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1、作文讲解评分样卷1.WewantlearnEnglishwellmustspeakingandwriting.Theybothimportant.2分典型中式英语，考生只是按汉语词序罗列出一些英语单词。阅卷员稍微过目便可确定分数。2.ManypeoplethinkatestofspokenEnglishisnecessary.BecauseEnglishisakindlanque,spokenEnglishisaimportantpartforlearningEnglishpeople.5分第一句切题，语言表达正确；第二句表达
2、思想不清楚，不知所云。3.ManypeoplethinkatestofspokenEnglishisnecessary.Theyhavemanyreasons.Thefirst,ourcountryhasmadeatightconnectionswithmanyothercountries.8分比较切题，第一、二句表达正确。第三句有严重的错误，可改为：First,ourcountryhascloseties...4.ManypeoplebelieveatestofspokenEnglishisnecessary.Onlywhe
3、napersonspeaksfluentEnglishcanhesayhehasagoodcommandofEnglish.Therefore,atestshouldbedevisedtoassessstudents’abilityinspokenEnglish.14分切题，表达思想清楚，文意连贯,用词恰当。评分样卷ALettertotheUniversityPresidentabouttheCanteenServiceonCampus假如你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务
4、等，可以是表扬，可以是批评，也可以兼而有之。Thankforreadthisletterforthebusyworking-time.WhenIhaveenteredthisschool,Iworriedaboutthelunch.Becausethefoodisbadorgoodwillcauseourhealth.2分条理不清，思路混乱，不知所云。可改为：Thankyoutoreadthisletter.SinceIenteredouruniversity,I’venotbeencontentwiththecanteens
5、erviceoncampus.启示恰当套用试题中英文可提高作文成绩。Today,Iwritethislettertoyou,mydearPresident.Iwanttellyousomethingaboutthecanteenserviceoncampus.Ouruniversityhavetencampuses.Butthesamefoodindifferentcampus,thepriceisnotsame.5分基本切题，但有严重的语言错误，表达思想不清楚。Ithinkourcanteenisnotwellenoughf
6、orus.Asfollows:firstly,thepriceistoohighforsomeofustoafford.Wealsofindthatthepriceishigherthananyotheruniversitiesinourcity.Moreover,thoughthehighprice,ithasn’tbroughtwithgoodqualityoffood.8分基本切题，但有些地方表达思想不够清楚。I’mveryluckytoattendtothisworld-famousuniversity,butI’mn
7、otcontentwiththecanteenserviceoncampus.Firstly,thequalityofthedishesshouldbeimproved.…Moreandmorestudentsarecomplainingabouteatingthesamefoodeachday.(14分)范文January12th,2002DearMr.President, Iamastudentofcomputerscienceinouruniversity.Iamwritingthislettertoyoutoshowo
8、urconcernaboutthecanteenserviceoncampusonbehalfofsomestudentsofourdepartment.Firstly,wefeelweneedmorevarietiesoffoodsservedtothestudents,w
