朱泰祺：考研英语精选作文样文及评分规范详解.docx

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1、朱泰祺：考研英语精选作文样文及评分规范详解　　大作文　　第五档范文19分　　Asillustratedinthecartoon,eachpersonsitsintheirownworkroom.Infrontofthemisacomputer.Everyonelooksatthescreencarefully,andcommunicatewiththeircolleaguesthroughthenetinsteadoftalkingfacetoface.Theirworkplacesareplacedlikeanet.Andbelowthecartoon,there

2、isatopicwhichsays:thenearandfaramongtheInternet.　　Fromthecartoon,wecanconcludethatthecartoonistwantstoconveysuchamessage:withthepopularityofcomputers,peoplefromallovertheworldbecomenearerbyusingtheinternettocommunicatewitheachother.Meanwhile,peoplealsobecomefarawayfromtheirfriends.Allo

3、fusacceptthefactthatthedevelopmentoftheinternetbringslotsofconveniencestoourdailylife,forinstance,wecanbuyabookonthenetinsteadofgoingtoabookstore.Besides,wecancommunicatewithourfriendsonthenetwithoutgoingoutofhome.Butwecan'tignoretheothersideofthese:thetimewespendwithfriendsorfamilybec

4、omesless.Andwehardlyseethemonceinaweek.Itwillmakeusfeellonelyifwecontinue6tousethetoolonthenettotalkwithfriendsinsteadoftalkingwiththemonthephoneorgoingoutwiththem.　　Tomybestunderstanding,weshouldusethenettocommunicatewitheachotherinaproperway.Itisjustatoolwhenwereallyneedittoserveus.I

5、fwewanttokeepourfriendshipmoreeffectively,weshouldspendmoretimewiththeminourreallife.Onlyinthiswaycanwenotonlymakefulluseofthecommunicationtoolonthenetbutalsomakeourfriendshipstronger.　　评语：该文很好地完成了试题规定的任务，内容完整，既清楚描述了漫画内容又指出了其隐含的意思。语言流畅，措辞准确，句型结构有变化，有效使用了连接手段，内容连贯，层次分明，文章易于理解，仅有个别语言错误，字

6、数符合要求。　　第四档范文15分　　Asisvividlydepictedinthedrawingabove,wecanseeclearlythatsomepeopleareverynearbythecomputerwhilesomepeoplearemuchlongwitheachotherinthenetworld.　　Whatisconveyedinthepictureismostthought-provokingandworthdiscussingamongpeople,especiallytheyoungpeople.Itisamirror,reflect

7、ingtherelationshipsbetweenthepeoplearealteringbytheInternet.People'sopinionsdiffergreatlyonthismatter.SomepeoplebelievethattheInternetisvery6convenientforpeoplewhoarelivinginalongerdistancetokeepconnectionwitheachother.OthersarguethattheInternetmakethepeoplelivinginnearareasmeetveryl