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1、如何增加文章的亮点编写者：田星霞审核人：蔡淑玲Learningaims(学习目标):Toimproveabilityofwriting.Importantpoints(学习重点):Tolearnsomeknowledgeoforganizingthepassage.Difficultpoints(学习难点):Tolearnsomeskillsofwriting,suchashowtouseadvancedwordsandsentencesandhowtoconnectthesentences.Ⅰ、LeadinReadthefollowingpassage（2009福建卷）.Underli

2、nethebeautifulwords,phrases,sentencesandconjunctions.Therearemanyadvantagesofsmiling.Itcannotonlymakeushappy,butalsopleaseothers.Ifwesmileatlife,lifewillsmileonusinreturn.SoIwanttosmileatallwheneverandwhereverpossible.First,Iwouldliketosmileatmyparentsbecausetheyhavegivenmelifeandtakenallthetroub

3、letobringmeup.Theyarrangealmosteverythingforme.Withtheirhelp,Ihavemadegreatprogress.Iwouldliketosay"Thankyou"tothemwithasmile.Thenmysmileshouldgotomyself,foronlyinthiswaycanIgainmoreconfidenceinsmilingmytroublesawayandliveabetterlife.Inaword,let'sgreeteverydaywithasmile.Tomorrowisanotherday.Ⅱ、Som

4、eskillsabouthowtobeautifythewriting.ⅰ、怎样使用较高级的词汇观察思考：体会下列句子换词后的效果。1.Chinaisnowintheprimarystageofsocialism.Chinaiscurrentlyintheprimarystageofsocialism2.Thejobisverydifficulttodo.Thejobisverychallenging.3.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.Thankstothegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfor

5、table.4.Weallthinkheisagreatman.Weallthinkhighlyofhim.反思：高级词汇是什么？_________________________________________巩固提高1.Finallyhesawtheyoungman’slightovercoatinthedistance.___________________________________（catch）2.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.____________________________________________________

6、___(Themore)3.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.___________________________________(occur)4.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.————————————————————————(turnout)45.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.——————————————————(trouble)ⅱ．怎样使用丰富的句式观察思考：试体会下面黑体部分的效果：GroupA1.Theflathasanareaof25squaremetersandthereisabedroom,abathro

7、om,andakitchen.Theflathasanareaof25squaremeterswithabedroom,abathroom,andakitchen.2.Ihaveasurprisetogiveyou.Ihaveasurpriseforyou.反思总结：合理利用_______________，能有效降低句子的复杂性，在使句子通顺自然的同时，也能减少语法错误。GroupB1、Uponarrival,webegantowo