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1、英语校刊资料精品文档英语小作文MyRoomClass1Grade6扎西拉木Hello，mynameisZhaXiLaMu.IliveinDieButown.IstudyinDianGaPrimarySchool.Ihavemyownroomnow.It’ssmallbutnice.Ilovemyroom.Inmyroom,thereisatrashbin,Itisnotdirty,it’sclean.Nearthetrashbin,it’sashelf,manybooksareonit.Ihaveapianoinmyroom,it’sblac
2、kandwhite.Icanplaypianoinmybedroom.Oh,what’sonthepiano?It’smyphoto.Look,Iamveryhappy!Icandohousework.Icansweepthefloor,emptythetrashandcleanthebedroom.Ican’tcookthemeals,butI’dliketohaveatry.Mymothercanteachme.IthinkIamhelpfulathome.Doyouagreewithme?.Whatcanyoudo?What’syour
3、bedroomlike?Canyoutellme,please?Nicetomeetyou.Goodbye! 点评：从作文中可以看出这名学生很喜欢自己的房间，她一定把自己的房间布置得又漂亮又舒服，而且这个学生也一定非常喜欢做家务，是妈妈的好帮手。整篇作文用词准确、生动。指导教师：冷木MyBirthdayClass2Grade6丁子拉木收集于网络，如有侵权请联系管理员删除精品文档Hi!MynameisDingZiLaMu.MybirthdayisOctober16th.Itisinfall.Theweatherisverycool.Onmybi
4、rthday,Iwearmyprettyclothes.SometimesIgohikingandflykitesintheparkwithmyfriends.UsuallyIhaveabirthdaypartyintheevening.Myparentsgivemeabigbirthdaygift.Iamveryhappytogetit.Iinvitemanyfriendstomyparty.Weeatabigbeautifulbirthdaycakeandmanytastyfood.Wecansing,danceandplaygamesi
5、ntheparty,too.Ihaveaverygoodtimeonmybirthday!Ilikemybirthdayverymuch!点评：生日那天一定是最开心的，作者写下生日的那天是在秋天，并记录下自己生日那天发生的事情，邀请朋友来生日聚会，大家一起吃蛋糕、唱歌、跳舞玩游戏，真的很开心。指导教师：冷木MyWeekendClass3Grade6贡布草Hello,mynameisLinGongBuCao.IliveinDieButown.IstudyinDianGaPrimarySchool.Ilikemyschool.Igotoschoo
6、lfromMondaytoFriday.AndIlikemyweekendtoo.OnSaturdays,Idohomeworkinthemorning.ThenIeatlunch.Iplaycomputergamesintheafternoon.Icanplaycomputergamesonlyonehour.Iplaythepianoatthreeo’clock.Ilikeplayingthe收集于网络，如有侵权请联系管理员删除精品文档piano.Icanlistentomusicintheevening.Ithinkitissofunn
7、y.OnSundays,IoftenlearnEnglish.Intheevening.Imustgotobedearly,becausetomorrowIwillgotoschool.点评：本文小作者思路清晰，她的视角，情感，用语都能充分反映小学生的写作特点，使人倍感亲切。全文都透露出小作者的积极向上，做事井井有条的精神风貌。让人仿佛身临其境，感受她那忙碌而又充实的周末生活。指导教师：冷木MyEnglishTeacherClass3Grade5阿桑MissLiismyEnglishteacher.She’sverypretty.Sheist
8、allandthin.Shehastwobigeyesandasmallmouth.Herhairislong.Shelikescatsverymuch.Andsh
