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1、英语小作文MyRoomClassiGrade6扎西拉木Hello,mynameisZhaXiLaMu.IliveinDieButown.IstudyinDianGaPrimarySchool.Ihavemyownroomnow.It'ssmallbutnice.Ilovemyroom.Inmyroom,thereisatrashbin,Itisnotdirty,it'sclean.Nearthetrashbin,itsashelfmanybooksareonitIhaveapianoinmyroom,
2、it'sblackandwhite.Icanplaypianoinmybedroom.Oh,whatsonthepiano?It'smyphoto.Look,Iamveryhappy!Icandohousework.Icansweepthefloor,emptythetrashandcleanthebedroom.Ican'tcookthemeals,butI'dliketohaveatry.Mymothercanteachme.IthinkIamhelpfulathome.Doyouagreewit
3、hme?.Whatcanyoudo?What1syourbedroomlike?Canyoutellme,please?Nicetomeetyou.Goodbye!点评：从作文中可以看岀这名学生很喜欢自己的房间，她一定把自己的房间布置得又漂亮又舒月艮，而且这个学生也一定非常喜欢做家务，是妈妈的好帮手。整篇作文用词准确、生动。指导教师：冷木MyBirthdayClass2Grade6丁子拉木Hi!MynameisDingZiLaMu.MybirthdayisOctober16th.Itisinfall.
4、Theweatherisverycool.Onmybirthday,Iwearmyprettyclothes.SometimesIgohikingandflykitesintheparkwithmyfriends.UsuallyIhaveabirthdaypartyintheevening.Myparentsgivemeabigbirthdaygift.Iamveryhappytogetit.Iinvitemanyfriendstomyparty.Weeatabigbeaut讦ulbirthdayca
5、keandmanytastyfood・Wecansing,danceandplaygamesintheparty,too.Ihaveaverygoodtimeonmybirthday!Ilikemybirthdayverymuch!点评:生日那天一定是最开心的，作者写下生日的那天是在秋天，并记录下自己生日那天发生的事情，邀请朋友来生日聚会，大家一起吃蛋糕、唱歌、跳舞玩游戏,真的很开心。指导教师：冷木MyWeekendClass3Grade6贡布草Hello,mynameisLinGongBuCao.I
6、liveinDieButown.IstudyinDianGaPrimarySchool・Ilikemyschool.IgotoschoolfromMondaytoFriday.AndIlikemyweekendtoo.OnSaturdays」dohomeworkinthemorning.ThenIeatlunch.Iplaycomputergamesintheafternoon.Icanplaycomputergamesonlyonehour.Iplaythepianoatthreeo'clock.I
7、likeplayingthepiano.Icanlistentomusicintheevening.Ithinkitissofunny.OnSundays,IoftenlearnEnglish.Intheevening.Imustgotobedearly,becausetomorrowIwillgotoschool.点评：本文小作者思路清晰，她的视角，情感z用语都能充分反映小学生的写作特点，使人倍感亲切。全文都透露岀小作者的积极向上”做事井井有条的精神风貌。让人仿佛身临其境,感受她那忙碌而又充实的周末
8、生活。指导教师：冷木MyEnglishTeacherClass3Grade5阿桑MissLiismyEnglishteacher.She'sverypretty.Sheistallandthin.Shehastwobigeyesandasmallmouth.Herhairislong.Shelikescatsverymuch.Andshelikessinginganddancing,too.HerEnglishisverygood.Weoftenplay
