使用较复杂句型,如在总结全文大意时可以用定语从句、分词结构;在其他地方可以用主语从句、倒装语序等。
7【参考范文1】Asamajorchannelofconsumptioninformation,theratingisanefficientsourceofinformationforshoppinginourownconsumption.Interestingly,thesameratingmayhavedifferentinfluencesondifferentconsumers.ItendtoconsultconsumptionratingswhateverIpurchase.Firstly,thehigherratingmeansthehigherqualityoftheproduct,orbetterservice.Basedontheratings,Iboughtmybelovedbackpack,sawinterestingfilmsandtasteddeliciousfoods.Secondly,ratingscansavetimetomakedecisionsinshopping.Forexample,therearehugeamountsofreferencebookswhichIamoftenconfusedtochoosefrom.Inthatcase,itisbothconvenientandeconomicaltobuybooksaccordingtotheratings.
8Thereisnodoubtthatitisunwisetodependcompletelyontheratingsinconsumption.Theadvantagesanddisadvantagesofratingsareoftencloselyrelated.Itisnecessarytoholdanobjectiveattitudetowardsratings.
9【参考范文2】Nowadays,mostcommoditiesorservicesareratedthroughcertainchannels.Theseratings,easytoaccess,areplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleincustomers’purchasedecision.However,resultsaresometimesunsatisfactory.
10Thereisnodenyingthatsuchratingsmightbringconveniencetoconsumers,buttheyareoftenmisleadingandunreliable.Asweallknow,mostoftheratingsarebasedonothers’judgmentontheproductorserviceconcerned.Everyjudgmentcomesfromaspecificneedorauniquepsychologicalstate.Apparently,blindlyfollowingothers’advicewillaffectourownjudgment.Anotherfactshouldnotbeneglectedthatsomeoftheratingsaretheoutcomeofacarefulmanipulationofcompaniesorsellers.Ithasbecomeacommonpracticeforsometopayforgoodratingsontheirproductsorservicessoastoincreasetheirsales.Therefore,weshouldgiveasecondthoughttotheseratingswheneverwegoshopping.
11请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(box-officeincome)的柱状图及相关文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
12SaturdayAfternoon.InaShoppingCentre.LiJiang:Hi,SuHua.Whichmovieshallwesee?SuHua:Whatever.We’vegotsomanychoices,KungFuYoga,JourneytotheWest...Eachsoundsgreat!LiJiang:Yeah!Andsomemoviestarsarefantastic.SuHua:Andthehigh-tech!...LiJiang:Perfect!Let’sgetsomefoodfirst.Weonlyhave20minutesleft.SuHua:Nohurry.Thecinemaisonthesamefloor.
13OneDayin2016.AtHome.Son:Mum,shallwegoandseeafilmtonight?Mother:Whybother?Wecanstayathomeandwatchfilmsonline.It’sconvenientwithournewandfasternetwork.Son:Butitfeelsgoodinacinema.Mother:Andtheprice...Wehavetopay50yuanaticket.Son:Only10yuanmorethanlastyear.Mother:Butstillwecannotgetthemoney’sworth.Somefilmsarejustboring...
14【写作内容】【写作要求】【评分标准】1.用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容;2.我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些,简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考,原因不少于两点);3.谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法,并简要说明理由。1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
15【参考范文】Thebox-officeincomeofChinesemovieswitnessedaconstantincreasefromabout17billionyuanin2012toover40billionin2015.However,thatincreasesloweddownin2016.Thereasonsbehindthisarevarious.Thefasteconomicdevelopmentbefore2016wasprobablythemostpowerfulenginedrivingtheconstantgrowthinthebox-officeincome.Theapplicationofnewtechnologiesandthewideappealofmoviestarscouldalsoaccountfortheincrease.However,Chinasawadeclineinitseconomicgrowthratelastyear.Andtheinternetincreasedoptionsformovielovers.Consequently,someviewersbegantoturnawayfromcinemas,leadingtoaslowergrowth.
16China’seconomyisexpectedtogrowatamediumspeedinthecomingyears,soanincreaseispossibleintheinvestmentinthemovieindustryandthenumberofqualitymovies.Therefore,itsbox-officeincomewillprobablyenjoyaslightincrease.
17请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。Inrecentyears,InternetvotinghasbecomeincreasinglypopularinChina.Peoplenotonlycaston-linevotesthemselves,butalsourgeotherstovoteforcompetitionslikethe“MostBeautifulTeacher”andthe“CutestBaby”.LiJiang,ahighschoolstudent,isinvitedtovoteinthe“BestPoliceOfficer”competition,organizedbythelocalgovernmenttoletthepublichaveabetterunderstandingofpoliceofficers’dailywork.LiJiangvisitsthewebsiteandreadsallthestories.Heisdeeplymovedbytheirgloriousdeeds.Heisalreadythinkingofbecomingapolicemanhimselfinthefuture.
18SuHuaisinvitedbyhisuncletovoteforhiscousininthe“FutureSinger”competition.Hehasalreadyreceivedthreesimilarinvitationsthisweek.Hisuncletellshimthatifhiscousinwinsthecompetition,thefamilywillwinanoverseastourforfree.SuHualikeshiscousinverymuch,buthefindsothersingersperformevenbetter.Tovote,ornottovote?Thisisaquestionthattroubleshimverymuch.
19【写作内容】1.用约30个单词写出上文概要;2.用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法,并用2~3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。【写作要求】1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
20【参考范文1】On-linevotingbecomesincreasinglypopular,andmanycompetitionsgetpeopleinvolvedinit.Itisbeneficialtosomepeople,whileitputsothersintoadilemmaoverwhethertovoteornot.Inmyopinion,on-linevotingisaninseparablepartofmodernlifeandshouldbewelcomed,sinceitisnomorethanawaytoparticipateinpubliclife.Itmakesnodifferencefromordinaryvotingevents,inwhichcandidatesgoaroundtoseeksupports.Inaddition,theInternetmakessurveyingandvotingeasyandconvenient,regardlessoftimeandspace.Furthermore,votingontheInternetmakesinstantfeedbackpossible.
21Tobehonest,voterssometimesfeelannoyed,notbecausetheyhatevoting,butbecausetheyaredividedbetweenemotionandfairness.Thingswillturnforthebetterifwecanworkoutsomeparticipationrulesforpeopletoobey.Therefore,Iholdapositiveattitudetowardson-linevoting.
22【参考范文2】Internetvotingisquitepopularnowadays.Manypeoplearesomewhatpuzzledatthenegativesideofthevoting,althoughsomearequitehappywithit,andactiveindoingit.Inmyopinion,Internetvotinghasbeguntoshowitsnegativeimpactsonpeopleandsociety.Firstly,peoplemayfeelforcedwhenaskedtodothingsthattheydon’twantto.Secondly,votingofthiskinddoesnotdependonthestrongpointsofthecompetitors,butratheronhowmanysocial-networkingresourcestheyhave.Thirdly,thevotersoreventhecompetitorsinmanycasesarepossiblytakenadvantageofbytheorganizersforcommercialpurposes.
23Inshort,Internetvoting,tosomeextent,isunfair,ifnotimmoral,andcannotbetrusted.Therefore,rulesshouldbeworkedoutandstrictlyobserved.Everyoneinoursocietyshouldhelpthoseinneed,butitismoreimportanttobesincereandearnest.