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专题18书面表达应用文备战2023高考英语考试易错题(新高考专用)(解析版)【易错题01】不一致1.主谓不一致Whenhehavemoney,heoftenbuyswhathewantto.【答案】have改为has;want改为wants【错误分析】没有注重英语中谓语动词需要和主语保持时态,语态,人称和数的一致。单纯的按汉语意思来翻译。【写作思路】句子的核心谓语动词时刻保持人称一致,时态,语态合理运用,不可按汉语直译。2.前后指代不一致Wecanalsoknowthesocietybyservingyourself.【答案】we改为you;或yourself改为ourselves【错误分析】句中人称代词we和反身代词yourself指代不一致。【写作思路】保持前后指代一致。Wecanalsoknowthesocietybyservingitourselves./Youcanalsoknowthesocietybyservingityourself。3.句子不完整或者多词Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety.ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.【答案】将for改为小写,前面句号改为逗号。【错误分析】“ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon”不是一个完整的句子,仅为一些不连贯的词语,不能独立成句。句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清。【写作思路】Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety,forexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.在句子写完以后,想加些补充说明时需要考虑句子结构和成分是否完整。Notonlythisactivityenrichyourschoollifebutalsoitcanbroadenyourhorizons.【答案】在only后面加can。【错误分析】本句属于特殊句式中的倒装句。助动词漏用,,没有倒装。【写作思路】Notonly用于句子开头时,句子使用部分倒装句型。助动词用于主语之前。故Notonlycanthisactivityenrichyourschoollifebutalsoitcanbroadenyourhorizons.Forthepeoplewhotheyarediligentandkind,theyusemoneyonlytobuywhattheyneed.【答案】去掉they【错误分析】定语从句中关系代词充当成分,重复使用句子成分。【写作思路】关系代词who充当定语从句中的主语,定语从句中多了人称代词。故Forthepeoplewhoarediligentandkind,theyusemoneyonlytobuywhattheyneed.4.词性误用Sincere,Ihopethisactivitywillbeofgreatbenefittoyou.
1【答案】在only后面加can。【错误分析】词性误用一般表现为:介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等【写作思路】遣词造句时,需要考虑词性与修饰的关系。故Sincerely,Ihopethisactivitywillbeofgreatbenefittoyou.Theoldmanwashitbyacarwhenheacrossthestreet.【答案】将across改为wascrossing【错误分析】across是介词,不能误用作动词。【写作思路】Theoldmanwashitbyacarwhenhewascrossingthestreet.5.指代不清Lilywasfriendlytomysisterbecauseshewantedhertobeherbridesmaid.【答案】将her改为mysister【错误分析】本句话没有明确两位姑娘中谁将结婚,谁将当伴娘。代词与被指代的人或物关系不清或者先后所用的代词不一致。【写作思路】写作是逻辑意思以及句子前后指代应当清晰一致。故Lilywasfriendlytomysisterbecauseshewantedmysistertobeherbridesmaid.【易错题02】低级词汇集中1.动词类简单词汇attend,cause,help,consider,consider,happen,have,improve,master,realize,remember,should,thank,use,tend,understand,can’t,decide,liein,thinkof,tryone’sbest,高级词汇takepartin/beinvolvedin/participatein;leadto/resultin/contributeto/giveriseto;dosb.afavor/lendsbahelpinghand;take...intoconsideration/account;occur/comeabout;possess/improve;promote;haveagoodcommandof;beawareof;bear/keepinmind;besupposedto;appreciate/begratefultosb.;makeuseof/takeadvantageof;haveatendencytodosth.;makesenseof/figureout;havetrouble/difficultyindoingsth;determinetodosth;bedeterminedtodosth.;belocatedin/besituatedin;sthoccurstosb.;sparenoefforttodosth.;【动词分析】选词简单,不够高级,汉语意思直白翻译。【选词思路】注重积累,短语优先选择。2.名词类简单词汇chance;choice;people;result;shortcoming;moreandmorepeople;allkindsof高级词汇opportunity;alternative;individuals;consequence;drawback;anincreasingnumberofpeople;awiderangeof;awidevarietyof
2典例剖析(2022全国高考乙卷满分作文)Nowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroominvariousways.【高级词汇】anincreasingnumber代替many【选词思路】注重积累,选词应当使用能够吸引阅卷老师目光的高级词汇和短语,使句子出类拔萃。1.形容词类简单词汇good;difficult;enough;free;important;lucky;popular;proper;rich;tired;beangrywith;bebusywith;beboredwith;beveryhappy;beinterestedin高级词汇outstanding/distinguished/brilliant;challenging;adequate;available;essential/vital/significant;fortunate;enjoygreatpopularity;appropriate;abundant;exhausted/wornout;beannoyedwith;beoccupiedwith/buryoneselfin;befedupwith;bewildwithjoy;haveagreatpassionfor;becrazyabout;sthappealtosb;befascinatedby2.副词类简单词汇finally;hardly;immediately;nowadays;so;suddenly;very高级词汇eventually/ultimately;barely;withouthesitation/delay;currently;consequently/therefore;allofasudden;extremely3.介词类简单词汇considering;during;infact;inaword高级词汇inviewof;inthecourseof;asamatteroffact;tosummarize/inconclusion/tosumup【易错题02】句子呆板不生动1.运用介词(短语)Becausehehelpedme,Ifinishedthetaskontime.→Thanktohishelp,Iaccomplishedthetaskontime.【原句分析】句型呆板,缺乏灵动性。【写作思路】注重积累,短语优先选择。可以运用介词短语对句子进行转化,可以使句子简洁有新意。【知识拓展】常用介词短语有becauseof,aswellas,bydoing;through,butfor,despite,inspiteof,on/uponthanksto等。典例剖析(2022年全国高考新高考I卷应用文写作)Theprogramwiththetheme“Culturedifferences”isintendedto
3arousestudents’interestindifferentculturesespeciallywesterncultureaboutAmericancuisine.【选词思路】介词with短语作后置定语,增加句子的变化性,彰显出灵活的句子结构运用能力。2.运用定语从句和名词性从句Hehastwosonsandbothofthemaredoctors.→Hehastwosons,bothofwhomaredoctors.Weallknowthatheisawarm-heartedman.→Whatisknowntousallisthatheisawarmheartedman.【原句分析】句型较为简单,只运用了比较容易的并列句和宾语从句。【写作思路】不改变句意,运用定语从句和名词性从句可以对并列句进行升华,可以使句子脱颖而出。3.运用非谓语短语对祈使句和从句进行转化Hewastoldmanytimes,buthedidn’tmemorizetherule.→Toldmanytimes,hedidn’tmemorizetherule.Theyenteredtheforestinsearchofthemissingboy.→Theyenteredtheforesttosearchforthemissingboy.AsIwaslyingonthegrass,Ithoughtofmybrotherwhowasstudyingabroad.→Lyingonthegrass,Ithoughtofmybrotherstudyingabroad.【原句分析】句型运用了比较容易的并列句和介词短语,比较单一。【写作思路】一篇高分文章应当多种句型运用丰富,非谓语的熟练运用是能体现高水准的表达方式之一,可以转化祈使句,并列句和从句。二举一反三1.(2022年全国乙卷书面表达)......ItturnsoutthatstudentsattachgreaterimportancetointerestandentertainmentinsteadoftraditionalapproachessuchasreadingbookswhenlearningEnglish.However,frommypointofview,whatbenefitsstudentsmostisreadingEnglishbooks,foritisoneofthebestwaystoincreasevocabularyandtostrengthentheunderstandingofgrammar.【佳句赏析】句意:事实证明,学生在学习英语时更重视兴趣和娱乐,而不是像阅读书籍等传统方法。然而,在我看来,对学生最有利的是阅读英语书籍,因为这是增加词汇量和加强对语法理解的最好方法之一。句型运用Itturnsoutthat灵活生动。动词短语attachgreaterimportanceto代替payattentionto高级不单调,实为背诵佳句。下段运用介词短语frommypointofview于主语之前,句子显得很有新意。使用名词性从句作主语,写作中实为加分项。2.(2022年全国高考新高考I卷读后续写)...Iquietlysaid,“David,ifyou’renotrunningbecauseyou’reafraidsomeoneisgoingtolaugh,that’snotagoodenoughreason.【选词思路】熟练使用形容词enough;副词quietly;连词if,because等引导从句,句子生动不简单。【佳句赏析】句意:我平静地说:“大卫,如果你因为害怕有人会笑而不跑步,那是一个足够好的理由。”if
4引导条件状语从句,because引导原因状语从句,以及句子中形容词和副词的运用都显示出作者很扎实的基本功,适合背诵模仿。1.(2022年全国高考新高考II卷)Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.【选词思路】句子中高级词汇和短语熟练运用,amazing,share...with;havetroubleindoing;plentyof;dealwith。【佳句赏析】句意:这是一个很棒的项目,你可以与学生们分享你的想法。现在,当他们在学习英语方面遇到困难时,很多学生都很想知道如何处理它。where引导的定语从句先行词表示抽象地点的program,这是高考中语法填空的常考知识点,作者能将其运用于写作中,实乃妙句。When后运用了省略句,以及句子中大量的短语,都为作文加分亮点。模拟题通关应用文1.(2022年全国高考新高考I卷写作)假定你是校广播站英语节目“TalkandTalk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:1.节目介绍;2.访谈的时间和话题。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearCaroline,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【满分范文】Onepossibleversion:DearCaroline,Iamwritingtoinviteyoutoattendourprogram“TalkandTalk”inourschoolbroadcastingstationat7:00p.m.nextFriday.Theprogramwiththetheme“Culturedifferences”isintendedtoarousestudents’interestindifferentculturesespeciallywesterncultureaboutAmericancuisine.
5Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youropinionwillbeofimportance.Intheprogram,youcancommunicatewithourschoolstudents,whichnotonlyprovidesaplatformforstudentstorelievetheirpressureandaddspicetotheirdullroutine,butalsoinspirestheirinterestinwesternculture.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldspareyourtimetojoinus.Anearlyreplyaboutyourfinaldecisionwillbehighlyappreciated.Yours,【佳作赏析】第一段开门见山表达写信目的Iamwritingtoinviteyouto...。紧接着便是节目话题介绍Theprogramwiththetheme“Culturedifferences”isintendedtoarousestudents’interestindifferentculturesespeciallywesterncultureaboutAmericancuisine.第二段第一句表明邀请参加的目的Asourdistinguishedfore....接着展开描写参加活动的意义Intheprogram,youcancommunicate...。其中倒装句notonly...butalso是一大亮点。最后一段再次邀请.I’dappreciateitifyou...。2.(2022年全国高考新高考II卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“TalkandTalk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:1.节目介绍;2.访谈的时间和话题。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearCaroline,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【满分范文】DearCaroline,ThisismyfirsttimethatIhaveinvitedyoutoattendourprogram—TalkandTalk.ItistenyearssinceTalkandTalkwasestablished.Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.IfyouareavailableonthisSunday,ItogetherwiththewholeTalkandTalkstaffamwaitingforyourcoming.I’dappreciateitifyoutakemyinvitationintoconsideration.Yours,LiHua
6【佳作赏析】1.句型“自从......以来多久了”ItistenyearssinceTalkandTalkwasestablished.1.省略句whenhavingtrouble的运用。2.短语搭配运用灵活share...with;havetroubleindoingsth;urgetodosth;beavailable;3.虚拟语气句式运用I’dappreciateitifyou...3.(2022年1月浙江卷)假定你是李华,在“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris,现在他已回国,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.回忆活动经历;2.分享个人收获;3.希望保持联系。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearChris,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【满分范文】DearChris,Howareyoudoingthesedays?IthasbeenayearsinceyoucamebacktoIreland.Imissyousomuch.IstillremembertheverydaywhenwemetatChina-IrelandCulturalFestivaltwoyearsago.Itwasatthatfestivalthatyousharedsomanyinterestingthingsaboutyourcountrytogether,throughwhichIlearnedalotaboutyourfood,cultureandhistory.Wereallyenjoyedourselvesthere.What’sfarmoreimportantisthatwebecamegoodfriendsthen.ThoughIfeltalittlesorrythatyouleftChinalastyear,Iampleasedtoknowyouareleadingahappylifeinyourhometown.Ihopewecankeepintouchoften.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【佳作赏析】1.句型表示“自从......以来多久了”IthasbeenayearsinceyoucamebacktoIreland.2.定语从句whenwemetatChina-IrelandCulturalFestivaltwoyearsago.3.强调句型Itwasatthatfestivalthatyousharedsomanyinterestingthingsaboutyourcountrytogether,4.非限制性定语从句throughwhichIlearnedalotaboutyourfood,cultureandhistory.5.名词性从句中主语从句和表语从句What’sfarmoreimportantisthatwebecamegoodfriendsthen.6.让步状语从句ThoughIfeltalittlesorrythatyouleftChinalastyear,7.短语灵活运用如:share...with;ampleasedto;areleadingahappylife;keepintouch.
71.(2022湖南雅礼中学测试卷)假如你是李华,你的巴基斯坦笔友Muhammad准备明年来你校做交换生,写信向你咨询如何学习中文。请你用英语给他回封电子邮件。要点:1.表示欢迎;2.提出学习中文建议;3.期待与祝福。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearMuhammad,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【满分范文】DearMuhammad,Welcometobeanexchangestudentatourschoolnextyear.AstohowtolearnChinese,herecomemytips.First,youmightaswelltakeaChinesecoursetolayasolidfoundation.What’smore,itisawisechoicetopickupproperChineseTVprograms,whichwillenableyoutoaccessstandardandauthenticChinese.Plus,befriendingwarmheartedChinesefriendsaroundyouissuretobetteryouroralChinese.Meanwhile,itcanenrichyourknowledgeofChinesecustoms.Finally,Isuggestyoutrye-mailingmeinChinese.Ihopemysuggestionsabovemaybenefityou.HopeyouwillmakesufficientprogressinChinesesoon.Iamlookingforwardtoyourarrival.Yours,LiHua【佳作赏析】1.Plus,notonlyisbefriendingwarmheartedChinesefriendsaroundyousuretobetteryouroralChinese,butalsoitcanenrichyourknowledgeofChinesecustoms.2.What’smore,itisawisechoicetopickupproperChineseTVprograms,whichwillenableyoutoaccessstandardandauthenticChinese.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)3.Finally,Isuggestyoutrye-mailingmeinChinese.(运用了省略that的宾语从句和虚拟语气)4.词汇积累:至于:asto→asfor;建议:tip/suggestion→advice;明智的:wise→advisable;
8此外:what’smore→besides6.(2022年全国甲卷书面表达)你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:1.海洋的重要性;2.保护海洋的倡议。注意:1.词数100左右;2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【onepossibleversion】OurOceans,OurResponsibilityDoyouknowJune8,whichisnotonlyadayforthecollegeentranceexaminationtoChineseyoungsters,butalsoWorldOceansDay,designatedbytheUNtoarousepeople’sawarenesstoprotecttheoceans?Theoceanisthehometoalllifeonearth,richinnaturalresources,andalsoourbluehomeforahappylifeandhappygrowth.Tocarefortheoceanistocareforourfuture.Soweshouldshoulderresponsibilitytoprotectit.Tobeginwith,protecttheMarineecologicalenvironmentandadvocategreenenvironmentalprotectionactions.What’smore,tostrengthentheconsciousnessoftheseainaccordancewiththelaw,consciouslyprotectthebluelandandresourcesenvironment,startfromme,startfromnow,startfromaroundthings,takeanactivepartingreenvolunteeractivities,andadvocategreenenvironmentalprotection.Doyouagreewithme?Ifso,let’shandinhandtoprotecttheMarineenvironment,andinherittheMarinecivilizationfromhearttoheart.(165)【佳作赏析】1.运用定语从句whichisnotonlyadayforthecollegeentranceexaminationtoChineseyoungsters,butalso...,并在其中穿插关联词组notonly...butalso...。2.目的状语Tocarefortheoceanistocareforourfuture.中todo不定式的运用。3.熟练运用短语arouseone’sawareness...;berichin;carefor;tobeginwith;what’smore;inaccordancewith;takeanactivepartin;handinhand等。7.(2022年全国乙卷书面表达)学校英文报正在开展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.学习活动状况描述:2.简单评论;
93.你的建议。注意:1.词数100左右;2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomTherearemanythingswecandotolearnEnglishwell.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分范文】LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomTherearemanythingswecandotolearnEnglishwell.RecentlyasurveyabouthowtolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroomhasbeenconducted.Ascanbeclearlyseenfromthestatistics,appreciatingEnglishsongsaccountsfor65percentcomparedwith50%whochoosetowatchmoviesasawayofEnglishlearning.ReadingEnglishbooksprovetobethelesspopularwaysmakingup18%,togetherwithvisitingEnglishlearningwebsites,takingup12%.ItturnsoutthatstudentsattachgreaterimportancetointerestandentertainmentinsteadoftraditionalapproachessuchasreadingbookswhenlearningEnglish.However,frommypointofview,whatbenefitsstudentsmostisreadingEnglishbooks,foritisoneofthebestwaystoincreasevocabularyandtostrengthentheunderstandingofgrammar.Therefore,studentsbecomebestEnglishlearnersquickly.【佳作赏析】文中加分句型和短语都能运用自如。1.Therebe句型的运用TherearemanythingswecandotolearnEnglishwell.2.As引导的定语从句Ascanbeclearlyseenfromthestatistics3.动名词短语作主语appreciatingEnglishsongsaccountsfor65percentcomparedwith50%4.定语从句whochoosetowatchmoviesasawayofEnglishlearning.5.动名词短语做主语ReadingEnglishbooksprovetobethelesspopularwaysmakingup18%...6.句型Itturnsoutthatstudents......的运用.7.名词性从句中主语从句的运用whatbenefitsstudentsmostisreadingEnglishbooks,8.(2022重庆一中模拟)
10假定你是李华,你的英国网友James邀请你为他的同学拍摄一条短视频,介绍你的高中校园生活。请用英语写一封回信。内容包括:1.表示同意;2.计划拍摄的内容(1~2点);3.邀请对方提建议。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当増加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearJames,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【满分范文】DearJames,Howiseverythinggoing?It’smygreatprivilegetorecordashortvideoaboutmycampuslifeforyourclassmates.I’mwritingtotellyouwhatwillbeincludedinthevideo.Firstofall,asastudent,takingdifferentclassesismydailyroutine,soIwouldliketorecordascenefocusingononeofmyChineseclassestoshowmyacademiclifeandChineseculture.Inaddition,awidevarietyofextra-curricularactivitiesareheldeverydayinmyschoolandthereforeshowingmyafter-schoolactivitiesisalsoinmyplan,fromwhichyourclassmatescanlearnthediversityofChinesehighschoollife.Iwishsuchavideocouldliveuptoyourexpectations.Ifthereisanythingthatneedsimproving,pleasedon’thesitatetotellme.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【佳作赏析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定考生是李华,你的英国网友James邀请你为他的同学拍摄一条短视频,介绍你的高中校园生活。请用英语写一封回信。1.Firstofall,asastudent,takingdifferentclassesismydailyroutine,soIwouldliketorecordascenefocusingononeofmyChineseclassestoshowmyacademiclifeandChineseculture.(使用了动名词短语作主语和现在分词短语作定语)1.Inaddition,awidevarietyofextra-curricularactivitiesareheldeverydayinmyschoolandthereforeshowingmyafter-schoolactivitiesisalsoinmyplan,fromwhichyourclassmatescanlearnthediversityofChinesehighschoollife.(使用了动名词短语做主语和fromwhich引导的非限制性定语从句。)2.词汇积累:荣幸:privilege
11以……为中心:focuson此外:Inaddition需要:need9.(2022湖南周南中学测试)假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Kim将于下周访问你校,你想邀请他参与下周学校组织的“劳动实践周”(LabourWeek)活动。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.邀请Kim参加活动;2.介绍活动目的和内容。注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearKim,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearKim,It’sgreattoknowyouwillvisitourschoolnextweekandI’dliketoinviteyoutojoinintheactivity—LabourWeekinourschool.Theevent,whichwilllastaweekasscheduled,isintendedtoraiseourawarenessoflabourandremindusofhowvaluableandrespectablehardworkis.Variousactivitieswillbeorganized,rangingfromplantingvegetablesontheschoolfarmtosortinggarbageinaneco-friendlyway.Besides,eachclasswillholdameetingwiththethemeofadeeperreflectiononthisactivityattheendoftheweek.I’msurethatyouwillenjoythisunforgettableexperienceandbenefitalot. Wishyouagoodjourneyandhopetoseeyousoon.Yours,LiHua【佳作赏析】1.which引导的非限制性定语从句Theevent,whichwilllastaweekasscheduled,isintendedtoraiseourawarenessoflabourandremindusofhowvaluableandrespectablehardworkis.2.运用了that引导的宾语从句I’msurethatyouwillenjoythisunforgettableexperienceandbenefitalot.3.词汇积累:参加:joinin提高:raise
12此外:besides各种各样的:various10.(2022福建厦门测试卷)你校英语俱乐部将要举办“职业规划”主题分享会,请你结合个人情况写一篇稿件,内容包括:1.理想职业;2.个人优势;3.相关准备。注意:1.词数80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。MapOutMyCareerPath_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 MapOutMyCareerPathHelloeveryone,itismygreathonorandpleasuretosharewithyoumyideasonfuturecareerplan.Asweallknow,ourfuturecareerhasagreateffectonourlife,whichrequiresourdeepconsideration.Asforme,Iamdeterminedtobeacomputerscientistinthefuture.Thereareseveralreasonsformychoice.Firstly,IhavebeeninterestedincomputersciencesinceIwasalittleboyandhavespentalotoftimeonself-teaching.IcansayforsurethatIamhighlyexpertatcomputerknowledge.Moreimportantly,computerscienceiscloselyrelatedtomostfieldsofscienceandhasadecidingroleinonecountry’soveralldevelopment.Iamwillingtocombinemycareerwithourcountry’sdevelopmentandmakemycontributions.Toconclude,Ihavealreadymadeupmymindstostudyitwithallmyeffortsandmakeuseofallmysparetimetolearnrelatedknowledgetoprepareformyuniversitystudy.Thanksforlistening.【佳作赏析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于参加的国际高中生论坛,就自己未来的职业规划发表演讲。1.复合句Moreimportantly,computerscienceiscloselyrelatedtomostfieldsofscience,whichhasadecidingroleinonecountry’soveralldevelopment.2.运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句Asweallknow,ourfuturecareerhasagreateffectonourlife,whichrequiresourdeepconsideration.3.运用了since引导的时间状语从句Firstly,IhavebeeninterestedincomputersciencesinceIwasalittleboyandhavespentalotoftimeonself-teaching.4.词汇积累荣幸:honor影响:effect最后:toconclude
13下定决心:makeupone’smindsto