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1、第1讲　合理恰当的细节根据括号内的提示完成句子1．However,itseemsthatpeoplearenotawareofthenegativeeffectsofmobilephonesoncommunication.Forexample,manypeoplebegintopaylessattentiontofacetofacecommunication(比如，很多人越来越不重视面对面的交流)．2．Atthatmoment,Ibecamethefocusofthewholeclassandwasfullofgreatprideandconfidence(充满了自豪

2、和自信)．3．IsuggestthattheteachershouldchoosemoreEnglishfilms,thusmakingEnglishlearningmoreinteresting(这样就使得我们的英语学习更加有趣)．4．Ifpossible(如果可能的话),I'lltakepartinsocialactivitiessothatIcanknowmoreaboutthesociety(以便我能更多地了解这个社会)．5．IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.Tomyjoy,

3、theymaderapidprogressandtheirparentsthoughthighlyofme(令我高兴的是，他们进步很快而且他们的父母对我评价很高)．6．Let'sdevelopgoodhabitsofsavingenergyinourdailylifeandtrytomakemorecontributionstoourenvironment(尽力为我们的环境做出更多贡献)．在试题“注意”中有明确规定：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。这里既规定了词数，又指出了充实文章的方法，即“适当增加细节”。适当添加细节的方法具体如下：1．列举

4、具体的实例进行补充说明①我要花一些时间和父母在一起。I'llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents.→I'llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents,chattingwiththemanddoingsomehousework.②我看到了一些不良行为。4/4Ifoundsomebadbehaviour.→Ifoundsomebadbehaviour.Somepeoplescribbledonthewall;someplayedonthelawnandsomethrewrubbisheverywhere.③我是一个充

5、满活力的健康男孩，我非常喜欢体育运动。IamahealthyboyfullofenergyandIlikesportsverymuch.→IamahealthyboyfullofenergyandIlikesportsverymuch.WheneverIhavetime,I'llgohikingormountainclimbingwithmyclassmates.2．增添相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容①我有时去村西的小河游泳。Iwentswimmingintheriverinthewestofthevillagenowandthen.→Weatherpe

6、rmitting,Iwentswimmingintheriverinthewestofthevillagenowandthen,inwhichthewaterwasveryclear.②旅行了一周后，他回到了家。Afteraweek'strip,hereturnedhome.→Afteraweek'strip,hereturnedhome,tiredbuthappy.3．增添相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容①我需要好好休息，我要做些阅读。Ineedagoodrest.I'lldosomereading.→IneedagoodrestbecauseIdof

7、eeltiredafterthehardworkofalltheseyears.I'lldosomereadingforfun,aswellasforknowledge.②募捐得来的钱将送给急需的人。Themoneycollectedinthecharitysalewillbesenttothoseingreatneed.→Themoneycollectedinthecharitysalewillbesenttothoseingreatneed.Thiswillnotonlyhelpthemthroughdifficulties,butalsogiv