2012届高考英语 书面表达（开放式作文）练习讲评四课件.ppt

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1、2012届高考英语书面表达（开放式作文）练习讲评四假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛，请按如下要求完成一篇短文：1.简要描述下图的内容，并点明主题；2.联系实际，谈谈出现此现象的原因及解决办法。注意：1.词数不少于120个；2.不能使用真实姓名和学校。提示词：蜗牛snail讲评从漫画中两只蜗牛中一只所说的话“Look!Theyaremovingmoreslowlythanus”可以看出两只蜗牛在开玩笑来取笑路上拥挤的汽车比它们还要跑得慢。由此我们可以推断：交通拥挤问题的严重性。一、简述漫画内容点明主题①Fromthepicturewecanseetwosnailsarejokinga

2、boutthecarsonthecrowdedroads.Thishumorouspictureisn’tjusttoamuseus.Itactuallyshowsusoneofthemostseriousproblems.Asweallknow,theissueofheavytraffichaslongbeenaproblem.②Inthepicture,therearetwosnailsplayingajokeaboutthecarsonthecrowdedroads.Howslowlytheyaremoving.Thepictureconveysusthemessagetha

3、theavytrafficisaseriousproblem.③Inthepicture,twosnailsareplayingajokeaboutthecarsonthecrowdedroads.Theyaremovingsoslowlythatwecan’thelpthinkingoftheseriousnessofheavytraffic.④Fromthepicturewecanseetwosnailsarejokingaboutthecarswhicharemovingveryslowlyonthecrowdedroads.Thishumorouspictureisn’tj

4、usttoamuseusbutactuallyshowsusoneofthemostseriousproblems.Thatis,heavytrafficisaseriousproblem.分析现象产生的原因可以从下列考生比较熟悉的几个方面来考虑：随着经济的发展，私家车的增加；随着汽车的增加和城市人口的增加，一些道路等交通设施仍然没有得到改善；行人交通意识的淡薄等等。二、分析现象产生的原因①Butwhydoesthishappen?Ithinkseveralfactorscontributetothisphenomenon.Firstly,withtherapiddevelopme

5、ntofourcountry'seconomy,moreandmorecarsarecomingintocommonfamilies,whichcausesserioustrafficjams.Secondly,withalargenumberofpopulationandnumbersofcarsincreasing,althoughthegovernmentputsalargeamountofmoneyonbuildingorrepairingroadseveryyear,thequalityoftheroadsisnotsatisfactory.What’sworse,som

6、epublictransportationstillremainunimproved.Thirdly,somepeopleareunawareoftheimportanceofobeyingtrafficregulations,soit’snotuncommontoseeaccidentsblockingtraffic.②Therearemanycausesforthisproblem,butthefollowingmaybethemostimportantones.Thefirstcauseisthegreatincreaseinthenumberofprivatecars.Ca

7、rstakeupmorespacebuttheycarryfewerpeople.Thesecondcauseistheslowandinefficientconstructionandimprovementoftheroadsandstreets.Withalargepopulationandnumbersofcarsincreasing,someroadsstillremainunimproved.Thelastcauseistheinsufficientmana