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1、根据下面提示以Haveahealthylifestyle为题写一篇短文1．简述以下现象：（1）健康之重要人尽皆知。（2）许多青少年不注重健康问题，假期尤甚。长时间看电视，通宵上网聊天、玩游戏。导致的危害如：影响视力，身体虚弱，缺乏人际交往。2．简述你的看法，提出你的建议。要求：（1）内容完整，层次清楚，语言流畅。（2）词数100左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：交流communicate心理健康mentalhealthStep1:lead-inJustnowIgaveoutatopicofanessay.Todaywewilllearnhowto
2、writeanenglishcomposition.Step2:Whatmakesagoodpieceofwriting?A.NeathandwritinggoodfirstimpressionB.ContenteverythingrequiredincludedC.StructurewellorganizedandsmoothlydevelopedD.Languagenochinglish,nogrammaticalmistakes,exactlyusedwordsandrelativelychangedsentencepatternsStep3:fo
3、urstepstowriteA.topicexploring审题B.wordingandsentencemaking构词成句C.essaywriting成篇D.improving修订explorethetypeofthewritingexplorethetenseexplorethepersonexplorethemainpointsA.topicexploringthestructurePara1.TheimportanceofkeepinghealthyPara2.ThephenomenonofunhealthylifePara3.Myopinion
4、andsuggestionsB.wordingandsentencemakinga.wordingasweallknowbeofimportanceteenagerspayattentiontospendtimedoingwatchTVsurftheInternetallnightplaygameschatwithothersnear-sightedbecomeweaklosethechancetocommunicatewithothersfacetofaceinmyopinion/viewb.Sentencemaking1.Asisknowntoall
5、,thehealthisofgreatimportanceinourlife.Onlykeephealthy,canwestudywell.→Asisknowntoall,healthisofgreatimportanceforus.Onlywhenwearehealthy,canwestudywellandenjoylife..2.TheywatchingTVforalongtimeorsurftheInternet,playingcomputergamesorchattingwithothersallnight.→TheywatchTVforalon
6、gtimeorsurftheInternet,playingcomputergamesorchattingwithothersallnight.3.Alotofteenagersnotpayattentiontohealthyproblem,especiallyduringtheholiday.→Alotofteenagersdon’tpayattentiontotheirhealth,especiallyduringtheholiday.4.Also,wecanlisteningmusictomadeourselvesrelaxed.→Also,the
7、ycanlistentomusictomakethemselvesrelaxed.C.preparingadraftD.improvingHaveahealthylifestyleAsweallknow,healthisveryimportant.Onlywhenwearehealthycanwestudywellandenjoylife.However,manyteenagersdon’tpayanyattentiontotheirhealth,especiallyduringtheholiday.Andtheyspendtoomuchtimewatc
8、hingTV,playinggamesandchattingontheInter
