2020高考英语一轮复习层级3篇章结构第1讲合理恰当的细节添加教学案新人教版.docx

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1、第1讲　合理恰当的细节添加根据括号内的提示完成句子1．However,itseemsthatpeoplearenotawareofthenegativeeffectsofmobilephonesoncommunication.Forexample,manypeoplebegintopaylessattentiontofacetofacecommunication(比如，很多人越来越不重视面对面的交流)．2．Atthatmoment,Ibecamethefocusofthewholeclassan

2、dwasfullofgreatprideandconfidence(充满了自豪和自信)．3．IsuggestthattheteachershouldchoosemoreEnglishfilms,thusmakingEnglishlearningmoreinteresting(这样就使得我们的英语学习更加有趣)．4．Ifpossible(如果可能的话),I'lltakepartinsocialactivitiessothatIcanknowmoreaboutthesociety(以便我能更多地了解

3、这个社会)．5．IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.Tomyjoy,theymaderapidprogressandtheirparentsthoughthighlyofme(令我高兴的是，他们进步很快而且他们的父母对我评价很高)．6．Let'sdevelopgoodhabitsofsavingenergyinourdailylifeandtrytomakemorecontributionstoourenviro

4、nment(尽力为我们的环境做出更多贡献)．在书面表达的“注意”中有明确规定：1．词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。这里既规定了词数，又指出了充实文章的方法，即“适当增加细节”。适当添加细节的具体方法如下：1．列举具体的实例进行补充说明①我要花一些时间和父母在一起。I'llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents.→I'llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents,chattingwiththemanddoingsomehou

5、sework.②我看到了一些不良行为。Ifoundsomebadbehaviours.→Ifoundsomebadbehaviours.Somepeoplescribbledonthewall;someplayedonthelawnandsomethrewrubbisheverywhere.③我是一个充满活力的健康男孩，我非常喜欢体育运动。IamahealthyboyfullofenergyandIlikesportsverymuch.→Iamahealthyboyfullofenergyand

6、Ilikesportsverymuch.WheneverIhavetime,I'llgohikingormountainclimbingwithmyclassmates.2．增添相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容①我有时去村西的小河游泳。Iwentswimmingintheriverinthewestofthevillagenowandthen.→Weatherpermitting,Iwentswimmingintheriverinthewestofthevillagenowandth

7、en,inwhichthewaterwasveryclear.②旅行了一周后，他回到了家。Afteraweek'strip,hereturnedhome.→Afteraweek'strip,hereturnedhome,tiredbuthappy.3．增添相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容①我需要好好休息，我要做些阅读。Ineedagoodrest.I'lldosomereading.→IneedagoodrestbecauseIdofeeltiredafterthehardwork

8、ofalltheseyears.I'lldosomereadingforfun,aswellasforknowledge.②慈善募集的钱将送给急需的人。Themoneyraisedforcharitywillbesenttothoseingreatneed.→Themoneyraisedforcharitywillbesenttothoseingreatneed.Thiswillnotonlyhelpthemthroughdifficulties,butalsogivethemwarmthand