Achieving coherence英语写作 连贯性课件.ppt

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1、Chapter3:CoherenceWhatcoherenceisinwritingHowtoachievecoherenceTheuseofcoordinateandsubordinatesentencesWhatcoherenceisinwriting？StickingtogetherStructure&logicSentences¶graphs&essayStructuralcoherenceThemoreweoffer,themorewecangain;andifwearemoremodest,wecanbemorepopular.Themoreweoff

2、er,themorewecangain；themoremodestweare,themorepopularwewillbe.Logicalcoherence(F)Alltheplayersjumpedfromthebenchandtherefereemadeanunfairannouncementoftheresults.(T)Therefereemadeanunfairannouncementoftheresultsand(so)alltheplayersjumpedfromthebench.CoherenceSentence:propersentencestructu

3、re.Paragraph:sentencesinaparagraphshouldsticktightly.Essay:thesisstatement&topicsentencesequencingofparagraphsUnityVSCoherence?Achievingcoherence1.UsingtransitionalexpressionsTransitionalexpressionscanlinksentences¶graphswithinaparagraph.Eg:Inadditionalto…forexample…insuchcase…as…as2.

4、RepeatingkeywordsandphrasesThethemewords3.UsingpronounsPronounsactasnaturalcoherencedecices,leadingreadersnaturallyfromsentencetosentence.UsedtolinkparagraphsParallelstructurestoemphasizetheconnectionbetweenrelatedideasindifferentsentences.function-transitionToprovideasenseofcontinuity,we

5、needtransitionalexpressions.Herearesomeexamples1.addition:inaddition;too;moreover;equallyimportant;again2.enumeration:firstly;secondly;tobeginwith3.concession:naturally;admittedlyPARTⅢRhetoricalFocusTheUseofCoordinateandSubordinateSentences3.1DescriptionCoordination:Toemphasizethatcertain

6、ideasandactionsareequallyimportant.Subordination:Todistinguishamainideaoractionfromlessimportantones.3.2ExampleSentencesTheyconsideredgoingtoamovie,buttheywenttothemallinstead.Afterconsideringgoingtoamovie,theywenttothemallinstead.Whichactionismoreimportant?3.3ExamplePassage1WatchingTVisa

7、popularwaytospendleisuretimeandmakesviewersapathetic.Manypeoplecomehometiredintheevenings,andturnontheTVtorelax.Theymayintendtowatchjustnews,butthenagameshowcomesonnext,andtheydecidedtowatchalittleofthat,ortheygettoocomfortabletogetoutoftherecliner,andtheyendupspend