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2、rchildrentobeginlearningaforeignlanguageatprimaryschoolratherthansecondaryschool.Dotheadvantagesofthisoutweighthedisadvantages? Foreignlanguageshaveincreasinglygainedpopularityamongstudentstheseyears,giventhattheworldisshrinkingandeachcountrynowhasamorefrequentcontactwiththeoutside
3、world.Manypeople[c1] arguethatchildrenshouldbeginlearningaforeignlanguageatelementaryschool,insteadofwaitinguntil [c2] theyentersecondaryschool.Thereareseveralreasonsforthis. Firstly,despitethefactthatparentsdonotwanttoputtoomuchpressureontheirchildren,theyalsodonotwantthemtolosea
4、tthestartingline.Thismeans,ifthekidsstarttolearnaforeignlanguageearly,theirparentsarerelievedfromthethoughtthattheirkidswillhavetocatchuplateron,whichistruetosomeextent. Ontheotherhand,itisscientificallyprovedthatchildrentendtolearnalanguagefasterbeforetheageof12.AsfarasIknow,myfr
5、iendswhostartedtolearnEnglishwhentheyweresixorsevennowhaveamuchmoresatisfactoryEnglishlevelthanthosewhostartedat12or13.Soitiswisetohaveforeignlanguagecourseinprimaryschoolcurriculum. Additionally,learningaforeignlanguageatanearlieragecanlaychildrenasolidfoundationforfuturestudying.
6、Ratherthanjustlearningalanguageitself,childrenlearnalotmoreaboutthelearningmethods.Asaresult,whentheyentersecondaryschool,theycanexploremorelanguagesandenrichtheirknowledgebyextensivereadings. Theonlydisadvantageoflearningaforeignlanguageatprimaryschoolmightbeonemorecourseandpress
7、ure.However,primaryschoolscanintroduceadvancedteachingmethodstotacklethisproblem,suchasplayinggamesandroleplay,andensurethatchildrencanenjoythelanguagelearningprocess. Inconclusion,theadvantagesoflearningforeignlanguagesatprimaryschoolratherthansecondaryschooloutweighthedisadvanta
8、ges.注释：[c1]people和expert是有
