4、了尽力使用复杂结构和高级词汇所致)。要达到这样的要求就应该做到一下这些: 1. 合理使用高级词汇和句型,增加文章的闪光点,吸引评卷教师的眼球。一篇好的作文不仅要表达通顺、语法准确,而且要不失时机地使用些许高级词汇和句型,一增加文章的“阳春白雪”。例如:She was just about to cross the street when an old lady came from the opposite side of the street. 句中使用了句型“be about to do……when……”,增加了故事的生动性时间的紧凑性。2
5、.注重句式的变化。常用的句式变化的运用有:简单句转化为并列句或复合句;主动态转化为被动态;陈述转为倒装;一般句转化为强调句;肯定转化为反义词表达或双重否定;状语从句转化为分词短语作状语;定语从句转化为分词短语作定语等等。例如: ①The teacher said that the plan was good.转化为 The teacher said that the plan was not bad. ②When the audience heard the strange noise, they all ran out of the h
6、all to see what happened.转化为 Hearing the strange noise, the audience all ran out of the hall to see what happened. 另外,不同体裁的作文常常可以套用一些常见的表达方式,也能达到意想不到的效果。例如在写议论文章时,常常以下面的一些方式开头: We had a discussion about whether…… We had a survey on whether……等等。 过渡句常用:Opinions are divide
7、d into two groups…;,some hold the view that……;while others believed that……. Different people have different opinions on the matter……. As a coin has two sides, some think that ……;while others believe that……等等。 总之,不同的体裁,运用不同的结构去搭建不同的“作文大厦”。 3. 句式交错使用,体现文章的节奏感。有的考生一味追求文章的完