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1、高考英语作文高分“四要素”书面表达高分作文要求：1.覆盖了所有的要点2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑4.语言得体要素-要素要素一： 内容完整 、相关备考策略：列提纲、写主题句题目：中央号召创建节约型社会，可是许多校园内部浪费现象严重。请你在班会上发表演讲，号召同学们从我做起，杜绝浪费。提示：1、浪费现象：水、电、餐厅的食物及其他；2、危害:自身性格，父母财政负担，自然资源；3、制止浪费现象的措施：由自己设想。要求：1、词数120左右；演讲的开头和结尾已写好,不记入总词数
2、。2、不要逐字逐条翻译，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。Howcanweorganizethepassage?Para.1Para.2Para.3要素二：行文连贯，结构严谨备考策略：正确使用过渡语9表__________and，both…and，aswellas，aswell,also,neither…nor，or，either…or表__________besides,furthermore,likewise,moreover,notonly…,butalso…,foronething…foranother,what’
3、smore/worse,worsestill表__________however,while,but,yet,still,inspiteof,despite,onthecontrary,ononehand…,ontheotherhand,nevertheless表__________forexample,suchas,inotherwords,asamatteroffact,infact,actually,thatistosay,表__________therefore,thus,hence,otherwise,t
4、hanksto...,dueto...,owe…to,consequently,accordingly,asaresult,forthereasonthat…,sothat表__________personallyspeaking,inmyopinion,asfarasIamconcerned/know,asweallknow,AsfarasIcansee…,Itseemstomethat…/frommypointofview…表__________inaword,inshort,inbrief,ashasbeen
5、stated,asIhaveshown,Wecansafelydrawaconclusionthat…,allinall,onthewhole表__________first,second,third,last/firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally/thefirst,thesecond,thethird,thelast/inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,inthethirdplace,lastly/tobeginwith,then,furthermore,
6、finally/tostartwith,next,finally/firstandforemost,lastbutnotleast,mostimportantofall表__________first,then,later,intheend,eventually,sincethen,afterawhile,atlast请为下面两段话加上合适的过渡语：1、Thebadhabitofbeingwastefulwillhaveabadeffectontheirowncharacter.Itaddsfinancialbur
7、dentotheirparents.Theworld’slimitednaturalresourceswillbeusedup.2、Weshouldhaveaclearawarenessoftheserioussituation.Weshouldeducatethe9studentstoformthegoodhabit.Weshouldstartwithourselvesandtaketheleadinreducingthewastetosaveeverything.要素三：语言得体备考策略：1、避免汉式英语Tra
8、nslate：保持平常心。keepanormalheart.(╳)→Keepanormalstateofmind./Keepaneasymind./Takeiteasy.Correctthemistakes:1）Someonecouldhardlyreceivetheresult.Sotheylosetheirheart.2）Weshouldfindouto
