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1、个人例子整合例子写法回顾1分析题目,找出抽象词2列出抽象词的细节,组织顺序。3论点+中间例子的描述+议论4中间例子描述过程中:一段细节可以加上一两句总结。Failure---success失败---世界联合书院竞选失败成功---模拟联合国竞选成功Mypersonalexperiencecanbeservedasacompellingexample.Iwasbornashyandretiringgirl.Iamalwaysseekingchancestoimprovemyinter-personalskills.Twomonths
2、ago,therecameanopportunitytoentertheUnitedWorldCollege(UWC),aworld-renownedgroupofinternationalhighschoolsaimingatpromotingtheunderstandingbetweendifferentcountries.Studentswho’dliketoenterthisschoolneedtopasstwointerviews,onewithourschoolEnglishteachersandanotherwit
3、hteachersfromUWC.Aftertwodaysofconsideration,Idecidedtoapplyfortheschoolmostlybecauseofthechanceofaninterview.Beforetheinterviewday,IwatchedChristopherGardner’sinterviewwithhisbossinthefilm“ThePursuitofHappiness”againandagain,imagininghowIshouldbehavethenextday.Thent
4、hedayfinallycame.Thereweretotally29studentsapplyingfortheschoolandweweredividedinto3groups.IwasdesignatedtoGroupC,thelastgroup,withtheother8students.Duringtheinterview,wewereaskedtohaveadiscussiononthreerandomtopics,eachtopicfor10minutes’timeafter3minutes’preparation
5、.ItalkedaboutmyanswerwithinmyheartoverandoverbutIwasjusttooafraidtospeakthemout.Listeningtoothergroupmembersvoicingtheiropinionfluentlyandconfidently,IknewIshouldn’twaitanymoreandIshouldtalkasthenextspeaker.“Allright.Ithinkwecanviewthisquestiononanotheraspect.”Suchwo
6、rdsmiraculouslycameoutofmymouthandIknewIwasbeingchallengingmyself.Theclassroomwassuddenlyquiet,leavingme,alone,totalk.Ifeltalittlebitblankanddisorderedinmymind.Itriedtoorganizethosefragmentsofideasbutitseemedreallyhard.Withshynessagainsurpassingmyconfidence,Ihawed,bl
7、ushedandtittered,endingmyspeechinahurry.ItookapeepattheteachergradingformebutIhadnodesiretoseemyscoreandIwasafraidso.Fortherestofthediscussion,Ididn’tcatchanychancetospeak,notbecauseofmylackofquicknessbutformyfear.Icoweredagain.通过背景介绍引入面试环节,营造不成功的细节。Aftertheinterview
8、,weninestudentsallgotalittlebitreliefbuttherewasstillsomeaftershockinmyheart.Oneofmyfriends,alsoanapplicantatthisinterview,Jane,not