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1、四级作文中的常见错误5.四级作文中的常见错误5.1.词层面5.1.1.用词搭配不恰当However,thespeedofacarismuchfasterthanthatofabicycle.Inthepastthepriceofmilkwassoexpensivethatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.Nowadays,thetrafficinbigcityisgettingmoreandmorecrowded.Inrecentoneandtwoyears,peoplewhotakeTOEFLhavedecre
2、ased.Inthepastfewyears,grainhasdecreasedbynearly20%.5.四级作文中的常见错误5.1.词层面5.1.1.用词搭配不恰当1.However,thespeedofacarismuchfasterthanthatofabicycle.However,thespeedofacarismuchhigherthanthatofabicycle.说明:speed只能和high,good,top,normal,fantastic,moderate,surprising等搭配,不能与fast,quick,
3、slow搭配,但可以说Acarismuchfasterinspeedthanabicycle.2.Inthepastthepriceofmilkwassoexpensivethatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.Inthepastthepriceofmilkwassohighthatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.说明:price只能和high,low,inflated,moderate,minimum,original,reduced,reasonable等搭配,不能与expensi
4、ve,cheap搭配,但可以说Inthepast,milkwassoexpensivethatmostfamiliescouldn’taffordit.3.Nowadays,thetrafficinbigcityisgettingmoreandmorecrowded.Nowadays,thetrafficinbigcityisgettingheavierandheavier..4.Inrecentoneandtwoyears,peoplewhotakeTOEFLhavedecreased.Inrecentoneandtwoyears,t
5、henumberofpeoplewhotakeTOEFLtesthasdecreased.5.Inthepastfewyears,grainhasdecreasedbynearly20%.Inthepastfewyears,theconsumption/amountofgrainhasdecreasedbynearly20%..5.1.2.修饰语不当HeneitherspeaksEnglishnorChinese.Withouttelevision,peoplecannotgetinformationwhichcomesfromothe
6、rpartsoftheworldimmediately.Attheageofsix,myfatherbegantogivemeEnglishlessons.Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,people’slivingstandardhasgreatlyimproved.Toimproveone’swritingskill,regularpracticeisessential..5.1.2.修饰语不当HeneitherspeaksEnglishnorChinese.Hespeaksn
7、eitherEnglishnorChinese.Withouttelevision,peoplecannotgetinformationwhichcomesfromotherpartsoftheworldimmediately.Withouttelevision,peoplecannotimmediatelygetinformationwhichcomesfromotherpartsoftheworld..3.Attheageofsix,myfatherbegantogivemeEnglishlessons.WhenIwassixyea
8、rsold,myfatherbegantogivemeEnglishlessons.4.Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,people’slivings