高三英语写作材料归纳（二）.doc

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1、2007届高考写作系列指导材料(二)如何使书面衣达显出文采；展示个性；亮而出众(-)TrytoavoidmistakesA:“缺胳膊少腿"型:<1)(缺少主语)：Butwas6o，clock.(was前加it)(2)(缺少谓语)：However,otherstudentsagainsttheidea,(against前加are)(3)(缺少宾语)：Heseatedonthegrass.(seated后加I"himself'或在"seated"前加I"was")B："画蛇添足”型:(pairwork)(1)语意重复：Hereturned

2、backyesterday/back丿(2)谓语重复：Butthereare60%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefee.(去掉thereare,或在are前加关系彳6词who;)(3)多宾语(或宾语不恰当):Hedressedhisclothesquickly.(去掉hisclothes,或把hisclothes改为himself;)C「张冠李戴"型：1).误用主语。Don^tworry.Yourbodywillgetwellsoon.(yourbodyfyou)(pastfpasse

3、d)(yourletter^you：hearfrom——receive)(expensive—►high){more^larger)2).误用谓语。Thetimepastquickly.3).误用宾语•Iwassopleasedtohearfromyourletter.4).误用农语.Thepriceofmycarisveryexpensive・5).谋用定语.ChinahasamorepopulationthanJapan.6).误用介诃.Thethiefranawaytothedirectionofthecoast.(D.“Chi

4、nglishT型。Eg.高考：“Highexam"1).Thehopeofourparentsisveryhigh.(—^Ourparentsexpecttoomuchofus.)2).Hisrighteyeisblind.(—>%isblindintherighteye)E.“瞻前不顾后”型。(Individualwork)1).Althoughhewasverytired,buthewentonworkingintheoffice,(fAlthough,buteitheroneisOK)2).Ononehand,60%ofthes

5、tudentsareagainsttheidea,but40%ofthestudentsthinkitisreasonable.(—>/)«/JniHOntheotherhand与前面的Ononehand对应)F.“生搬ii更套"型。Thereusedtohaveanoldchurchhere・(7?a必一>be)•*Judgewhetherthefollowingsentencesarerightornot.a.Theoldladyhadthreesons,allofthemkilledinthe独立主格结构)b.Althoughh

6、ewasverytired,yethewentonworkingintheoffice・(Right).Although不可与but连用,但可与yet连用。［二)Trytousecomplexsentences(Classwork)1)、Usesothat—>Thelittleboyknowssomanythingsthathefeelssurprised.2)、强调句。—>Itisthatthelittleboyknowssomanythingsthatsurpriseshim.3)、Attr.Clause・—>Thelittleb

7、oyknowssomanythingswhichsuipriseshim.4)^N一-Clause.(Therearetwopossibleways.)—①Whatsuiprisesiiinisthatthegirlknowssomanythings—(2)Thatthegildknowssomanythingssuiprischim・(%1)Trytousedifferentsentencestructuresorcomplicated按括号中的要求改写下列各句。1).Theysangandlaughedastheywentback

8、home.(Use■一ingform)—^Singingandlaughing,theywentbackhome・2)・(UsePPjTheteacherwalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsf