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1、题目：OnExcessivePackaging提纲：1.目前很多商品存在过度包装现象2.出现这一现象的原因3.我对这一现象的看法和建议Model1OnExcessivePackagingNowadaysthephenomenaofexcessivepackagingofgoodsareprevailing普遍的，流行的inoursociety:clothesswathedintissuepaper,placedincardboardboxandfinallywrappedinwell-design
2、edplasticbags,importedbottlesofgrapewinepackedinwoodenboxes,fruitsputinhand-wovenbaskets,tonamebutafew.（第一段用模版句型thephenomenaof…..are..导出，后面用几个精彩的排比句说明）Thereareseveralcausesofexcessivepackaging.Thefirstreasonisthatalargenumberofcompaniesbelievethatthey
3、canattractcustomers’attentionandstimulatetheirpurchasingdesirebyover-packagingtheirgoods,thusgainingmoreprofits.Ontheotherhand,quiteanumberofconsumersmistakenlyholdthatthemoredelicatethepackageis,thebetterthequalitywillbe,thusencouragingexcessivepacka
4、ging.（第二段用模版句型thereareseveralcausesof…展开第二段对原因的分析，接着用2个层次具体分析原因，分别是thefirstreasonisthat….和ontheotherhand……,这一段最精彩的是作者对形容词，动词的选择丰富，比如attract,stimulate,gain,encourage等）Inmypointofview,excessivepackaginghasdisastrousconsequences,includingthelossofpreciou
5、sresources,excessiveconsumptionofwaterandenergy,andunnecessaryextractionofscarcelandforlandfill.（此段谈我的看法，亮点是作者很好运用了名词短语的排比，使语句充满节奏感，不呆板，充分显示了作者对名词的驾驭能力，比如thelossof,consumptionof,extractionof）Tosolvetheproblem,it’snecessarytotakethefollowingmeasures.Fi
6、rst,lawsandregulationsmustbemadetorestrictexcessivepackagingofcompanies.Inaddition,weneedtoraiseconsumer’sawarenessthatexcessivepackagingdoesn’tequaltohighqualityandadvocatepackagingrecycling.(最后段谈如何解决问题，作者也用到了亮点表达restrict,ｒａｉｓｅ ａｗａｒｅｎｅｓｓ ｏｆ ， ｅｑｕａｌ ｔ
7、ｏ 等等)Moedel2Iassumethatyouarefamiliarwiththephenomenonof“ExcessivePackaging”.Takingalookaround,wecanfindexampleswithease:asmallcomputerispackedinathickandheavycarton,clothesareputtedinawell-designedplasticbagsandmoon-cakesareusuallyplacedindelicatebox
8、es.(个性化的开头，生动不说教)Whatarethecausesofthisproblem?Ontheonehand,toearnmoreeconomicgains,aconsiderablenumberofmanufacturesusuallywraptheirproductswithunnecessarybutappealingmaterialsaimingatattractingcustomer’sattention,arousingtheircuriosityandthe
