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1、朱泰祺:考研英语精选作文样文及评分规范详解 大作文 第五档范文19分 Asillustratedinthecartoon,eachpersonsitsintheirownworkroom.Infrontofthemisacomputer.Everyonelooksatthescreencarefully,andcommunicatewiththeircolleaguesthroughthenetinsteadoftalkingfacetoface.Theirworkplacesareplacedlikeanet.Andbelowthecartoon,there
2、isatopicwhichsays:thenearandfaramongtheInternet. Fromthecartoon,wecanconcludethatthecartoonistwantstoconveysuchamessage:withthepopularityofcomputers,peoplefromallovertheworldbecomenearerbyusingtheinternettocommunicatewitheachother.Meanwhile,peoplealsobecomefarawayfromtheirfriends.Allo
3、fusacceptthefactthatthedevelopmentoftheinternetbringslotsofconveniencestoourdailylife,forinstance,wecanbuyabookonthenetinsteadofgoingtoabookstore.Besides,wecancommunicatewithourfriendsonthenetwithoutgoingoutofhome.Butwecan'tignoretheothersideofthese:thetimewespendwithfriendsorfamilybec
4、omesless.Andwehardlyseethemonceinaweek.Itwillmakeusfeellonelyifwecontinue6tousethetoolonthenettotalkwithfriendsinsteadoftalkingwiththemonthephoneorgoingoutwiththem. Tomybestunderstanding,weshouldusethenettocommunicatewitheachotherinaproperway.Itisjustatoolwhenwereallyneedittoserveus.I
5、fwewanttokeepourfriendshipmoreeffectively,weshouldspendmoretimewiththeminourreallife.Onlyinthiswaycanwenotonlymakefulluseofthecommunicationtoolonthenetbutalsomakeourfriendshipstronger. 评语:该文很好地完成了试题规定的任务,内容完整,既清楚描述了漫画内容又指出了其隐含的意思。语言流畅,措辞准确,句型结构有变化,有效使用了连接手段,内容连贯,层次分明,文章易于理解,仅有个别语言错误,字
6、数符合要求。 第四档范文15分 Asisvividlydepictedinthedrawingabove,wecanseeclearlythatsomepeopleareverynearbythecomputerwhilesomepeoplearemuchlongwitheachotherinthenetworld. Whatisconveyedinthepictureismostthought-provokingandworthdiscussingamongpeople,especiallytheyoungpeople.Itisamirror,reflect
7、ingtherelationshipsbetweenthepeoplearealteringbytheInternet.People'sopinionsdiffergreatlyonthismatter.SomepeoplebelievethattheInternetisvery6convenientforpeoplewhoarelivinginalongerdistancetokeepconnectionwitheachother.OthersarguethattheInternetmakethepeoplelivinginnearareasmeetveryl
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