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1、高二英语读后续写(5.13)一、品读这篇文章,构思写作思路。(可以动手写个草稿,对比一下所给范文)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Iwastouchedthroughexperiences,memories,books,stories,animals,angels,andmostofallotherpeople.Peoplehavemovedmeandmolded(对……影响重大)mewithmomentsofloveandexamplesofkindness.OnetimeonthedaybeforeChristmasmanyyearsagowhenI
2、wasaminimumwagemill(工厂)worker,Ifoundmyselfwithverylittlemoneyandverylittletimetobuymysmallchildrenafewsimpletoys.IknewthattheywouldhavetobecheaponesandIhopedmychildrenwouldlikethem.Ihatednothavingenoughtogivethemmore.Ihatedbeingpoor.AndIhatedfeelingbadatChristmasratherthanhappy.Ipulledintoasto
3、reparkinglotandcountedmymoneyagain.Itwasn’tmuchbutmaybeIcouldgetsomethingsmallwithit.AsIwasgettingoutofthecarInoticedtheSalvationArmy(救世军)bellringerattheentrance.IfeltbadagainbecauseIdidn’tfeelIcouldspareanythingtogivehim.Istartedwalkingtowardstheentrancewhentwocarspulledintoemptyparkingspotsi
4、nfrontofme.Thefirstwasashiny,newCadillacandIfeltatwingeofjealousywhenIsawit.“Hownice,”Ithought,“Woulditbetohaveenoughmoneytobuyacarlikethat.”Thesecondcar,though,wasanancientsedan(轿车)morebeat-upandrustythantheoneIwasdriving.Amanhopped(冲)outoftheCadillacandhurriedintothestorerightpastthebellring
5、erwithoutasecondglance.Outoftheoldsedancameayoungmotherwiththreesmallchildrenintow(紧随着).Herclotheslookedaswornoutashercar,yetshestoppedinfrontofthebellringer,smiled,openedherpurse,anddroppedabillinhisredkettle(钱罐).注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线
6、标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Istoodthereforaminuteinastonishment.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Inthatsecondaw
7、armthtouchedme,myjealousyandhatred(憎恨)leftme,andalltheloveandjoythatareChristmasfilledme.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文本解读:本文为夹叙夹议文。作者是一位