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1、ReportwritingEx4:Sampleanswer:(235words)　　Reassessmentofjobsatisfaction:SuePearson(PRDept.)　　Introduction　　ThisreportsetsouttouseWorksetcolourstoassesstheaccuracyofmyjobdescriptionasPRofficerandtosuggestanumberofchanges.　　Findings　　Itisclearthatthereisadifferencebetweenth

2、ewaythecompanyviewsthejobandtherealityasIperceiveit.Firstly,anumberofareaswhichdemandasignificantproportionofmytimearenotmentionedintheofficialjobbrief.Thesegmentonthepiechartwhichprovidesmostcauseforconcernisthepinksector;thisrelatestomyattendanceatanumberofmeetingswhich

3、Icancontributelittle.Anothersignificantareaisthegreysegment;thisreferstotheunscheduledtimeIspendsortingoutcomputerproblems.Ifeeltheseactivitiesarehamperingmycorework.Ascanbeseenfromthepiecharts,thetimeIspendactivelyworkingtomeetthegoalsagreedwithmylinemanagerislessthanenv

4、isaged.　　Conclusions　　Theabovediscrepanciesclearlyindicatethatmycurrentjobbriefisinaccurate.　　Recommendations　　IwouldrecommendthatmyofficialjobbriefshouldbeupdatedusingtheWorksetcolours.Itwouldalsobevaluabletoconsidertheproportionofnon-corecoloursinthepiechartandtoinvesti

5、gatewhetherworkintheseareascouldbecarriedoutbysomeoneelsemoresuitedtothesetasks.