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1、UnityHowtokeeptothetopic?Problem1JoeandIdecidedtotakethelongtripwe’dalwayswantedacrossthecountry.Wewerelikeyoungkidsbuyingourcamperandstockingitwithallthenecessitiesoflife.Bellabakesthebestrhubarbpie.WestartedoutinearlyspringfromMinneapolisandheadedwestacrossthenorthernpartofthecountry.We
2、bothenjoyedthosepeoplewemetatthetrailerpark.Joereceivedawatchathisretirementdinner.Tooursurprise,wefoundthatwelikedthewarmsouthernregionsverymuch,andsowedecidedtostayhereinNewMexico.Example1Mom,Dad,littleJenny,andFred,Jr.,visitthemallonFridayandSaturdayeveningsforinexpensiverecreation.Hea
3、ringthemusicoftheantiquecarouselhousedthere,Jennybegstorideherfavoritepony，withitsshininggoldenmane.Shouting"I'mstarving!"Fred,Jr.,dragsthefamilytowardthefoodcourt,wherehedetectstheseductiveodorofpizza.Momwalksthroughafabricstore,runningherhandoverthesoftvelvetsandslipperysilks.Meanwhile,
4、Dadhaswanderedintoanelectronicsstoreandisadmiringthesoundsystemhe'dlovetobuysomeday.Themallprovidessomethingspecialforeverymemberofthefamily.1.紧扣主题句，使用主题句里有的词来展开内容，不要提到和主题不相关的内容。2.要注意展开句是否关切到了主题句里的所有内容，是否完整。Notes(topicsentence)1.Makethecontrollingideaasspecificaspossible2.Makesurethatthec
5、ontrollingideareallystatesthemainideaoftheparagraph3.Makesurethatthecontrollingideacanbedividedintotherightnumberofparttobedevelopedintheparagraph(separatetheimportantidea)4.DevelopingtheparagraphundertheguidanceofthecontrollingideaExample2Ihavesoughtlove,first,becauseitbringsecstasy-ecst
6、asysogreatthatIwouldoftenhavesacrificedalltherestoflifeforafewhoursofthisjoy.Ihavesoughtit,next,becauseitrelievesloneliness-thatterriblelonelinessinwhichoneshiveringconsciousnesslooksovertherimoftheworldintothecoldunfathomablelifelessabyss.Ihavesoughtit,finally,becauseintheunionofloveIhav
7、eseen,inamysticminiature,theprefiguringvisionoftheheaventhatsaintsandpoetshaveimagined.ThisiswhatIsought,andthoughitmightseemtoogoodforhumanlife,thisiswhat---atlast---Ihavefound.WithequalpassionIhavesoughtknowledge.Ihavewishedtounderstandtheheartsofmen.Ihavewishedto
