第三部分 第二讲ppt课件.ppt

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1、第二讲　读后续写典例展示(2017·浙江6月高考)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Onabright，warmJulyafternoon，MacHollan，aprimaryschoolteacher，wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair，buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon，andtheywouldcatchupwith

2、himsoon.AsMacpedaled(骑行)alongalone，hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.“Man，that’sabigdog！”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtotheside，hesawinstantlythatitwasn’tadogatal

3、l，butawolf，quicklycatchingupwithhim.Mac’sheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofbearspray.Withonehandonthebars，hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal，andtoMac’srelief，itfellback，shakingitshead.Butaminutelater，itwasbyhissideagain.Thenitattackedtheback

4、ofMac’sbike，tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime，andagain，itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase(追赶).Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoslowdown.Hesawasteepuphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewthatoncehehitthehill，he’dbeeasy

5、caughtupandthewolf’steethwouldbetearingintohisflesh.Atthismoment，PaulandBeckyweredrivingtheircarontheirwaytoAlaska.Theydidn’tthinkmuchofitwhentheysawtwocyclistsrepairingtheirbikeonthesideoftheroad.Abitlater，theyspottedwhatthey，too，assumedwasadogrunningalongside

6、amanonabike.Astheygotcloser，theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.Macheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Hepulledinfrontofitasthewolfwascatchingupfast，justadozenyardsawaynow.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。一、审题思路导航二、

7、抓住段首句设问续写段首1：Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.设问：Whydiditstop?HowdidMacfeel?WhatwouldMac/Pauldo？...续写段首2：Afewminuteslater，theothertwocyclistsarrived.设问：Aftertheyarrived，whatdidtheysee?Howdidtheyfeel?Whatwouldtheydo？...三、谋篇(1)续写材料第一段所给的首句是Thecarabruptlystoppedi

8、nfrontofhim.，在行文过程中应抓住关键词语thecarstopped，再发挥丰富的想象，把Paul停车后如何在千钧一发之际拯救Mac的过程写得趣味横生又合乎情理。(2)第二段所给的首句是Afewminuteslater，theothertwocyclistsarrived.，起承上启下的作用。朋友到达之后看到、听到并做了什么。最后应该