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1、大学英语四六级辅导概要作文篇作文考点任何一篇四六级作文都包括以下三个基本的考点:词汇(单词、短语掌握得越多固然越好,但是关键还是取决于考生是否能合理有效的运用。如:Thisactivityhasbeencancelled,whichhavemadeeveryoneinvolvedhardtobelieve.//Itisunbelievablethattheactivityshouldhavebeencancelled.)语法(时态、搭配、句型、单复数、词性等。如:Asisknowtoall,ourhumanbodyhealthconsisttwoaspects—physicallyandme
2、ntallyhealthy.)逻辑、层次(一篇作文能否得高分,逻辑和层次也占有非常重要的地位。)Sample1Acareerisnoteasytochoose.Itisoneofthemostimportantdecisionsyouwillmakeinyourlife.Findtherightcareer,andyouwillbehappyandsuccessful.Findthewrongcareer,andyoumaybeunhappyandunsuccessful.Youshouldexploreyourchoiceofoccupationfromeveryangle.Youshou
3、ldcollectasmuchinformationasyoucan.Youshouldtrydifferentkindsofworkbeforemakingupyourmind.Youshouldevaluateyourself.Youshouldmakesureofyourinterestsandtalents.(条理不清,逻辑性差)Sample2TherearemanywaystoimproveyourEnglish.LikemanyEnglishlearners,youcanlearnEnglishwellthroughsometraditionalways,suchasattend
4、inganEnglishclassinaclassroom,readingEnglishnewspapers,listeningtoEnglishnewsontheradioorwatchingEnglishprogramsonTV.Nowadays,somemodernmethodsmayhelpyoubeamoresuccessfulEnglishlearner.Forexample,learningEnglishviaEnglish-learningsoftwareshasbeenfoundaneffectivewaybymanylearners.Besides,millionsofE
5、nglishlearnersbenefitalotfromonlinelearning.Astheproverbsays,“AllroadsleadtoRome.”(主次分明,层次清楚)考生作文常见错误与分析一.不一致(Disagreements)所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致,它还包括了数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致等.e.g.Whenonehavemoney,hecandowhathewantto.(人一旦有了钱,他就能想干什么就干什么。)剖析:one是单数第三人称,因而本句的have应改为has;同理,want应改为wants.本句是典型的主谓不一致.改为:Onceonehasmo
6、ney,hecandowhathewants(todo).二.修饰语错位(MisplacedModifiers)英语与汉语不同,同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置,句子的含义可能引起变化.对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视,因而造成了不必要的误解.e.g.IbelieveIcandoitwellandIwillbetterknowtheworldoutsidethecampus.剖析:better位置不当,应置于句末.三.句子不完整(SentenceFragments)在口语中,交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等,不完整的句子完全可以被理解.可是书面语就不同了,句子结构不完整会令意思表达不
7、清.这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后,笔者又想加些补充说明时发生.e.g.Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety.ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.剖析:本句后半部分“forexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.”不是一个完整的句子,仅为一些不连贯的词语,不能独立.改为:Therearemanywaystokno