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2023年高考英语复习讲练测第21讲书面表达（练）一、假设你是明启中学高三学生王磊，最近在学校英语报“AdviceColumn”中看到一则启示，关于征询同学们“提高在线学习有效性”的建议。请给该报的编辑写一封邮件，内容须包括：1）你的建议2）你的理由___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Deareditor:I'mWangLei,asenior3studentofMingqimiddleschool. Recently,IsawamessageintheadvicecolumnoftheschoolEnglishnewspaperanditaskedstudentsforsuggestionsonimprovingtheeffectivenessofonlinelearning.I’mwritingtogivemyadvice.Firstofall,youshouldfindaquietroomandputyourphoneoutsidetheroom.Thereasonisthatyoushouldconcentrateallyourattentiononthestudyandmakesureyouarenotdisturbedduringyourstudy.What’smore,youshouldcommunicatewithteachersandstudentsactivelyinthediscussionboards.Bydoingthis,youcannotonlyshareyourthoughtsandexperiencesbutalsoremembertheknowledgewell.Ihopemysuggestionsuseful.Lookingforwardtoyourreply. Yours, WangLei【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英语报的编辑写邮件，对于“提高在线学习有效性”提出建议，并且给出理由。【高分句型1】Thereasonisthatyoushouldconcentrateallyourattentiononthestudyandmakesureyouarenotdisturbedduringyourstudy.(that引导表语从句)【高分句型2】Bydoingthis,youcannotonlyshareyourthoughtsandexperiencesbutalsoremembertheknowledgewell.(notonly…butalso…引导的并列句）二、假定你是李华，你的英国网友James邀请你为他的同学拍摄一条短视频，介绍你的高中校园生活。请用英语写一封回信。内容包括：1.表示同意；2.计划拍摄的内容（1~2点）；3.邀请对方提建议。
1注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当増加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJames,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJames,Howiseverythinggoing?It’smygreatprivilegetorecordashortvideoaboutmycampuslifeforyourclassmates.I’mwritingtotellyouwhatwillbeincludedinthevideo.Firstofall,asastudent,takingdifferentclassesismydailyroutine,soIwouldliketorecordascenefocusingononeofmyChineseclassestoshowmyacademiclifeandChineseculture．Inaddition,awidevarietyofextra-curricularactivitiesareheldeverydayinmyschoolandthereforeshowingmyafter-schoolactivitiesisalsoinmyplan,fromwhichyourclassmatescanlearnthediversityofChinesehighschoollife．Iwishsuchavideocouldliveuptoyourexpectations．Ifthereisanythingthatneedsimproving,pleasedon’thesitatetotellme.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定考生是李华，你的英国网友James邀请你为他的同学拍摄一条短视频，介绍你的高中校园生活。请用英语写一封回信。【高分句型1】Firstofall,asastudent,takingdifferentclassesismydailyroutine,soIwouldliketorecordascenefocusingononeofmyChineseclassestoshowmyacademiclifeandChineseculture．(使用了动名词短语作主语和现在分词短语作定语)【高分句型2】Inaddition,awidevarietyofextra-curricularactivitiesareheldeverydayinmyschoolandthereforeshowingmyafter-schoolactivitiesisalsoinmyplan,fromwhichyourclassmatescanlearnthediversityofChinesehighschoollife．(使用了动名词短语做主语和fromwhich引导的非限制性定语从句。)三、假设你是李华，刚刚得知自己被某大学录取了。你打算给英国好友Jack发一封邮件，告诉他这个好消息。内容包括：1.你的大学生活计划；2.征求对方建议。注意：1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJack,
2____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearJack,I’mveryexcitedtotellyouthatIhavebeenadmittedtoBeijingUniversity,whichhasbeenmydreamsinceIwasakid.Ican’twaittosharemyplanforuniversitywithyou.First,I’lldefinitelydevotemyselftostudyingprofessionalknowledge,whichwillequipmewithknowledgeandcompetenceforthefuture.Moreover,itisamustformetolearnhowtobekindandresponsible.OnlybydoingsocanIbecomeanacceptedpersonandfitinwellwithsociety.Additionally,gettinginvolvedinvariouspositiveactivitiescannotonlyenrichmylifebuthelpmeimproveineveryaspect.Doyouhaveanysuggestionforme?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jack告知自己被大学录取的消息，同时想对方征求读过大学生活的建议，最后对他给予你的帮助的感谢。【高分句型1】First,I’lldefinitelydevotemyselftostudyingprofessionalknowledge,whichwillequipmewithknowledgeandcompetenceforthefuture.（运用了which引导的定语从句）【高分句型2】OnlybydoingsocanIbecomeanacceptedpersonandfitinwellwithsociety.（运用了only+状语置于句首引起的倒装句）四、你校传统中国画社团正打算向外籍留学生招募新成员，请你以社团的名义写一则招聘启事，内容如下：1.启事目的；2.加入社团的好处；3.如何加入。注意：1.词数100词左右；2.开头和落款已经为你写好。NewMembersWanted____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TraditionalChinesePaintingClub【答案】 ThetraditionalChinesepaintingclubislookingfornewmembers.Byparticipatinginouractivities,youwillbenefitalot.Notonlycanyoucultivateyourpatienceand
3imagination,butalsoyoucanreachahigherlevelofartisticthinking.LearningtraditionalChinesepainting,youwillgeteasieraccesstoourhistoryandculture.Foreignstudentsofallgradesarewelcome.Ifyouareinterested,pleasefillintheapplicationformandsendittotheemailaddressatTraditionalChinesePainting@163.combeforeMay7,2022.Don’thesitatetojoinus!TraditionalChinesePaintingClub【解析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生以社团的名义写一则招聘启事。【高级句式1】Notonlycanyoucultivateyourpatienceandimagination,butalsoyoucanreachahigherlevelofartisticthinking.（运用了Notonly...butalso引导的两个并列分句，且Notonly位于句首，句子使用半倒装）【高级句式2】Ifyouareinterested,pleasefillintheapplicationformandsendittotheemailaddressatTraditionalChinesePainting@163.combeforeMay7,2022.（运用了If引导条件状语从句）五、你校正在举行“回家不背书包”运动，请用英文写一篇倡议书，内容包括：1．睡眠的重要性；2．提高学习效率；3．呼吁大家响应。注意：1．词数80左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。GoingHomeWithoutSchoolbags____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 Inordertodrawourattentiontotheconcernthathighschoolstudentsdon’thaveenoughsleep,ourschoolisholdingacampaignof“Gohomewithoutaschoolbag”.Theimportanceofagoodsleepcanneverbeemphasizedtoomuch.Itcanhelpusstayfocusedinclassandimprovethestudyefficiency,furthermore,servesasabasicfoundationforgoodhealth.Therefore,itissuggestedthatweshouldworkoutanefficientplanforourschoollife,strikingabalancebetweenworkandstudy.Onlybykeepingahealthylife-stylecanwehaveastrongbodytodealwithfuturechallenges.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校正在举行“回家不背书包”运动。要求考生用英语写一封倡议书，呼吁大家响应。[高分句型1]Inordertodrawourattentiontotheconcernthathighschoolstudentsdon’thaveenoughsleep,ourschoolisholdingacampaignof“Gohomewithoutaschoolbag”.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)[高分句型2]Therefore,itissuggestedthatweshouldworkoutanefficientplanforourschoollife,strikingabalancebetweenworkandstudy.(运用了it做形式主语的句型，that从句为真正的主语)六、
4假定你是李华，你们学校正在举办以环保为主题的英语作文大赛，请你写篇作文参赛。内容包括：1.地球面临的问题；2.我们应如何保护地球；3.呼吁人们采取行动。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Inrecentyears,theenvironmentisworseningwiththedevelopmentofeconomy.Ifwedon’ttakeactionnow,theearthwillbeunfittoliveon.Actually,therearemanythingswecandotomakeadifference.Forexample,wecanrecycleuseditemssothatwecansavenaturalresources.Wecanchoosepublictransportinsteadofprivatecarstofightthegreenhouseeffect.Moreimportantly,weshouldturnofftheelectricalapplianceswhenwedon’tusethem.Itiseveryone’sresponsibilitytoprotecttheenvironment.Ifweworktogether,theearthwillbecomegreenerandmorebeautiful.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以环保为主题，写篇作文参加英语作文大赛。内容包括：1.地球面临的问题；2.我们应如何保护地球；3.呼吁人们采取行动。【高分句型1】Actually,therearemanythingswecandotomakeadifference.(运用了省略关系代词引导的限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Forexample,wecanrecycleuseditemssothatwecansavenaturalresources.
