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1、Thetablebelowcomparesthedataoftheworld'slarge-scaleseafishingindustriesandsmall-scaleseafishingindustries。　　(numberofemployees,annualcatch,annualsalary,annualoilconsumption)　　Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisons

2、whererelevant。　　Task2教育类　　Caringforchildrenisprobablythemostimportantthingofthesociety.Itissuggestedthatallmothersandfathersshouldberequiredtotakethechildcaretrainingcourses。　　Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement?　　高分范文参考：　　Childrenrepresentbo

3、ththepresentandthefuture.Inrecentyears,therehasbeenasurgeofinterestintransformingchildcareintoaformalsubjectofacademicstudies.Traditionalchildcareskills,whicharepassedonfromonegenerationtoanotherthroughoralandinformalinstruction,arenotsufficienttoguarante

4、equalitycare,soparents’participationincaretrainingisadvisable。　　Manyparentsmightbeaccustomedtotheideathatchildcareisallaboutlove,butthisnotionismisleading.Whileitiseasytoadmitthatparentsareresponsibletoattendtochildren’sneeds,itisalsoimportanttonotethatch

5、ildrenaretooofteninsatiable.Unlikeadults,theyhavenoideaofwhattheirbehavioursleadto.Forexample,childrenarecandyloverswithoutknowledgethatcandycancauseobesityandtoothdamage.Parentsshouldnotrespondtochildren’sneedsforcandypermanently.Parentswhogivewhateverch

6、ildrenwant,knownasindulgentparents,canbeblamedfortheirchildren’sbehaviourproblemsandunhealthyhabits.Childcaretrainingteachesparentshowtotakeaholisticapproachtocarefortheirchildrenandpreventsthemfromansweringchildren’sinappropriateneeds。　　Anothermisconceiv

7、edideaofchildcareisthatitisasimpleprocessoffeedingchildrenandmakingthemsleepregularly.Contemporarychildcareisnotlimitedtothis.Equallyimportantforthisscienceareemotionalandmentalwellbeing.Forexample,somechildren’sfirststepcomesearlierthanotherchildren’snot

8、necessarilybecausethesechildrenhaveintakeofmorenutritionbutsimplybecausetheyaremoreintelligentandcuriousaboutthephysicalenvironment.Childcareisacomplexsciencethatgoesbeyondnutrition.Whetherparentshavehelpedchildreni