高三作文指导润色文章ppt课件.pptx

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1、WorldExpocommemorativecoinsWhydoyouwanttohavethisWorldExpocoin?1.so---that2.too---to3.Itis---that---4.With---5.(Thereason)why---isthat---6.belikelyto/Itislikelythat---7.Itseemsthat---sb./sth.seemstobe/do8.Itneveroccurstosb.that---9.Only---10.Thereisnodoubtthat---11.havetrouble/difficulty(in)doin

2、g12.can’thelpdoing13.Themore---,themore---14.Thereisnopoint(in)doingsth.15.pastorpresentparticiples高三英语写作指导润饰词句，增加文采DearSirorMadam,Pleaselistentomyhope.I’maseniormiddleschoolstudent.IwanttobeanexchangestudentinEnglandsinceIwasachild.It’sthebestwaytoimprovemylanguage.Englandhasmanypalacesandchurc

3、hes.Iwanttolivewiththehostfamily,IcanknowmoreabouttheEnglishculture.Icanmakesomefriendswithblueeyesandgoldenhair.Ithinkit’scoolandwonderful.Itcanopenmyeyesightareainthisway.That’smyheartwords.Pleaseconsiderit.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua评点：1.基本交代清楚了来信目的；2.没有分段3.没有运用过渡的连接词；4.表达方式单一，语句欠丰富，5.基本上没有高级词汇和句型；

4、6.开头生硬,结尾处汉式英语较严重.Thefirstparagraph:Giveabriefself–introductionandmakeclearyourpurposeThesecondparagraph:Givereasonsorlistsomeadvantagesofbeinganexchangestudent.(containingfacts,data,examples,etc.)Thethirdparagraph:Expresswishesandgratitude.DearSirorMadam,Pleaselistentomyhope.I’maseniormiddlesch

5、oolstudent.IwanttobeanexchangestudentinEnglandsinceIwasachild.It’sthebestwaytoimprovemylanguage.Englandhasmanypalacesandchurches.Iwanttolivewiththehostfamily,IcanknowmoreabouttheEnglishculture.Icanmakesomefriendswithblueeyesandgoldenhair.Ithinkit’scoolandwonderful.Itcanopenmyeyesightareainthiswa

6、y.That’smyheartwords.Pleaseconsiderit.Yoursfaithfully,LiHuaI’maseniormiddleschoolstudent.Iwanttobeanexchangestudent.I’maseniorschoolgirlwhowantstobeanexchangestudenttoEnglandforoneyear.It’sthebestwaytoimprovemylanguage.AsEnglishisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantinjob-huntingandcommunication,thereisn

7、odoubtthatbeinganexchangestudentisaneffectivewaytosuccess.1.使用从句Iwanttolivewiththehostfamily,IcanknowmoreabouttheEnglishculture.ItislivingtogetherwiththehostfamilythatcanhelpmegetabetterunderstandingoftheEnglishculture.2.使用强