2023年高考英语复习全国通用第20讲 短文改错（练）（原卷版）

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第20讲短文改错（练）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。（一）、Myfriendtravelstomanyplaceswhenshewasyoung.Butshecan’tdriveitnowduetoaproblemwithherhand.Onthephoneshesaidshewantedtogoandseethegardenswithfullblooms.Sowedrovetothegardenonthesideofthemountainandspentahappierdaythere.Afterseethebeautifulflowers,wehadteaandsnackstogetheronbenchesoverlookingthewidemountainandskylandscape.Itwaslovelytolistenforhertalkaboutherschoollife.Atschoolshehadsubjectssuchascooking,baking,orcrafting.ShewasdelightedtotalkandwhatdelightedIwastohearabouthercolorfullylife!（二）、IthinkthereshouldbeaspeciallyfestivalforteenagersinChinacallingTeenagerVolunteerDay.Asisknowntoall,mostteenagersinChinaarebringupastheonlychildinthefamily.Usuallygiventoomuchcareandattention,andtheyarelikelytotakeeverythingforgranted.InTeenagerVolunteerDay,teenagersareencouragedtodovoluntaryworkswherevertheyareneeded.Theymayhelptoraisemoneyforthosewhichsufferfromaseriousdisease,gotoanursinghometodowhatisgoodfortheelderlyorcollectingbooksforchildreninpoorareas.Themorevoluntaryworktheydo,moreconsiderateandresponsibleyouwillbe.（三）、DearLiHua,I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutEdinburghwhichyouaskaboutinthelaste-mail.Edinburgh,locatedinthesoutheastofScotland,wasthecapitalcityofScotlandaswellastheirpoliticalandculturalcenter.Itcoversaareaof264squarekilometerswithonlyasmallpopulation1.33million.Withtheairportlaininthecenterofthecity,itisconvenientforpeopletogoaround.Closetotheseaside,Edinburghhasamildclimate,thatmakesitoneofthemostpopulartourismcityintheUK.Italsohasabsolutesplendidancientarchitecture,liketheEdinburghCastle.Iwillbehappytoguideyouaroundourcityifyouwillcomehere.Yours,Harry（四）、Oneday,myteachertoldmesomeexcitingnews.Iwasoneofthestudentswhomhadthechancetoplaythepianointheconcert.Heardthis,Ifilledupofamixofexcitementandhorror.Inordertoperfectmypiece,Ipracticedhardthanbefore.Thebigdayarrived.Whenitwasmyturntoplay,andIfeltalittleterrifying.ButI

1slowlymakemywayuptothestage.Withafewmistakemadeduringtheperformance,Ifinishedthewholepiece.Itwasmyfirsttimeperforminpublic,andIrealizedthatthemostimportantthingaretobeconfidentandtakeactionwhenwedoeverything.（五）、Onthecoldmorning,mybrothersuddenlybecameunconscious.Hethenrushedtohospitalanditturnedoutthatshehadaseverebraindisease.Whenhefinallycamebackhome,wedidthatmostfamilieswoulddo.Wetriedtohelphimasmanyaswecould.Oneafternoon,hewasathomealoneforafewhours.Whenwereturned,allthefurnituresinhisbedroomhadbeenrearranged.Mymomasksinsurprise,“Whodidthat?”Mybrotherreplieddelighted,“Me.”Atthatmoment,wewereallgreatlyamazedatthathehadrecoveredalotandhadthestrengthtomovingthings.