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1、高二英语读后续写(5.21)一、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Atfirst, Surrell didn'tseetheblacksmokeorflamesshootingfromthewindows ofhisneighbors' home.Heandhiswifewerejusthavingadinnerintheirownhouse inAllentown, Pennsylvania,whentheyheardsomeonescreaming,“Thehouseison fire!”Hewent
2、toinvestigate. That'swhenhesawtwowomenandagirlcrazilyata lossontheirporch(走廊). Itwashisneighbor'shouse.“Thebaby'sinsidethere!”oneofthewomencried.Thoughthefiredepartment hadbeencalled,Surrell,then64,instinctively(本能地)raninside.“Thebaby”was 8-year-old Tiara Roberts,whoa
3、lwayscalledhimUncle Surrell.Shewasthewoman's granddaughterandaplaymateofSurrell'sthreeyoungestkids,8,10,and12.The othertwoontheporchwereTiara'sauntandcousin.Enteringtheburninghousewaslikerunninginto“abucketofblackpaint”.The thick smoke causedSurrelltowalkblindlyaround
4、, burned hiseyes,andmadeit impossibleforhimtobreathe.Hefelthisthroatandlungs burned,andeveryblink stung(蛰)hiseyes. Theconditionswouldhavebeenvery dangerous foranyone,but forSurrell,whohaschronicobstructivepulmonarydisease(慢性阻塞性肺病)and wasin hospital justhalfayearago,th
5、eywerelife-risking.Afterafewminutesinthesmoke-filledhousesearchingbutinvain,heran outside tocatchhisbreath.“WhereisTiara?”heaskeddesperately. “Thesecondfloor,” herauntshoutedback.Surrellknewhecouldn'tholdhisbreathforlong.Soheutteredalittleprayer,“Well,God,thisisit. Yo
6、ugottohelpme,becauseI'mnotcomingoutwithoutthat littlegirl.”注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150词左右;2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Takingadeephealth,hewentinasecondtime.____________________________________Paragraph2:Surrellwokeupint
7、hehospitalacoupleofdayslater. _______________________________【写作思路与分析】此题要求根据短文的情节,结合所提供的关键词语以及所续写段落的开头语来进行续写。短文续写可以遵循以下步骤: (一)文本分析本文叙述了Surrell不顾自己年老体弱,奋不顾身地冲进火海救护邻居小孩Tiara的故事。在阅读文本时,我们要带着when(havingadinner)、where(Surrell'sneighbor's home,thesecondfloor,hospital)、who(S
8、urrell,Tiara,Tiara'sGrandmotherandTiara'srelatives)、what(FirebrokeoutandTiarawastrappedonthesecondfloor)、why(Thehousewasonfi