英语作文：与室友友好相处的途径 Ways of getting along well with your roommates.doc

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2、einfluencedbutotherroommatesarealsounhappy.ThereareseveralwayWay记得加stodealwithyourrelationshipwithyourroommates.Firstofall,youmustknowsomeinformationaboutyourroommatesinsteadofsecrets.Knowingsomethingyourroommatesdislikecouldhelpyoupreventsuchthingfromhappening.Also,ifyouhaveacommo

3、ninterestwithher,youwillfeelmoreintimatewithher.Anothergoodwayisthatyoushouldbealwayswillingtohelpthemwhentheyneedyourhelp.Everyoneisnot表达的是部分否定。这里原本应该是想全部否定。建议改为noneofusisanisolatedisland.Inevitably,wewillmeetsomethingwecansolvebyoneself意思有点混乱。应改为can’tsolvebyourselves.Helpingyourr

4、oommatesisawaythatwetakeactiontoshowourcareforher.Indisputably“无可争辩地”我觉得这个词用得很好，比较少见，给人耳目一新的感觉。,communicationisabridgebetweenyouandyourroommates.Spendingyourtimesharingyourdreamsandthoughtswithyourroommateswillmakeyourrelationshipmuchcloser.Inaword,youshouldbetrustworthytoyourroomm

5、atesandconsiderthemasyourbestfriends.Be应该改为beingharmonywithyourroommateswillhelpyoualot.点评：本文行文流畅，结构严谨，按照总分总结构编排全文，颇有条理。开篇以开门见山的方式直奔主题，中间主体分成三大部分具体阐述了与舍友和谐相处的方法，有一目了然的衔接词和衔接短语。最后总结全文，与开头相呼应。不足之处：有少量语法及拼写错误。望订正。